Feb. 13, 2025
I have some energy drink in my fridge. Recently I often go to business trip far away. So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.
I have some energy drink in my fridge.
Recently, I often go tohave been frequently going on business trips that are far away.
So I need to get enough nutrition and energy as quickly and efficiently as possible.
What's In Your Fridge Right Now?
I have some energy drinks in my fridge.
drink -> drinks: "some" implies a plural
Recently I often go to've been going on long business trip far aways.
I often go -> I have been going: tense change.
Recently, I've been going... ◎
I often go on business trips far away ◎
Recently, I often go... X
I often go recently... X
to -> on: Go *on* business trips, not to
"long" business trips implies trips far away.
So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.
So -> []: I correct entries sentence by sentence, and not the entire entry entirely as it would be too complicated. That said, this sentence would work much better if appended to the previous. See the overall feedback.*
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Great English!
*Recently I've been going on long business trips, so I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.
more natural way to say it: I've been on long business trips lately, so I need to get energy fast.
I have some energy drinks in my fridge.
Recently I often go ton far away business trip far aways.
I have some energy drinks in my fridge.
Recently I often go ton business trips far away.
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Great work !
What's Iin Your Fridge Right Now?
"in"などのprepositionはあまり頭文字ではありません。
I have some energy drinks in my fridge.
"some"は複数なので、"drinks"も複数になります。
Recently, I often go to've been going on business trips far away so I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.
米国の英語でこのの方が自然です。
So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.
上の文に加えました。
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よくできました!気をつけて下さいね。
What's In Your Fridge Right Now?
I have some energy drinks in my fridge.
Or I have AN energy drink...
RecentlyAt this time, I often go ton business trips far away.
"Recently" only works here if you only went on one business trip "Recently, I went on a business trip far away". Since this seems to be something you do regularly, you need to change it to "At this time", "These days", or change the phrase to say something like "I've recently been travelling a lot for business"
So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.
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Well done!
I have some energy drinks in my fridge.
If you have more than one drink, indicated by "some" then drinks needs to be plural.
RecentlyThese days I often go to business trip far away.
Recently indicates a single event, "these days" can better communicate its a frequent / ongoing event.
So I need to get nutrition anduse the drinks to get energy quickly and efficiently for these business trips.
Do energy drinks typically have nutrition?
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Fantastic work!
What's In Your Fridge Right Now? This sentence has been marked as perfect! What's "in"などのprepositionはあまり頭文字ではありません。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I have some energy drink in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge. If you have more than one drink, indicated by "some" then drinks needs to be plural. I have some energy drinks in my fridge. Or I have AN energy drink... I have some energy drinks in my fridge. "some"は複数なので、"drinks"も複数になります。 I have some energy drinks in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge. drink -> drinks: "some" implies a plural This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Recently I often go to business trip far away.
Recently indicates a single event, "these days" can better communicate its a frequent / ongoing event.
"Recently" only works here if you only went on one business trip "Recently, I went on a business trip far away". Since this seems to be something you do regularly, you need to change it to "At this time", "These days", or change the phrase to say something like "I've recently been travelling a lot for business" Recently, I 米国の英語でこのの方が自然です。
Recently I often go Recently I I often go -> I have been going: tense change. Recently, I've been going... ◎ I often go on business trips far away ◎ Recently, I often go... X I often go recently... X to -> on: Go *on* business trips, not to "long" business trips implies trips far away. Recently, I |
So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently. So I Do energy drinks typically have nutrition? This sentence has been marked as perfect!
上の文に加えました。
So -> []: I correct entries sentence by sentence, and not the entire entry entirely as it would be too complicated. That said, this sentence would work much better if appended to the previous. See the overall feedback.* So I need to get enough nutrition and energy as quickly and efficiently as possible. |
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