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June 29, 2025

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What wouldyou do if you were invisible?

I would probably sneak backyard of my favorite restaurant and research recipe. Ratatouille is my favorite food in particular at the restaurant but I can't cook like that. That's the extent of my imagination. What do you want to do?

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What would you do if you were invisible?

I would probably sneak into the backyard of my favorite restaurant and research their recipe.

I would use "sneak into the..." as it has the feeling of infiltration. Like a ninja.
"Backyard" gets the point across but I think just "back" or "back alley" of the restaurant sounds more natural. Backyard has more of a "lawn, swimming pool, behind-the-house" feel to it.

Ratatouille, particularly, is my favorite food in particulardish at theat restaurant but I can't cook like thatey can.

I would use "dish" over "food" when you're talking about a single prepared menu item.
And this sentence structure has a more natural flow in my opinion.

That's the extent of my imagination.

What do you want towould you do?

You're restating the original question, "What would you do (if you were in visible)?"

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Terrific! Easy to understand and a fun topic!
Keep it up

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TOMO_o

June 29, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Your detailed explanation will help me understand better next time.

I would probably sneak into the backyard of my favorite restaurant and research their recipe.

Backyard, an object, needs an article.

Recipe, another object, also needs an article. You can just use "the" again, but I used "their," which is better because it's more clear.

If you want words in place of 'research', you could say "steal," "copy," "memorise,"

Ratatouille, in particular, is my favorite food in particular at theat that restaurant, but I can't cook like thatem.

Because you've already introduced the restaurant, it makes more sense to say THAT restaurant, instead of just the restaurant.

I can't cook like that is okay, but them is better because it's clearer.

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TOMO_o

June 29, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Your detailed explanation will help me understand better next time.

What would you do if you were invisible?

I would probably sneak out to the backyard of my favorite restaurant and research a recipe.

Ratatouille is my favorite food indish, particularly at theis restaurant but I can't it cook like that.

That's the extent of my imagination.

What wouldo you want to do?

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TOMO_o

June 29, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

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What would you do if you were invisible?

I would probably sneak to the backyard of my favorite restaurant and research their recipes.

Ratatouille is my favorite food in particular at the restaurant, but I can't cook like thate restaurants can.

That's the extent of my imagination.

What wouldo you want to do?

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Wonderful!

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TOMO_o

June 29, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

What do you want to do?


What wouldo you want to do?

What wouldo you want to do?

What do you want towould you do?

You're restating the original question, "What would you do (if you were in visible)?"

What wouldyou do if you were invisible?


What would you do if you were invisible?

What would you do if you were invisible?

What would you do if you were invisible?

I would probably sneak backyard of my favorite restaurant and research recipe.


I would probably sneak to the backyard of my favorite restaurant and research their recipes.

I would probably sneak out to the backyard of my favorite restaurant and research a recipe.

I would probably sneak into the backyard of my favorite restaurant and research their recipe.

Backyard, an object, needs an article. Recipe, another object, also needs an article. You can just use "the" again, but I used "their," which is better because it's more clear. If you want words in place of 'research', you could say "steal," "copy," "memorise,"

I would probably sneak into the backyard of my favorite restaurant and research their recipe.

I would use "sneak into the..." as it has the feeling of infiltration. Like a ninja. "Backyard" gets the point across but I think just "back" or "back alley" of the restaurant sounds more natural. Backyard has more of a "lawn, swimming pool, behind-the-house" feel to it.

Ratatouille is my favorite food in particular at the restaurant but I can't cook like that.


Ratatouille is my favorite food in particular at the restaurant, but I can't cook like thate restaurants can.

Ratatouille is my favorite food indish, particularly at theis restaurant but I can't it cook like that.

Ratatouille, in particular, is my favorite food in particular at theat that restaurant, but I can't cook like thatem.

Because you've already introduced the restaurant, it makes more sense to say THAT restaurant, instead of just the restaurant. I can't cook like that is okay, but them is better because it's clearer.

Ratatouille, particularly, is my favorite food in particulardish at theat restaurant but I can't cook like thatey can.

I would use "dish" over "food" when you're talking about a single prepared menu item. And this sentence structure has a more natural flow in my opinion.

That's the extent of my imagination.


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