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cute_hoglet

July 1, 2023

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What personality traits do you love about yourself?

Such an easy question to be asked; what traits do you love about yourself? If I were asked to answer this question about an year ago, I suppose I'd say "nothing". That's because last year I couldn't appreciate myself. However, after some reflection, I concluded that I have some positive personality qualities, despite the fact I may not be a perfect person. I am going to talk about three personality traits I love the most about myself.
My best friend says that I'm never not full of energy or motivation. This also applies to the studying process. My curiosity and energy always drive me to discover something new (well, if I'm interested in a certain field, haha). Now, a fact many people know about me, is that I absolutely adore languages. I grew up in a bilingual family, and I guess this is one of the reasons for my passion for languages. I'm quite productive and dedicated with my goals. Recently I heard a quote like ” That the possibility to achieve a goal is what makes life meaningful”, which is so relatable to me. This is why I never stop to work very hard to achieve the dreams that I have set up for myself. For example my newest goal is to be able to speak Spanish fluently, which, I'm sure, I'll achieve one day. Another trait? I'm a patient person. I don't have to deal with anger issues. I tend to keep my emotions under control and prefer to deal with my frustrations on my own rather than confront others. However, I can become frustrated when I feel like my personal space is threatened or someone doesn't treat me right. But most likely, you'll never notice any signs that I find you annoying, as I am calm and respectful with almost everyone. And the last one is my honesty. Truly, I'm not honest all the time with people I don't trust. I might lie if someone forces me to tell the truth, even though I am not comfortable with that. But I love my ability being straightforward even without trying to do that. I just don't see any point of telling something I don't believe in. Such quality is often admired and appreciated by people who surround you, because it shows that you are a reliable person and you respect your own values.
I believe that every person has some unique traits, even if they are too blinded to notice them sometimes. Instead of focusing only on our flaws, we should also to turn attention to our positive qualities, what can led us to developing into a positive direction and keeping self-confidence high.

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What personality traits do you love about yourself?

Such an easy question to be asked; what traits do you love about yourself?

If I were asked to answer this question about an year ago, I suppose I'd say "nothing"."

Punctuation goes inside of the quotation marks.

That's because last year, I couldn't appreciate myself.

"Last year" is considered an introduction phrase, so a comma would typically follow, for clarity.

However, after some reflection, I concluded that I have some positive personality qualities, despite the fact I may not be a perfect person.

I am going to talk about three personality traits I love the most about myself.

My best friend says that I'm never not full of energy or motivation.

This also applies to the studying process.

Personally, I would remove the period after "process," and replace it with an em-dash (-- symbol). Em-dashes are used to separate lists and additional information. While it isn't a problem, an em-dash would just add clarity and make the sentence more readable.
It would read as: "My best friend says that I'm never not full of energy or motivation -- this also applies to the studying process."

My curiosity and energy always drive me to discover something new (well, if I'm interested in a certain field, haha).

Now, a fact many people know about me, is that I absolutely adore languages.

I grew up in a bilingual family, and I guess this is one of the reasons for my passion for languages.

I'm quite productive and dedicated with my goals.

Recently, I heard a quote like ” : "That the possibility to achieve a goal is what makes life meaningful," which is so relatable to me.

1. A comma to separate the introduction word, "recently."
2. A colon (: symbol) to specify what the quote is.
3. Spacing and punctuation inside the quotations.

This is why I never stop to working very hard to achieve the dreams that I have set up for myself.

The present-tense conjugation of "to work" is "working."

Another trait?

I'm a patient person.

I don't have to deal with anger issues.

I tend to keep my emotions under control and prefer to deal with my frustrations on my own rather than confront others.

Again, I, personally, would remove the period after "issues," and replace it with an em-dash (-- symbol).
It would read as: "I don't have to deal with anger issues -- I tend to keep my emotions under control and prefer to deal with my frustrations on my own rather than confront others."
My reasoning: it lists an example of why you don't have anger issues. It also improves the flow of reading.

However, I can become frustrated when I feel like my personal space is threatened or someone doesn't treat me right.

But most likely, you'll never notice any signs that I find you annoying, as I am calm and respectful with almost everyone.

And the last one is my honesty.

And, I might lie if someone forces me to tell the truth, even though I am not comfortable with that.

The sentence is not grammatically wrong, however "and," "plus," or even "also" would do well at the start, to improve the flow of reading.

But, I love my ability beingto be straightforward, even without trying to do that.

A comma after "but," to separate the clauses / introductory word. And, a comma after "straightforward," to separate another clause.

I just don't see any point of tellsaying something I don't believe in.

Such quality is often admired and appreciated by people who surround you, because it shows that you are a reliable person and you respect your own values.

I believe that every person has some unique traits, even if they are too blinded to notice them sometimes.

Instead of focusing only on our flaws, we should also to turn attention to our positive qualities, whatich can lead us to developing into a positive direction and keeping self-confidence high.

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Honestly, very good and high level writing. Keep up the good work :)
I am also impressed by the proper usage of the semi-colon at the start, since that is a complicated symbol, even for many native English speakers.

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cute_hoglet

July 3, 2023

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Thanks a lot! I often do not know to to use semi-colon properly, but this time I guessed somehow

What personality traits do you love about yourself?

Such an easy question to be asked; what traits do you love about yourself?

If I were asked to answer this question about an year ago, I suppose I'd say "nothing".

That's because last year I couldn't appreciate the unique parts of me.

However, after some reflection, I concluded that I have some positive personality qualities / personality traits, despite the fact I may not be a perfect person. / despite the fact that I may not be perfect.

I am going to talk about the three personality traits (that) I love the most about myself.

My best friend says that I'm never not full of energy or motivation.

Now, a fact many people know about me, is that I absolutely adore languages.

I grew up in a bilingual family, and I guess this is one of the reasons for my passion for languages.

I'm quite a productive person and dedicated withto my goals. / I'm quite productive and...

” That the possibility to achieve a goal is what makes life meaningful”, this quote is very relatable to me.

This is why I never stop to work ing (very) hard to achieve the dreams that I have set up for myself.

For example, my newest goal is to be able to speak Spanish fluently, which, I'm sure, I'll achieve one day.

Another trait?

I'm a patient person.

I don't have to deal with anger issues.

Your sentence is perfectly correct, but since you're listing personality traits, I think this way is better.

I tend to keep my emotions under control and prefer to deal with my frustrations on my own rather than confront others.

However, I can become frustrated when I feel like my personal space is threatened or someone doesn't treat me right / ...I feel like my personal space is being threatened or someone isn't treating me right.

But most likely, you'll never find out that you're annoying to me, as I am calm and respectful with almost everyone.

And the last one is my honesty.

Truthfully, I'm not always honest all withe time with peoplehe people (whom) I don't trust.

I might lie if someone forces me to tell the truth, even though I am not comfortable with that.

I just don't see any point of in saying/telling something I don't believe in. / I just don't see the point of .....

Such a quality is often admired and appreciated by people who surround you, because it shows that I amyou are a reliable person and Iyou respect myour own values.

The person you're talking about in the first half of the sentence is "you," so to be consistent, the person in the second half should also be "you."

I believe that every person has some unique traits, even if they are too blinded to notice them sometimes.

Instead of focusing only on our flaws, we should also tour turn attention to/towards our positive qualities, which can lead us to developing into a positive direction and keeping our self-confidence high.

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cute_hoglet

July 1, 2023

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Thank you!

What personality traits do you love about yourself?


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Such an easy question to be asked; what traits do you love about yourself?


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If I were asked to answer this question about an year ago, I suppose I'd say "nothing".


If I were asked to answer this question about an year ago, I suppose I'd say "nothing".

If I were asked to answer this question about an year ago, I suppose I'd say "nothing"."

Punctuation goes inside of the quotation marks.

That's because last year I couldn't appreciate the unique parts of me.


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However, after some reflection, I concluded that I have some positive personality qualities, despite the fact I may not be a perfect person.


However, after some reflection, I concluded that I have some positive personality qualities / personality traits, despite the fact I may not be a perfect person. / despite the fact that I may not be perfect.

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I am going to talk about three personality traits I love the most about myself.


I am going to talk about the three personality traits (that) I love the most about myself.

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My best friend says that I'm never not full of energy or motivation.


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This also applies to the studying process.


This also applies to the studying process.

Personally, I would remove the period after "process," and replace it with an em-dash (-- symbol). Em-dashes are used to separate lists and additional information. While it isn't a problem, an em-dash would just add clarity and make the sentence more readable. It would read as: "My best friend says that I'm never not full of energy or motivation -- this also applies to the studying process."

My curiosity and energy always drive me to discover something new (well, if I'm interested in a certain field, haha).


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Now, a fact many people know about me, is that I absolutely adore languages.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I grew up in a bilingual family, and I guess this is one of the reasons for my passion for languages.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm quite a productive and dedicated with my goals.


I'm quite a productive person and dedicated withto my goals. / I'm quite productive and...

” That the possibility to achieve a goal is what makes life meaningful”, this quote is very relatable to me.


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This is why I never stop to work very hard to achieve the dreams that I have set up for myself.


This is why I never stop to work ing (very) hard to achieve the dreams that I have set up for myself.

This is why I never stop to working very hard to achieve the dreams that I have set up for myself.

The present-tense conjugation of "to work" is "working."

For example my newest goal is to be able to speak Spanish fluently, which, I'm sure, I'll achieve one day.


For example, my newest goal is to be able to speak Spanish fluently, which, I'm sure, I'll achieve one day.

Another trait?


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I'm a patient person.


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I usually don't deal with anger issues.


I tend to keep my emotions under control and prefer to deal with my frustrations on my own rather than confront others.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I tend to keep my emotions under control and prefer to deal with my frustrations on my own rather than confront others.

Again, I, personally, would remove the period after "issues," and replace it with an em-dash (-- symbol). It would read as: "I don't have to deal with anger issues -- I tend to keep my emotions under control and prefer to deal with my frustrations on my own rather than confront others." My reasoning: it lists an example of why you don't have anger issues. It also improves the flow of reading.

However, I can become frustrated when I feel like my personal space is threatened or someone doesn't treat me right.


However, I can become frustrated when I feel like my personal space is threatened or someone doesn't treat me right / ...I feel like my personal space is being threatened or someone isn't treating me right.

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But most likely, you'll never find out that you're annoying to me, as I am calm and respectful with almost everyone.


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And the last one is my honesty.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Truly, I'm not honest all the time.


I might lie if someone forces me to tell the truth, even though I am not comfortable with that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And, I might lie if someone forces me to tell the truth, even though I am not comfortable with that.

The sentence is not grammatically wrong, however "and," "plus," or even "also" would do well at the start, to improve the flow of reading.

I love my ability being straightforward even without trying to do that.


I just don't see any point of telling something I don't believe in.


I just don't see any point of in saying/telling something I don't believe in. / I just don't see the point of .....

I just don't see any point of tellsaying something I don't believe in.

Such quality is often admired and appreciated by people who surround you, because it shows that I am a reliable person and I respect my own values.


Such a quality is often admired and appreciated by people who surround you, because it shows that I amyou are a reliable person and Iyou respect myour own values.

The person you're talking about in the first half of the sentence is "you," so to be consistent, the person in the second half should also be "you."

I believe that every person has some unique traits, even if they are too blinded to notice them sometimes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Instead of focusing only on our flaws, we should also to turn attention to our positive qualities, which can led us to developing into a positive direction and keeping self-confidence high.


Instead of focusing only on our flaws, we should also tour turn attention to/towards our positive qualities, which can lead us to developing into a positive direction and keeping our self-confidence high.

But I love my ability being straightforward even without trying to do that.


But, I love my ability beingto be straightforward, even without trying to do that.

A comma after "but," to separate the clauses / introductory word. And, a comma after "straightforward," to separate another clause.

I don't have to deal with anger issues.


I don't have to deal with anger issues.

Your sentence is perfectly correct, but since you're listing personality traits, I think this way is better.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Truly, I'm not honest all the time with people I don't trust.


Truthfully, I'm not always honest all withe time with peoplehe people (whom) I don't trust.

Such quality is often admired and appreciated by people who surround you, because it shows that you are a reliable person and you respect your own values.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's because last year I couldn't appreciate the admirable parts of me.


That's because last year I couldn't appreciate myself.


That's because last year, I couldn't appreciate myself.

"Last year" is considered an introduction phrase, so a comma would typically follow, for clarity.

But most likely, you'll never notice any signs that I find you annoying, as I am calm and respectful with almost everyone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm quite productive and dedicated with my goals.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Recently I heard a quote like ” That the possibility to achieve a goal is what makes life meaningful”, which is so relatable to me.


Recently, I heard a quote like ” : "That the possibility to achieve a goal is what makes life meaningful," which is so relatable to me.

1. A comma to separate the introduction word, "recently." 2. A colon (: symbol) to specify what the quote is. 3. Spacing and punctuation inside the quotations.

Instead of focusing only on our flaws, we should also to turn attention to our positive qualities, what can led us to developing into a positive direction and keeping self-confidence high.


Instead of focusing only on our flaws, we should also to turn attention to our positive qualities, whatich can lead us to developing into a positive direction and keeping self-confidence high.

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