yesterday
What's in my mind now?
I got an E-bike from my younger brother about two months ago so that I had not to walk to company every day.
To be honest,It really makes me happy for owning a vehicle like this. I can go to everywhere I want.
As for him,my brother,why he got home is because he making a new girlfriend who working at home.
He is good at making something delicious food.I can see a lot of pictures from his moments about kitchen and food.
It's exhausted after working.
The first thing is taking a shower when I returned home.
And I would fall asleep quickly after my hair getting dry.
Learning English is the only thing I would do when I wake up again.
What's ion my mind now?
I got an E-bike from my younger brother about two months ago, so that I had notdon't have to walk to companywork every day.
To be honest,It reallyHonestly, it makes me really happy forto owning a vehicle like this.
Honestly sounds more natural than 'to be honest' in this context
I can go to everanywhere I want.
everywhere is fine but anywhere sounds more natural
As for him,my brother,why he got home is because he making a new girlfriend who working at home...
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
He is good at making something delicious food.
Alternatively: He makes delicious food.
I can see a lot of pictures from his moments about kitchen and food.
I see a lot of his pictures, memories from his kitchen and of food.
It's exhausted after working.
I'm exhausted after working.
The first thing is taking a shower when I returned home.
The first thing I'd do after getting home is take a shower.
And I would fall asleep quickly after my hair getting dry.
Learning English is the only thing I would do when I'd do after wakeing up again.
Or "waking up the next day"
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Good job! I think I got the gist of what you were trying to say. The only time I got confused is when you talked about your brother and his girlfriend. Also, some of the transitions could be clearer: the transition to your brother and to you getting home to shower.
What's ion my mind now?
I got an E-bike from my younger brother about two months ago so that I had notdon't have to walk to companywork every day.
To be honest,I it really makes me happy forto owning a vehicle like this.
I can go to everanywhere I want.
As for him,my brother,why he gotcame back home is because he makingde a new girlfriend who workings at home.
He is good at making something delicious food.
I can see a lot of pictures from his moments aboutin the kitchen and making food.
It's'm exhausted after working.
The first thing I do is takinge a shower when I returnedcome home.
And I would fall asleep quickly after my hair gettingbecomes dry.
Learning English is the only thing I would do when I wake up again.
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Very good English
What's ion my mind now?
I got an E-bike from my younger brother about two months ago so that I had notdidn't have to walk to companywork every day.
To be honest,I it really makes me happy forto owning a vehicle like this.
I can go to everywhere I want.
As for him,my brother,why he gois at home is because he makinggot a new girlfriend who working ats from home.
He is good at making something delicious food.
I can see a lot of pictures from his moments about kitchen and foodhis cooking and food pictures.
It's'm exhausted after working.
The first thing is taking a shower when I returned home.
And I would fall asleep quickly after my hair getting drydries.
Learning English is the only thing I would do when I wake up again.
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Great job! Easy to understand.
What's ion my mMind nNow?
I got an E-bike from my younger brother about two months ago so that I hadid not have to walk to companywork every day.
To be honest,I it really makes me happy forto owning a vehicle like this.
I can go to everanywhere I want to.
As for him, my brother, why he got home is because he makinghas a new girlfriend who working ats from home.
He is good at making something delicious food.
I can see a lot of pictures from his moments about the kitchen and the food.
It's exhausteding after working.
The first thing is taking a shower when I returned home.
And I would fall asleep quickly after my hair gettings dry.
Learning English is the only thing I would do when I waoke up again.
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