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What's your favorite form of exrcise?
I like "urban hiking" which means walking through interesting parts of the city instead of exercise for its own sake. I came across a mellow cafe where I can drink a good espresso the other day. I also like biking. The scene along the sea is beautiful and calm.
What's your favorite form of exrcise?
I like "urban hiking" which means walking through interesting parts of the city instead of exercise for its own sake.
The other day, I came across a mellow cafe where I can drink a good espresso the other day.
Sounds better.
I also like biking.
The sceneview along the sea is beautiful and calm.
I can't explain why "view" is better than "scene." It just sounds more natural.
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I used to do a lot of urban hiking in college. It was fun.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There weren't many corrections this time, so I was able to write it well.
I'll keep up the good work.
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What's your favorite form of exrcise? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like "urban hiking" which means walking through interesting parts of the city instead of exercise for its own sake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I came across a mellow cafe where I can drink a good espresso the other day. The other day, I came across a mellow cafe where I can drink a good espresso Sounds better. |
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I also like biking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The scene along the sea is beautiful and calm. The I can't explain why "view" is better than "scene." It just sounds more natural. |
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