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Aug. 5, 2023

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What weather do you like

It's а tough question
I don't like sunny weather because it's usually boiling hot. I don't like it. I love cloudy and windy weather. it isn't hot.
Indeed, I can't stand snowing weather, because i must cleaned my house's outdoors, but i like rain. I don't know why.
I think, rainy weather has a mystery vibe. And i like thunderstorm. I adore to photograph a lightning, but thunder often sounds very loud. By the way, my dog doesn't like thunderstorms.. my dog is afraid it

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It's а tough question.
I don't like sunny weather because it's usually boiling hot.

I don't like it.

I love cloudy and windy weather. / I love it when it's cloudy and windy.

it isn't hot.

Indeed, I can't stand snowingy weather, because iI must cleaned my house's outdoors the outside of my house, but iI like rain.

I don't think we say "house's outdoors."

I don't know why.

I think, rainy weather has a mysteryious vibe.

And iI like thunderstorms.

I adore to photograph aing lightning, but thunder often sounds very loud.

By the way, my dog doesn't like thunderstorms.. mMy dog is afraid itof them.

What wWeather dDo yYou lLike?

Important words in title have capital letters. Question so needs question mark.

It's а tough question.
I don't like sunny weather because it's usually boiling hot.

Need a full stop between the two sentences.

I don't like it.

I love cloudy and windy weather.

iIt isn't hot.

Sentences start with a capital letter.

Indeed, I can't stand snowingy weather, because iI must cleaned my house's outdoors the outside of my house, but iI like rain.

Do not think you need the "indeed". "snowy weather" is the phrase. "I must clean" with must you use the infinitive minus the "to" part. First person singular pronoun is "I" i.e. capitalised. It is "the outside of my house". "Outdoors" is not part of your house. So "the dog is outdoors".

I don't know why.

I think, rainy weather has a mysteryious vibe.

Don't need the comma. The adjective is "mysterious". Run into next sentence.

Aand iI like thunderstorms.

To describe generally liking something use the plural. "I like thunderstorms", "I like dogs", "I like children".

I adore to photograph aing lightning, but thunder often sounds very loud.

Use the present participle after "adore" not the infinitive form. Lightning is uncountable in English so no indefinite article. A single instance is "a bolt of lightning" or "a flash of lightning".

BMy the way, my dogdog, however, doesn't like thunderstorms.. my dog He is afraid itof them.

Think it sounds more natural this way. Phrase "to be afraid of X". "thunderstorms" is plural so pronoun is "them" in this instance.

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Good work. Mostly correct.

What weather do you like


What wWeather dDo yYou lLike?

Important words in title have capital letters. Question so needs question mark.

It's а tough question I don't like sunny weather because it's usually boiling hot.


It's а tough question.
I don't like sunny weather because it's usually boiling hot.

Need a full stop between the two sentences.

It's а tough question.
I don't like sunny weather because it's usually boiling hot.

I don't like it.


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I love cloudy and windy weather.


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I love cloudy and windy weather. / I love it when it's cloudy and windy.

it isn't hot.


iIt isn't hot.

Sentences start with a capital letter.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Indeed, I can't stand snowing weather, because i must cleaned my house's outdoors, but i like rain.


Indeed, I can't stand snowingy weather, because iI must cleaned my house's outdoors the outside of my house, but iI like rain.

Do not think you need the "indeed". "snowy weather" is the phrase. "I must clean" with must you use the infinitive minus the "to" part. First person singular pronoun is "I" i.e. capitalised. It is "the outside of my house". "Outdoors" is not part of your house. So "the dog is outdoors".

Indeed, I can't stand snowingy weather, because iI must cleaned my house's outdoors the outside of my house, but iI like rain.

I don't think we say "house's outdoors."

I don't know why.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think, rainy weather has a mystery vibe.


I think, rainy weather has a mysteryious vibe.

Don't need the comma. The adjective is "mysterious". Run into next sentence.

I think, rainy weather has a mysteryious vibe.

And i like thunderstorm.


Aand iI like thunderstorms.

To describe generally liking something use the plural. "I like thunderstorms", "I like dogs", "I like children".

And iI like thunderstorms.

I adore to photograph a lightning, but thunder often sounds very loud.


I adore to photograph aing lightning, but thunder often sounds very loud.

Use the present participle after "adore" not the infinitive form. Lightning is uncountable in English so no indefinite article. A single instance is "a bolt of lightning" or "a flash of lightning".

I adore to photograph aing lightning, but thunder often sounds very loud.

By the way, my dog doesn't like thunderstorms.. my dog is afraid it


BMy the way, my dogdog, however, doesn't like thunderstorms.. my dog He is afraid itof them.

Think it sounds more natural this way. Phrase "to be afraid of X". "thunderstorms" is plural so pronoun is "them" in this instance.

By the way, my dog doesn't like thunderstorms.. mMy dog is afraid itof them.

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