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TOMO_o

Aug. 26, 2025

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What star sign are you?

I'm a Capricorn. I don't believe in horoscope much, though. I think constellation is interesting, because they created many things from stars like lion or scale even there are a few stars. I think they all depend on the person. Do you know where your own star sign is?

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What star sign are you?

I'm a Capricorn.

I don't believe in horoscopes much, though.

I think constellation iss are interesting, because they created many things from stars, like lions or scales even though there are a few stars.

I think they all depend on the person.

Do you know where your own star sign is?

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Good job! I didn't make many corrections and I understand what you're trying to say. The only thing would be to work on plural form (ex. horoscope(s) and constellation(s).

P.S. I'm a Scorpio :-)

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TOMO_o

Aug. 27, 2025

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Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
Not only are there unnatural expressions, but there are still small mistakes, so I need to study harder.

What star sign are you?

I'm a Capricorn.

I don't believe in horoscopes much, though.

Can also say : "I don't really believe in astrology."

IBut I do think the constellation iss are interesting, because they created many things from stars likemany things can be created from stars, such as a lion or scales even there only are a few stars.

I think ithey all depends on the individual person.

Do you know where your own star sign is?

where: I don't remember where in the sky, but I do know what it is.

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Good Job!!! Fun topic.... (^ワ^)

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TOMO_o

Aug. 27, 2025

17

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
Not only are there unnatural expressions, but there are still small mistakes, so I need to study harder.

What star sign are you?

I'm a Capricorn.

I don't believe in horoscopes much, though.

I think constellation iss are interesting, because they created many thnumerous kingds ofrom stars like a lion or scale, even when there are a few stars.

You don't need a comma when you use the word because.

I think they all depend on the person.

Do you know whereat your own star sign is?

I'm a Gemini.

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Good job on this text.

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TOMO_o

Aug. 27, 2025

17

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
Not only are there unnatural expressions, but there are still small mistakes, so I need to study harder.

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marblemenow

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You're welcome. Feel free to write about different topics and I'll give you feedback.

I think constellation iss are interesting, because they created many things from stars like the lion or scale, even though there are a few stars.

Not sure what is meant by scale here

Do you know where your own star sign is?

Could also say do you know what your own star sign is? If you're asking someone that

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Great job

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TOMO_o

Aug. 27, 2025

17

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
Not only are there unnatural expressions, but there are still small mistakes, so I need to study harder.

I think constellation is interesting, because they created many things from stars like lion or scale even there are a few stars.


I think constellation iss are interesting, because they created many things from stars like the lion or scale, even though there are a few stars.

Not sure what is meant by scale here

I think constellation iss are interesting, because they created many thnumerous kingds ofrom stars like a lion or scale, even when there are a few stars.

You don't need a comma when you use the word because.

IBut I do think the constellation iss are interesting, because they created many things from stars likemany things can be created from stars, such as a lion or scales even there only are a few stars.

I think constellation iss are interesting, because they created many things from stars, like lions or scales even though there are a few stars.

I think they all depend on the person.


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I think ithey all depends on the individual person.

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Do you know where your own star sign is?


Do you know where your own star sign is?

Could also say do you know what your own star sign is? If you're asking someone that

Do you know whereat your own star sign is?

I'm a Gemini.

Do you know where your own star sign is?

where: I don't remember where in the sky, but I do know what it is.

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What star sign are you?


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I'm a Capricorn.


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I don't believe in horoscope much, though.


I don't believe in horoscopes much, though.

I don't believe in horoscopes much, though.

Can also say : "I don't really believe in astrology."

I don't believe in horoscopes much, though.

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