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SonDepTrai21st

July 10, 2025

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What's in my iPhone?

I'm the type of minimalism guy.

My wallpaper is completely black.

Goes into my homescreen is only 2 widgets, the today view of Fantastical, and the today view of Things app.

And a habit tracker app called Productive, which I only track my simple habits, usually only 1-2 habits at once.

In the dock, it has Safari, Fantastical, Things, and Apple Notes, the 4 major apps I use in my life.

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What's ion my iPhone?

I'm the type ofa minimalismt type of guy.

My wallpaper is completely black.

Goes into my homescreen isThere are only 2 widgets, the todaily view of Fantastical, and the todaily view of the Things app. on my home screen

And a habit tracker app called Productive, which I use only to track my simple habits, usually only 1-2 habits at once.

In the dock, it hasthere are Safari, Fantastical, Things, and Apple Notes, the 4 major apps I use in my life.

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Good writing!

I'm the type of minimalism guy.

i dont think "the" here is suitable , "a" is way more suitable here
hope that helps

Goes into mMy homescreen ihas only 2two widgets,: the tToday view of Fantastical, and the tToday view of the Things app.

Goes means going, which is used to show movement

And a habit tracker app called Productive, which I"USE to" only track my simple habits, usually "only" 1-2 habits at once.

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hey! if you are not a native english speaker i think you did pretty good job with this i tried help the way i can i am sorry if it wasn't helpful
but for a suggestion : start watching english shows they would be a major upgrade

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SonDepTrai21st

July 11, 2025

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Yeah, I would definitely watching english shows xD

Tks for your suggestion

My wallpaper is completely black.


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Goes into my homescreen is only 2 widgets, the today view of Fantastical, and the today view of Things app.


Goes into mMy homescreen ihas only 2two widgets,: the tToday view of Fantastical, and the tToday view of the Things app.

Goes means going, which is used to show movement

Goes into my homescreen isThere are only 2 widgets, the todaily view of Fantastical, and the todaily view of the Things app. on my home screen

And a habit tracker app called Productive, which I only track my simple habits, usually only 1-2 habits at once.


And a habit tracker app called Productive, which I"USE to" only track my simple habits, usually "only" 1-2 habits at once.

And a habit tracker app called Productive, which I use only to track my simple habits, usually only 1-2 habits at once.

In the dock, it has Safari, Fantastical, Things, and Apple Notes, the 4 major apps I use in my life.


In the dock, it hasthere are Safari, Fantastical, Things, and Apple Notes, the 4 major apps I use in my life.

What's in my iPhone?


What's ion my iPhone?

I'm the type of minimalism guy.


I'm the type of minimalism guy.

i dont think "the" here is suitable , "a" is way more suitable here hope that helps

I'm the type ofa minimalismt type of guy.

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