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helene_

July 2, 2023

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What's my favorit season?

I'm thinking, that I don't have favorite season. All of them have negatives an positives sides. For example, I will consider summer. "First side" is warm weather. It's pretty nice. As long as it's warm outside, warm-loving plants can grow. I like them.
But at the same time, as long as it's warm outside, full of insects everywhere. And it's because I can't to say, that summer is my favorite season.


Я думаю, что у меня нет любимого времени года. Все из них имеют позитивные и негативные стороны. Например, я рассмотрю лето. "Первая сторона" - это тёплая погода. Она довольно приятна. Пока на улице тепло, теплолюбивые растения могут расти. Мне они нравятся.
Но в то же время, пока тепло, везде полно насекомых. И это причина, по которой я не могу сказать, что лето является моим любимым временем года.

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What's my favourite season?

favourite (UK), favorite (US)

I'm thinking, that I don't have a favorite season.

More natural to say "I think" when you have undecided favourites. Also "seasons" are countable so we put "a" before to show it's singular.

All of them have negatives and positives sides.

"negative/positive" can be both nouns and adjectives. If you say "negativeS/postiveS" these are plural, so nouns, so there can't be a noun after it.

You can say "negatives and positives" and you can say "negative and positive sides" both are correct, but you can't combine them because then the grammar is wrong

For example, I willlet's consider summer.

Since you're explaining to a second party, using an example, its natural to say "ok let's look at this" instead of "ok let me look at this" etc

"First side"On one hand, there is warm weather.

I don't know what you mean by "first side". When comparing two things you can say "on one hand A, but on the other hand, B"

It's pretty nice.

As long as it's warm outside, warm-loving plantsplants that need warmth can grow.

The noun of warm is warmth, but this is the way I would say it just for more natural

I like them.

But at the same time, as long as it's warm outside, full ofthere are insects everywhere.

You can't use "everywhere" and "full of" together, because "everywhere" is not limited to one place, but "full of" implies that there is one place that is "full". But you can use either one or the other. I chose "everywhere" instead of "full of" because insects are usually outside and outside can't really be "full" 😆

And it's because of this that I can't to say, that summer is my favorite season.

Since you have shown with examples why summer isnt your favourite you can say "it's because of this" or "so". You also don't need a comma when the next word is "that"

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Agree with you by the way, all seasons have good sides and bad sides. I think it just depends what from the options you prefer. I hate being hot so my favourite season is winter ❄️

For example, I will consider summer.

It's pretty nice.

As long as it's warm outside, warm-loving plants can grow.

I like them.

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ucze_sie_polskiego

July 23, 2023

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Also could be written as
I’m thinking: I don’t have a favourite season.

What's my favourite season?

"favourite" in British English, "favorite" in US English

I'm thinking, that I don't have a favourite season.

All of them have negatives and positives sides.

For example, I will consider summer.

"First side" is the warm weather.

Even better: "A positive is the warm weather."

It's pretty nice.

As long as it's warm outside, warm-loving plants can grow.

But at the same time, as long as it's warm outside, it's full of insects everywhere.

And it's because of that I can't to say, that summer is my favourite season.

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I agree about the insects!

ucze_sie_polskiego's avatar
ucze_sie_polskiego

July 23, 2023

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I'm thinking, that I don't have a favourite season.

Also could be written as
I’m thinking: I don’t have a favourite season.

What's my favorit season?


What's my favourite season?

"favourite" in British English, "favorite" in US English

What's my favourite season?

favourite (UK), favorite (US)

I'm thinking, that I don't have favorite season.


I'm thinking, that I don't have a favourite season.

I'm thinking, that I don't have a favorite season.

More natural to say "I think" when you have undecided favourites. Also "seasons" are countable so we put "a" before to show it's singular.

All of them have negatives an positives sides.


All of them have negatives and positives sides.

All of them have negatives and positives sides.

"negative/positive" can be both nouns and adjectives. If you say "negativeS/postiveS" these are plural, so nouns, so there can't be a noun after it. You can say "negatives and positives" and you can say "negative and positive sides" both are correct, but you can't combine them because then the grammar is wrong

For example, I will consider summer.


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For example, I willlet's consider summer.

Since you're explaining to a second party, using an example, its natural to say "ok let's look at this" instead of "ok let me look at this" etc

"First side" is warm weather.


"First side" is the warm weather.

Even better: "A positive is the warm weather."

"First side"On one hand, there is warm weather.

I don't know what you mean by "first side". When comparing two things you can say "on one hand A, but on the other hand, B"

It's pretty nice.


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As long as it's warm outside, warm-loving plants can grow.


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As long as it's warm outside, warm-loving plantsplants that need warmth can grow.

The noun of warm is warmth, but this is the way I would say it just for more natural

I like them.


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But at the same time, as long as it's warm outside, full of insects everywhere.


But at the same time, as long as it's warm outside, it's full of insects everywhere.

But at the same time, as long as it's warm outside, full ofthere are insects everywhere.

You can't use "everywhere" and "full of" together, because "everywhere" is not limited to one place, but "full of" implies that there is one place that is "full". But you can use either one or the other. I chose "everywhere" instead of "full of" because insects are usually outside and outside can't really be "full" 😆

And it's because I can't to say, that summer is my favorite season.


And it's because of that I can't to say, that summer is my favourite season.

And it's because of this that I can't to say, that summer is my favorite season.

Since you have shown with examples why summer isnt your favourite you can say "it's because of this" or "so". You also don't need a comma when the next word is "that"

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