Oct. 9, 2021
What To Do On The Internet
The thing I like the most is the internet.
With the function, I am able to do tons of things.
First, I can search information what I want to know.
It is very helpful when I want to find a restaurant during traveling abroad.
Translation is also easy to do on the internet.
Next, I can see many videos whenever I want to see.
So there is no need to wait the time when broadcasting the content on TV.
I am able to see old videos which are hard to see.
With the old videos, I can remind my good old days.
What else, I can listen to music with many live streaming services.
Plus, I can store my photo and documents on cloud services safely and conveniently.
So, These are the reason why I like the internet.
What To Do On The Internet
The thing I like the most is the internet.
With the functionits capabilites, I am able to do tons of things.
Maybe what you meant? "function" doesn't fit very well here.
First, I can search for information wthat I want to know.
It is very helpful when I want to find a restaurant during travelings abroad.
"during" seems to be quite a difficult word to use. I can't explain why your sentence sounded odd, but it did - easier to use "during" with normal nouns than with gerunds.
Translation is also easy to do on the internet.
Next, I can see many videos whenever I want to see.
No need for repetition here.
So there is no need to wait for the time when broadcasting the contenthe content is broadcast on TV.
I am able to see old videos which are hard to seefind.
"hard to see" is more like it's a very small video, or something :) you need a telescope to see it!
With the old videos, I can remindember my good old days.
Or "I can be reminded of my good old days"
What else,? I can listen to music with many live streaming services.
Plus, I can store my photos and documents on cloud services safely and conveniently.
So, Tthese are the reasons why I like the internet.
Oct. 23, 2021
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With the function, I am able to do tons of things. With Maybe what you meant? "function" doesn't fit very well here. |
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First, I can search information what I want to know. First, I can search for information |
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It is very helpful when I want to find a restaurant during traveling abroad. It is very helpful when I want to find a restaurant during travel "during" seems to be quite a difficult word to use. I can't explain why your sentence sounded odd, but it did - easier to use "during" with normal nouns than with gerunds. |
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Translation is also easy to do on the internet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Next, I can see many videos whenever I want to see. Next, I can see many videos whenever I want No need for repetition here. |
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So there is no need to wait the time when broadcasting the content on TV. So there is no need to wait for the time when |
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I am able to see old videos which are hard to see. I am able to see old videos which are hard to "hard to see" is more like it's a very small video, or something :) you need a telescope to see it! |
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With the old videos, I can remind my good old days. With the old videos, I can rem Or "I can be reminded of my good old days" |
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What else, I can listen to music with many live streaming services. What else |
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Plus, I can store my photo and documents on cloud services safely and conveniently. Plus, I can store my photos and documents on cloud services safely and conveniently. |
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So, These are the reason why I like the internet. So, |
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