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TOMO_o

Jan. 22, 2025

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What was the last book you read?

The last book I read was a novel. It's "Shining". I don't usually read book, but I found it by chance at the book store. Once I start reading, couldn't stop reading.

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What was the last book you read?

The last book I read was a novel.

It's called "Shining".

I don't usually read books, but I found it by chance at the book store.

Once I started reading, couldn't stop reading.

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Good job!

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TOMO_o

Jan. 25, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

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lilyanne

Feb. 10, 2025

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Of course!

What was the last book you read?

The last book I read was a novel.

It's "Shining"called, “Shining,” (by author).

I don't usually read books, but I found it by chancerandomly at thea book store.

Since you didn't specify a specific book store, use an indefinite article, a, instead of a definite article, the.

Once I start reading, couldI can't stop reading.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 25, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

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marblemenow

Jan. 25, 2025

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You're welcome.

What was the last book you read?

The last book I read was a novel.

It's called "Shining".

I don't usually read books, but I found it by chance at the book store.

A better formulation would be " I came across it by chance" rather than I found it by chance.

Once I started reading, couldn't stop reading.

It sounded like this is something you did in the past, so I changed your verb to startED, past tense. If you meant to say that this happens to you regularly, the phrase would be "Once I start reading, I CAN'T stop"

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Well done. So, did you enjoy the book? I haven't read it.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 25, 2025

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Thank you for your careful corrections.
It was very interesting.

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It's "Shining".


It's called "Shining".

It's "Shining"called, “Shining,” (by author).

It's called "Shining".

I don't usually read book, but I found it by chance at the book store.


I don't usually read books, but I found it by chance at the book store.

A better formulation would be " I came across it by chance" rather than I found it by chance.

I don't usually read books, but I found it by chancerandomly at thea book store.

Since you didn't specify a specific book store, use an indefinite article, a, instead of a definite article, the.

I don't usually read books, but I found it by chance at the book store.

Once I start reading, couldn't stop reading.


Once I started reading, couldn't stop reading.

It sounded like this is something you did in the past, so I changed your verb to startED, past tense. If you meant to say that this happens to you regularly, the phrase would be "Once I start reading, I CAN'T stop"

Once I start reading, couldI can't stop reading.

Once I started reading, couldn't stop reading.

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