June 4, 2023
My favorite holiday is summer after the last day of school. When you can relax in your home, without any stress. I like to sleep all day and just don’t do anything. It also is a new opportunity to do new things.
For example, currently, I study English because I want to evolve my skills. My objective, I know, is higher for me. I must surpass my weakness. The same weakness that a lot of people have. That weakness is hard to fight.
The daytimes in summer are the best when it also isn’t warm. When the sun in the afternoon enlightens your book. In addition, if it is quiet or with good music like “Here With Me”, “ Golden Hour” or “Take Me To The Sun”.
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