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What was the scariest movie you have ever seen?
Although I usually avoid horror movies, I'm scared of Japanese horror movies in which long hair ghost appear. On the other hand, I'm not scared of zombie movies at all like Resident Evil. In the same way, I prefer horror action games instead of simple horror games.
What was the scariest movie you have ever seen?
Although I usually avoid horror movies, I'm scared of Japanese horror movies in which long -haired ghosts appear.
A note that this sentence feels a bit unnatural to me because the two clauses do not contrast with each other. If you usually avoid horror movies, then it makes sense that there would be ones you find scary - so here "although" doesn't make much sense.
On the other hand, I'm not scared of zombie movies at all like Resident Evil at all.
It's best not to split the phrase "zombie movies like Resident Evil", so "at all" works best at the end of this sentence.
In the same way, I prefer horror actionaction horror games instead of simple horror games.
It's difficult to explain, but "action" feels like it should come before "horror". It's not super important, and people will understand what you mean with the sentence like it is, but this is what feels most natural to me.
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Good job!
I enjoy cosmic and gothic horror like in Bloodborne. I also really enjoy survival horror games like Silent Hill, or Signalis.
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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me natural-sounding expressions, which is helpful for my studies.
This time I was able to clearly express what I wanted to say and write simple sentences, so I don't think it was bad.
Although I usually avoid horror movies, I'm scared of Japanese horror movies in which long -haired ghosts appear.
On the other hand, I'm not scared at all of zombie movies at all like Resident Evil.
You can put titles of movies in italics or in quotations, i.e.: ". . . movies like "Resident Evil."
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Horror films/media are my jam, I absolutely love them. They are my preferred movies to watch.
I was recently watching 光るが死んだ夏 and there's a long-haired ghost in it, FYI. The long-haired ghost is such a popular image in Japan and I'm not sure why it's found so scary! Watching horror from different cultures really gives you a sense of what the culture finds frightening!
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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
This time I was able to clearly express what I wanted to say and write simple sentences, so I don't think it was bad.
It's true, it's strange that Western horror movies don't seem very scary.
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In the same way, I prefer horror action games instead of simple horror games. In the same way, I prefer It's difficult to explain, but "action" feels like it should come before "horror". It's not super important, and people will understand what you mean with the sentence like it is, but this is what feels most natural to me. |
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