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gure_fish

Sept. 6, 2022

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What style do you eat potato chips with?

I like potato chips. I often eat it after dinner, not with my hands but with chopsticks.
Is it odd?
But I hate to make hands greasy.

So here is a story that India recently seems to have come to not eat curry with their hands.
They seem to use spoons instead.
I guess they also hate to make hands greasy from oil, right?

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What style do you eatof potato chips withdo you eat?

I like potato chips.

I often eat ithem after dinner, not with my hands but with chopsticks.

すごい!ドイツ人の友達は仲間も箸でポテトチップスを食べると言いました。頭がいいですね。

Is it odd?

But I hate to make my hands greasy.

So here is a story that, where in India, a recently seems to have come to not eat curry with their hands development is that they're not using their hands any more to eat curry.

This is a very tricky sentence!

They seemappear to use spoons instead.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I guess they also hate to makeget their hands greasy from oil, right?

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What styleich way do you eat potato chips with?

I like potato chips.

Great!

I often eat ithem after dinner, not with my hands but with chopsticks.

Potato chips = plural

Is ithat odd?

But I hate to make my hands greasy.

So There iwas a story thatfrom India recently seems tothat said people have come to not eat curry with their hands.

They seem tonow use spoons instead.

Feedback

Great work!

What styleith what do you eat potato chips with?

I like potato chips.

I often eat ithem after dinner, not with my hands but with chopsticks.

Is ithat odd?

But I hate to makeThe thing is that, I hate it when my hands get greasy.

"But" doesn't really fit here, since you're adding to your previous statement, not contradicting it.

So There is a story thaabout Indians recently seems to have come to not eating curry with their hands anymore.

You could also start the sentence with:
"I heard that Indians..."

They seem to use spoons instead.

I guess they also hate to make their hands greasy fromwith oil, right?

Feedback

Good writing :)

What styleHow do you eat potato chips with?

I like potato chips.

I often eat ithem after dinner, not with my hands, but with chopsticks.

'them' is plural to match potato chip*s*

Is it odd?

But I hate to makeget my hands greasy.

'make' sounds intentional, like you're getting your hands greasy on purpose -- 'to get' makes it sound like unintentional, an accident or byproduct.

So here is a story that Indians have recently seems to have come to nottopped eating curry with their hands.

- To talk about the people of India you must use the demonym 'Indians'
- I changed the present tense 'have come to' to the present progressive 'have stopped'

They seem to use spoons instead.

I guess they also hate to make hands greasy from oilhave greasy and oily hands, right?

Another way to say 'to get' is 'to have' in this context.

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Nice work! Let me know if you have any questions.

What styleHow do you eat potato chips with?

BMaybe, but I hate to makeget my hands greasy.!

"Maybe" or "yes" answers the question that you pose "Is it odd?"
"to get" is often used to emphasize a change in state

So here is a story that India recently seems to have come to notfun fact: recently, in India, people are starting to eat curry with their hands less and less.

A story is usually longer - this seems to be a quick fact or an anecdote.
Using the present continuous "be + verb in -ing" is a common way to describe change over time
"India" is not a person who can eat so it's better to say "in India" and refer to the actual people living there.

They seem to use spoons instead.

I guess they also hate to makeget their hands greasy from oil, right?

"greasy" is often because of "oil" so there is no need to say it

Feedback

Fun story! Your story was clear and interesting. Thanks for sharing!

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gure_fish

Sept. 6, 2022

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Thank you for correcting . Your answer has helped me a lot!

What style do you eat potato chips with?


What styleHow do you eat potato chips with?

What styleHow do you eat potato chips with?

What styleith what do you eat potato chips with?

What styleich way do you eat potato chips with?

What style do you eatof potato chips withdo you eat?

I like potato chips.


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I like potato chips.

Great!

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I often eat it after dinner, not with my hands but with chopsticks.


I often eat ithem after dinner, not with my hands, but with chopsticks.

'them' is plural to match potato chip*s*

I often eat ithem after dinner, not with my hands but with chopsticks.

I often eat ithem after dinner, not with my hands but with chopsticks.

Potato chips = plural

I often eat ithem after dinner, not with my hands but with chopsticks.

すごい!ドイツ人の友達は仲間も箸でポテトチップスを食べると言いました。頭がいいですね。

Is it odd?


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Is ithat odd?

Is ithat odd?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I hate to make hands greasy.


BMaybe, but I hate to makeget my hands greasy.!

"Maybe" or "yes" answers the question that you pose "Is it odd?" "to get" is often used to emphasize a change in state

But I hate to makeget my hands greasy.

'make' sounds intentional, like you're getting your hands greasy on purpose -- 'to get' makes it sound like unintentional, an accident or byproduct.

But I hate to makeThe thing is that, I hate it when my hands get greasy.

"But" doesn't really fit here, since you're adding to your previous statement, not contradicting it.

But I hate to make my hands greasy.

But I hate to make my hands greasy.

So here is a story that India recently seems to have come to not eat curry with their hands.


So here is a story that India recently seems to have come to notfun fact: recently, in India, people are starting to eat curry with their hands less and less.

A story is usually longer - this seems to be a quick fact or an anecdote. Using the present continuous "be + verb in -ing" is a common way to describe change over time "India" is not a person who can eat so it's better to say "in India" and refer to the actual people living there.

So here is a story that Indians have recently seems to have come to nottopped eating curry with their hands.

- To talk about the people of India you must use the demonym 'Indians' - I changed the present tense 'have come to' to the present progressive 'have stopped'

So There is a story thaabout Indians recently seems to have come to not eating curry with their hands anymore.

You could also start the sentence with: "I heard that Indians..."

So There iwas a story thatfrom India recently seems tothat said people have come to not eat curry with their hands.

So here is a story that, where in India, a recently seems to have come to not eat curry with their hands development is that they're not using their hands any more to eat curry.

This is a very tricky sentence!

They seem to use spoons instead.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They seem tonow use spoons instead.

They seemappear to use spoons instead.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I guess they also hate to make hands greasy from oil, right?


I guess they also hate to makeget their hands greasy from oil, right?

"greasy" is often because of "oil" so there is no need to say it

I guess they also hate to make hands greasy from oilhave greasy and oily hands, right?

Another way to say 'to get' is 'to have' in this context.

I guess they also hate to make their hands greasy fromwith oil, right?

I guess they also hate to makeget their hands greasy from oil, right?

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