May 29, 2025
What was your childfood dream?
I wanted to travel all around the world and see a lot of beautiful sceneries. I can also see those on TV, but I think it's totally different from views with my own eyes. I will start from closer places like Asia. I want to go to Europe as well, but it's too costly.
I wanted to travel all around the world and see a lots of beautiful sceneriesy.
"Sceneries" isn't a word that's used.
IYou can also see thoseat on TV of course, but I think it's totally different from viewsseeing it with myour own eyes.
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You need to put in "home" as otherwise no-one knows where you are "closer" to.
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Well done. Keep it up!
May 29, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction. Your easy-to-understand explanation is very helpful.
What was your childfhood dream?
I wanted to travel all around the world and see a lots of beautiful sceneriesy.
I can also see thosewatch videos of them on TV, but I think it's totally different from viewsseeing it with my own eyes.
I will start from closer, in places like Asia.
And I want to go to Europe as well, but it's too costlyexpensive.
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I understood this all, but I made some corrections to sound a bit more natural. Great job.
May 29, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
What was your cChildfhood dDream?
I can also see thosee ones on TV, but I think it's totally different from viewsseeing it with my own eyes.
I will start fromwith closer places like Asia.
I want to go to Europe as well, but it's too costly.
May 29, 2025
Thank you for the careful correction.
What wWas yYour cChildfhood dDream?
I wanted to travel all around the world and see a lot of beautiful sceneriesy.
I can also see those on TV, but I think it'’s totally different from viewsseeing them with my own eyes.
I will start from places closer placesto me, like Asia.
I want to go to Europe as well, but it's too costly.
May 29, 2025
Thank you for the careful correction.
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