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What qualities do you look for in a friend?

I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around become my friend. I can't drink alcohol and I am quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people. I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.

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I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around is enough to become my friend.

There should be some words here, and I think these ones work with this sentence

I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people.

I'd like to make friends connected withwho share my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.

“Connected” is an unnatural way to express this. Saying something like the share your hobbies would be a better way to say what you want

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What qualities do you look for in a friend?

I don't look for a lot in my friends, i. If anything, someone who is fun to be around may/can become my friend.

I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go wellfit in with party people.

I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbieswith people having similar hobbies as I do, like oil painting or drinking espresso.

What qualities do you look for in a friend?


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I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around become my friend.


I don't look for a lot in my friends, i. If anything, someone who is fun to be around may/can become my friend.

I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around is enough to become my friend.

There should be some words here, and I think these ones work with this sentence

I can't drink alcohol and I am quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people.


I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go wellfit in with party people.

I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people.

I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.


I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbieswith people having similar hobbies as I do, like oil painting or drinking espresso.

I'd like to make friends connected withwho share my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.

“Connected” is an unnatural way to express this. Saying something like the share your hobbies would be a better way to say what you want

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