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TOMO_o

Nov. 30, 2025

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What qualities do you look for in a friend?

I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around become my friend. I can't drink alcohol and I am quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people. I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.

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I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, I want someone who is fun to be around to become my friend.

I can't drink alcohol and I am quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people.

I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.

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TOMO_o

Dec. 1, 2025

105

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Even if I want to try using vocabulary that I've learned or studied up until now, I need to carefully consider whether it fits the sentence.

I don't look for a lot in my friends, i. If anything, someone who is fun to be around can become my friend.

I can'don’t drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I goet along well with party people.

I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or making espresso.

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TOMO_o

Nov. 30, 2025

105

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Even if I want to try using vocabulary that I've learned or studied up until now, I need to carefully consider whether it fits the sentence.

I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around is enough to become my friend.

There should be some words here, and I think these ones work with this sentence

I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people.

I'd like to make friends connected withwho share my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.

“Connected” is an unnatural way to express this. Saying something like the share your hobbies would be a better way to say what you want

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TOMO_o

Nov. 30, 2025

105

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Even if I want to try using vocabulary that I've learned or studied up until now, I need to carefully consider whether it fits the sentence.

What qualities do you look for in a friend?

I don't look for a lot in my friends, i. If anything, someone who is fun to be around may/can become my friend.

I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go wellfit in with party people.

I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbieswith people having similar hobbies as I do, like oil painting or drinking espresso.

TOMO_o's avatar
TOMO_o

Nov. 30, 2025

105

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Even if I want to try using vocabulary that I've learned or studied up until now, I need to carefully consider whether it fits the sentence.

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Lionel

Dec. 1, 2025

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I think it is already very clear what you are trying to say. Those "mistakes" are relatively minor. Well done :)

What qualities do you look for in a friend?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around become my friend.


I don't look for a lot in my friends, i. If anything, someone who is fun to be around may/can become my friend.

I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, someone who is fun to be around is enough to become my friend.

There should be some words here, and I think these ones work with this sentence

I don't look for a lot in my friends, i. If anything, someone who is fun to be around can become my friend.

I don't look for a lot in my friends, if anything, I want someone who is fun to be around to become my friend.

I can't drink alcohol and I am quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people.


I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go wellfit in with party people.

I can't drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I go well with party people.

I can'don’t drink alcohol and I am a quiet person, so I don't think I goet along well with party people.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.


I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbieswith people having similar hobbies as I do, like oil painting or drinking espresso.

I'd like to make friends connected withwho share my hobbies like oil painting or espresso.

“Connected” is an unnatural way to express this. Saying something like the share your hobbies would be a better way to say what you want

I'd like to make friends connected with my hobbies like oil painting or making espresso.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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