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TOMO_o

Feb. 13, 2025

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What's In Your Fridge Right Now?

I have some energy drink in my fridge. Recently I often go to business trip far away. So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

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I have some energy drink in my fridge.

Recently, I often go tohave been frequently going on business trips that are far away.

So I need to get enough nutrition and energy as quickly and efficiently as possible.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 18, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

What's In Your Fridge Right Now?

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

drink -> drinks: "some" implies a plural

Recently I often go to've been going on long business trip far aways.

I often go -> I have been going: tense change.

Recently, I've been going... ◎
I often go on business trips far away ◎
Recently, I often go... X
I often go recently... X


to -> on: Go *on* business trips, not to

"long" business trips implies trips far away.

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

So -> []: I correct entries sentence by sentence, and not the entire entry entirely as it would be too complicated. That said, this sentence would work much better if appended to the previous. See the overall feedback.*

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Great English!

*Recently I've been going on long business trips, so I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

more natural way to say it: I've been on long business trips lately, so I need to get energy fast.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.It's very encouraging.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

Recently I often go ton far away business trip far aways.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

Recently I often go ton business trips far away.

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Great work !

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TOMO_o

Feb. 14, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

What's Iin Your Fridge Right Now?

"in"などのprepositionはあまり頭文字ではありません。

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

"some"は複数なので、"drinks"も複数になります。

Recently, I often go to've been going on business trips far away so I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

米国の英語でこのの方が自然です。

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

上の文に加えました。

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よくできました!気をつけて下さいね。

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TOMO_o

Feb. 14, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

What's In Your Fridge Right Now?

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

Or I have AN energy drink...

RecentlyAt this time, I often go ton business trips far away.

"Recently" only works here if you only went on one business trip "Recently, I went on a business trip far away". Since this seems to be something you do regularly, you need to change it to "At this time", "These days", or change the phrase to say something like "I've recently been travelling a lot for business"

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

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Well done!

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TOMO_o

Feb. 14, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

If you have more than one drink, indicated by "some" then drinks needs to be plural.

RecentlyThese days I often go to business trip far away.

Recently indicates a single event, "these days" can better communicate its a frequent / ongoing event.

So I need to get nutrition anduse the drinks to get energy quickly and efficiently for these business trips.

Do energy drinks typically have nutrition?

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Fantastic work!

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TOMO_o

Feb. 14, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

What's In Your Fridge Right Now?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What's Iin Your Fridge Right Now?

"in"などのprepositionはあまり頭文字ではありません。

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have some energy drink in my fridge.


I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

If you have more than one drink, indicated by "some" then drinks needs to be plural.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

Or I have AN energy drink...

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

"some"は複数なので、"drinks"も複数になります。

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

drink -> drinks: "some" implies a plural

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Recently I often go to business trip far away.


RecentlyThese days I often go to business trip far away.

Recently indicates a single event, "these days" can better communicate its a frequent / ongoing event.

RecentlyAt this time, I often go ton business trips far away.

"Recently" only works here if you only went on one business trip "Recently, I went on a business trip far away". Since this seems to be something you do regularly, you need to change it to "At this time", "These days", or change the phrase to say something like "I've recently been travelling a lot for business"

Recently, I often go to've been going on business trips far away so I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

米国の英語でこのの方が自然です。

Recently I often go ton business trips far away.

Recently I often go ton far away business trip far aways.

Recently I often go to've been going on long business trip far aways.

I often go -> I have been going: tense change. Recently, I've been going... ◎ I often go on business trips far away ◎ Recently, I often go... X I often go recently... X to -> on: Go *on* business trips, not to "long" business trips implies trips far away.

Recently, I often go tohave been frequently going on business trips that are far away.

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.


So I need to get nutrition anduse the drinks to get energy quickly and efficiently for these business trips.

Do energy drinks typically have nutrition?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

上の文に加えました。

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

So -> []: I correct entries sentence by sentence, and not the entire entry entirely as it would be too complicated. That said, this sentence would work much better if appended to the previous. See the overall feedback.*

So I need to get enough nutrition and energy as quickly and efficiently as possible.

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