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TOMO_o

Feb. 12, 2025

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What Was The Last Movie You Saw?

The last film I watched was "Mononoke". It is Japanese horror animation movie. Color is very vibrant and story is mysterious. I am looking forward to second series!

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The last film I watched was "Mononoke"."

It is a Japanese horror animation movie.

Color isThe colors are very vibrant and the story is mysterious.

I am looking forward to the second series!

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Great work!

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TOMO_o

Feb. 14, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

It is an animated Japanese horror animation movie.

This order of the adjectives on movie flow more naturally.

Color iIt has very vibrant and story iscolors and a mysterious. story.

English sentences need a subject to do the verb (It). When switching to this construction, flow can be maintained by having the adjectives describe the nouns without 'is' between them.

I am looking forward to second seriesthe sequel!

We say that a movie and its additional films make up a 'series', but the next entry in a series would be the 'sequel'.

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I had to look it up, but this movie sounds really neat! Thank you for sharing.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 13, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

It iswas a Japanese horror animation movie.

The Color iwas very vibrant and the story iwas mysterious.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 13, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

The last film I watched was "Mononoke".

It is a Japanese horror animation movie.

CThe color is very vibrant and the story is mysterious.

This sounds strange without the 'the's

I am looking forward to the second series!

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Make sure to include 'the'!

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TOMO_o

Feb. 13, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

What Was The Last Movie You Saw?

The last film I watched was "Mononoke".

It is a Japanese horror animation movie.

Color isThe colors are very vibrant and the story is mysterious.

I am looking forward to a second series!

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Well done - you are just missing a few articles :-)

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TOMO_o

Feb. 13, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

What Was The Last Movie You Saw?


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The last film I watched was "Mononoke".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The last film I watched was "Mononoke"."

It is Japanese horror animation movie.


It is a Japanese horror animation movie.

It is a Japanese horror animation movie.

It iswas a Japanese horror animation movie.

It is an animated Japanese horror animation movie.

This order of the adjectives on movie flow more naturally.

It is a Japanese horror animation movie.

Color is very vibrant and story is mysterious.


Color isThe colors are very vibrant and the story is mysterious.

CThe color is very vibrant and the story is mysterious.

This sounds strange without the 'the's

The Color iwas very vibrant and the story iwas mysterious.

Color iIt has very vibrant and story iscolors and a mysterious. story.

English sentences need a subject to do the verb (It). When switching to this construction, flow can be maintained by having the adjectives describe the nouns without 'is' between them.

Color isThe colors are very vibrant and the story is mysterious.

I am looking forward to second series!


I am looking forward to a second series!

I am looking forward to the second series!

I am looking forward to second seriesthe sequel!

We say that a movie and its additional films make up a 'series', but the next entry in a series would be the 'sequel'.

I am looking forward to the second series!

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