Nov. 11, 2023
In my free time at the weekends. I usually do some gardening work; plant vegetables, feed the fish in my small pond, and repair some wooden pieces of furniture. Occasionally, I would invite, or be invited by some friends to chat over beers or tea. Besides that, I also like to sleep if I feel tired on the latest weekdays.
What's my favorite things in free time
My favorite things to do in my free time
*You can also say "Things I like to do in my free time", "My favorite pastimes"
In my free time at the weekends.
In my free time on the weekends,
*Combine this clause with your following sentence, "In my free time on the weekends, I usually like to..."
I usually do some gardening work; plant vegetables, feed the fish in my small pond, and repair some wooden pieces of furniture.
I usually like to do some gardening, plant vegetables, feed the fish in my small pond, and/or repair wooden pieces of furniture.
*If planting veg., feeding the fish, and repairing wooden furniture are meant to elaborate on or explain your work, then this revision is better:
"I usually like to do some outdoor/gardening work: planting vegetables, feeding the fish in my small pond, and repairing wooden pieces of furniture."
Occasionally, I would invite, or be invited by some friends to chat over beers or tea.
Occasionally/On occasion, I like to invite friends over or join them for conversation over beers or tea.
Besides that, I also like to sleep if I feel tired on the latest weekdays.
I also like to catch up on sleep if I'm feeling especially tired from (working) the past week.
Feedback
Your pastimes sound lovely. I wish I had a garden and fish in a small pond to feed.
What's are my favorite things into do in my free time?
In my free time aton the weekends.,
This sentence is not a complete sentence, so it should be added to the next sentence.
I usually do some gardening work; plant vegetables, feed the fish in my small pond, and repair some wooden pieces of furniture.
Occasionally, I wouldill invite, or be invited by some friends to chat over beers or tea.
Besides that, I also like to sleep if I feel tired onfrom the latestprevious weekdays.
What's are my favorite things into do in my free time?
The wording of the original prompt is better.
In my free time at theon weekends., I usually…
It’s possible that “at the weekends” might sound natural to someone from the UK—I wouldn’t know.
This isn’t a complete sentence. Replace the period with a comma.
I usually do some gardening (work;): plant vegetables, feed the fish in my small pond, andor repair some wooden (pieces of) wooden furniture.
“Do some gardening” is more natural than “do some gardening work.”
A semicolon isn’t appropriate here. Use a colon instead.
“Repair some wooden furniture” would sound best. You don’t need “pieces of,” but if you want to keep it, move it before “wooden.”
Repairing furniture doesn’t sound like “gardening work” to me.
Occasionally, I would invite, or beam invited by, some friends to chat over beers or tea.
Use present tense for consistency with the rest of this post.
Besides that, I also like to sleep if I feel tired onfrom the latestwork weekdays.
What's my favorite things in free time What The wording of the original prompt is better. What What's my favorite things in free time My favorite things to do in my free time *You can also say "Things I like to do in my free time", "My favorite pastimes" |
In my free time at the weekends. In my free time It’s possible that “at the weekends” might sound natural to someone from the UK—I wouldn’t know. This isn’t a complete sentence. Replace the period with a comma. In my free time This sentence is not a complete sentence, so it should be added to the next sentence. In my free time at the weekends. In my free time on the weekends, *Combine this clause with your following sentence, "In my free time on the weekends, I usually like to..." |
I usually do some gardening work; plant vegetables, feed the fish in my small pond, and repair some wooden pieces of furniture. I usually do some gardening (work “Do some gardening” is more natural than “do some gardening work.” A semicolon isn’t appropriate here. Use a colon instead. “Repair some wooden furniture” would sound best. You don’t need “pieces of,” but if you want to keep it, move it before “wooden.” Repairing furniture doesn’t sound like “gardening work” to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I usually do some gardening work; plant vegetables, feed the fish in my small pond, and repair some wooden pieces of furniture. I usually like to do some gardening, plant vegetables, feed the fish in my small pond, and/or repair wooden pieces of furniture. *If planting veg., feeding the fish, and repairing wooden furniture are meant to elaborate on or explain your work, then this revision is better: "I usually like to do some outdoor/gardening work: planting vegetables, feeding the fish in my small pond, and repairing wooden pieces of furniture." |
Occasionally, I would invite, or be invited by some friends to chat over beers or tea. Occasionally, I Use present tense for consistency with the rest of this post. Occasionally, I w Occasionally, I would invite, or be invited by some friends to chat over beers or tea. Occasionally/On occasion, I like to invite friends over or join them for conversation over beers or tea. |
Besides that, I also like to sleep if I feel tired on the latest weekdays. Besides that, I also like to sleep if I feel tired Besides that, I also like to sleep if I feel tired Besides that, I also like to sleep if I feel tired on the latest weekdays. I also like to catch up on sleep if I'm feeling especially tired from (working) the past week. |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium