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naho2863

Aug. 24, 2022

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I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general don't melt from the summer heat.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.
And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that.

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I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without getting sunburninged and in general don't melt from the summer heat.

Summer has its advantages and there are funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.

And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that.

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I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning, and in general, I don't melt from the summer heat.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.

And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that.

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I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general don't melt from the summer heat.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house stay indoors.

And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that.

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I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that(which I love), stay outside without burninggetting sunburnt/burnt and in general I don't melt from the summer heat.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.

And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don'tthat’s not something I worry about that.

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I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general don't melt from the summer heat.


I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that(which I love), stay outside without burninggetting sunburnt/burnt and in general I don't melt from the summer heat.

I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning and in general don't melt from the summer heat.

I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without burning, and in general, I don't melt from the summer heat.

I definitely prefer winter, because I can use my soft blankets, drink hot chocolate that I love, stay outside without getting sunburninged and in general don't melt from the summer heat.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.


Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house stay indoors.

Summer has its advantages and funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.

Summer has its advantages and there are funny things to do, but most of the time I'm in my house.

And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don't worry about that.


And I can eat cold things like ice cream in winter too, so I don'tthat’s not something I worry about that.

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