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What's In My Room?
My room is around 7.5m2
By the window, there's a shelf book and a keyboard (piano).
On the bookshelf, mostly there are fiction books, I quite like reading sometimes.
A bo'ohw'o'wo'er, my medicin, earplugs, keys, wallet etc. basically my stuff.
On my keyboard, it has... my keyboard, of course nothing on that.
But sometimes i gotta put some ramdom stuffs on it if I'm lazy as hell.
Next to is my desk, my workspace.
Which I have all of my devices, phone, laptop, tablet.
Accessories like external keyboard, mouse etc.
Opposite is my bed, when I feel tired, exhausted, just turned around 180, I will see my bed, just get onto that, lie down after a day.
There's a pillow, a blanket, and a Kindle for reading books, both fiction and non-fiction.
Oh, and almost like in center of my room is a stand fan, hmm, yeah that's it.
There's nothing to talk about that xD
Also next to my bathroom is a closet, but I put all of my stuff into it.
And a Wall-mounted coat rack, which has hooks to hang clothes and accessories.
(Do you find any words better than Wall-mounted coat rack)
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Good work! Some unnecessary filler words, but you included nice detail. You just need to clean up the grammar.
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I learned it's "bottle of water" for bo'ohw'o'wo'er haha
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But sometimes i gottaI put some ramndom stuffs on it if I'm too lazy as hell.
Next to is my desk, is my workspace.
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Accessories like external keyboard, mouse etc.
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Also next to my bathroom is a closet, but I put all of my stuff into it.
And a Wwall-mounted coat rack, which has hooks to hang clothes and accessories.
(Do you find any words better than Wall-mounted coat rack)
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Oh, and almost like in center of my room is a stand fan, hmm, yeah that's it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Oh, and |
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On the bookshelf, mostly there are fiction books, I quite like reading sometimes. On the bookshelf,
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On my keyboard, it has... my keyboard, of course nothing on that. On my keyboard, it has... my keyboard, of course nothing
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But sometimes i gotta put some ramdom stuffs on it if I'm lazy as hell. But sometimes
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Next to is my desk, my workspace. Next to is my desk
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Which I have all of my devices, phone, laptop, tablet. Which I have all of my devices
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Accessories like external keyboard, mouse etc. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Accessories like external keyboard, mouse etc. include in above sentence |
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And a Wall-mounted coat rack, which has hooks to hang clothes and accessories. And a
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