March 30, 2022
What's your best advice for someone that wants to be better
The best way to recognize emotions well is that you should be honest all the time with other people. Something that you do to people will get the same feedback from people.
I don‘t believe people can recognize the emotions of other people in many situations well because you can not make people always show the real emotions as they express to you.
For example, you can’t just say “I love you.” in front of that person when you first meet her or him that you love. So you trying to show your love in smart ways like you just have a great chat with that guy and hang out with her or him. After that, you finally get your lover. And then, you guys will live together, you guys have fun, shopping hung with each other even have sex with each other, you feel another one is great, is true love in your life. And you will see the real part of each other. The boy doesn’t like to have a bath even though he has a lof sweat after doing sports. The girl doesn’t save money and has a loan from the bank for buying luxuries. You start fighting and arguing. In the end, you still love each other even though you find yourself are some bullshit. That’s love and real emotions.
What I am trying to say is you guys only can see and recognize the real emotions when you don’t care what the real emotions are. Because real emotions always happen in those situations you can control yourself to express yourself real and honest. At that time, you won’t have time to think what is the real emotions and how to recognize it.
Always keeping kind and honest.
I am James Zhou, a person always with you guys.
This is my first writing in Quora, I want to improve my English by writing some essays on a public platform.
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The best way to recognize emotions well is that you should bebeing honest all the time with other people.
Something that you do to people will get the same feedback from people.
People often will reciprocate whatever it is you do to them.
I don‘t believe people can recognize the emotions of other people in many situations well because you can not make people always show their real emotions as they express to yound feelings.
For example, you can’t just say “I love you.” in front of thata person you love when you first meet her or him that you loveim or her.
So you trying toinstead you can show your love in smart ways like you justby haveing a great chat with that guy and hang out with her or himor hanging out with your interest or loved one.
After that, you will finally get your lover.
And then, you guys will live together, you guys have fun, shopping and huang out with each other and even have sex withmake love to each other, y. You feel another one is great, is true love in your life.
Saying 'have sex' is overly blunt and devoid of emotions, it is in my opinion better suited when speaking factually or about biology. "Making love to" sounds a lot more elegant and romantic. But of course you can choose either one based on what you are trying to say.
Also, I am not sure what you mean by "you feel another one is great, is true love in your life".
In the end, you still love each other even though you find yourself arthat you have some bullshit.
What I am trying to say is you guys only can see and recognize the real emotions when you don’t care what the real emotions are.
Awesome idea!!
Because real emotions always happen in those situations where you can not control yourself to express yourself real and honest.
Always keepremaing kind and honest.
I am James Zhou, a personnd I am always withhere for you guys.
Feedback
This was funny and cute XD. I enjoyed reading it. It does have some grammatical errors, but mainly the phrases you used could take some adjustments and better stylistic choices. However if I were to edit everything that you wrote, your writing would become so different to the point that it would no longer seem like you wrote it. I think with practice you will be able to develop a way to say things in English that sound more native, and for now what you wrote is great! Keep going ;)).
March 31, 2022
And then, you guys will live together, you guys have fun, shopping and huang out with each other and even have sex withmake love to each other, y. You feel another one is great, is true love in your life.
Thank you very much for your encouragement and editing，I mean ”you feel your lover is great， is true love in your life.“
Hope you have a great day！
March 31, 2022
You are very welcome!! You too have a nice day :))
April 1, 2022
Thank you so much for your feedback and comment. I will keep going in my English learning career. I am appreciated for your encouragement and editing， Hope you are happy every day！
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What's your best advice for someone that wants to be better What's your best advice for someone What's the best advice you can give to someone who wants to be better? someone -> who something -> that |
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The best way to recognize emotions well is that you should be honest all the time with other people. The best way to recognize emotions well is |
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Something that you do to people will get the same feedback from people. Something that you do to people will get the same feedback from people. People often will reciprocate whatever it is you do to them. |
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I don‘t believe people can recognize the emotions of other people in many situations well because you can not make people always show the real emotions as they express to you. I don‘t believe people can recognize the emotions of other people in many situations well because you can not make people always show their real emotions a |
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For example, you can’t just say “I love you.” in front of that person when you first meet her or him that you love. For example, you can’t just say “I love you.” in front of |
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So you trying to show your love in smart ways like you just have a great chat with that guy and hang out with her or him. So |
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After that, you finally get your lover. After that, you will finally get your lover. |
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And then, you guys will live together, you guys have fun, shopping hung with each other even have sex with each other, you feel another one is great, is true love in your life. And then, you guys will live together, Saying 'have sex' is overly blunt and devoid of emotions, it is in my opinion better suited when speaking factually or about biology. "Making love to" sounds a lot more elegant and romantic. But of course you can choose either one based on what you are trying to say. Also, I am not sure what you mean by "you feel another one is great, is true love in your life". |
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And you will see the real part of each other. |
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The boy doesn’t like to have a bath even though he has a lof sweat after doing sports. |
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The girl doesn’t save money and has a loan from the bank for buying luxuries. |
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You start fighting and arguing. |
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In the end, you still love each other even though you find yourself are some bullshit. In the end, you still love each other even though you find |
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That’s love and real emotions. |
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What I am trying to say is you guys only can see and recognize the real emotions when you don’t care what the real emotions are. What I am trying to say is you guys only can see and recognize the real emotions when you don’t care what the real emotions are. Awesome idea!! |
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Because real emotions always happen in those situations you can control yourself to express yourself real and honest. Because real emotions always happen in th |
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At that time, you won’t have time to think what is the real emotions and how to recognize it. |
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Always keeping kind and honest. Always |
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I am James Zhou, a person always with you guys. I am James Zhou, a |
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