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Polyraspad

Jan. 15, 2025

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What makes you who you are?

**Online persona:**

Internet resources erase he boundaries between countries and people. Knowing that I can communicate with other people cross over the world engages me learn English and cultures, make me an open person that knows anything is possible.

**Experience:**

I used to watch a lot of TV, hear one-sided information and believe it, but then I reconsidered my views and realized: nobody will say you the real truth, you must find one by yourself.

**Cultural heritage:**

Social institutes in Russia fetter, that is a reason why after a school and university that I’ve passed, I don’t risk to open new areas for myself, to spend time hanging out with friends, cause I feel that It’s waste of my time and I would be better off focusing on study English or programming but I know I’m wrong.

**Family:**

I listen to my family's advice, but I don't always follow it; I try to be self-sufficient, like my mother.

**Physical appearance:**

Being neat helps me feel more confident.

**Work:**

The work is pleasant, the one I dreamed about, it lifts my spirits

**Hobbies/interests:**

I work out on street, sometimes in a gym, watch YouTube, learn English, write own project. I feel that I need more social activities. A lot of time being doing your stuff alone may have a negative impact on me.

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What makes you who you are?

**Online persona:**


Internet resources erase the boundaries between countries and people.

Knowing that I canBeing able to communicate with other people across over the world engages me in learning English and cultures, and makes me an opentimistic person thatwho knows anything is possible.

**Experience:**


I used to watch a lot of TV, hear one-sided information and believe it, but then I reconsidered my views and realized: nobody will saytell you the real truth, you must find oneit by yourself.

**Cultural heritage:**


Social institutes in Russia fetter, t. That is a reason why after agraduating from school and university that I’ve passed, I don’t risk to opening myself to new areas for myself, to spend time hanging out with friends, because I feel that Iit’s a waste of my time and I would be better off focusing on studying English or programming but I know I’m wrong.

cause is a noun, because is the connector

**Family:** I listen to my family's advice, but I don't always follow it; I try to be self-sufficient, like my mother.

**Physical appearance:** Being neat helps me feel more confident.

**Work:**


The work is pleasant, the one I dreamed about, it lifts my spirits


**Hobbies/interests:**


I work out on street, sometimes in a gym, watch YouTube, learn English, write my own project.s

I feel that I need more social activities.

A lot of time beingspent doing your stuff alone may have a negative impact on me.

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Polyraspad

Jan. 16, 2025

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Thank you :)

What makes you who you are?

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**Online persona:** Internet resources erase he boundaries between countries and people.

**Online persona:**


Internet resources erase the boundaries between countries and people.

Knowing that I can communicate with other people cross over the world engages me learn English and cultures, make me an open person that knows anything is possible.

Knowing that I canBeing able to communicate with other people across over the world engages me in learning English and cultures, and makes me an opentimistic person thatwho knows anything is possible.

**Experience:** I used to watch a lot of TV, hear one-sided information and believe it, but then I reconsidered my views and realized: nobody will say you the real truth, you must find one by yourself.

**Experience:**


I used to watch a lot of TV, hear one-sided information and believe it, but then I reconsidered my views and realized: nobody will saytell you the real truth, you must find oneit by yourself.

**Cultural heritage:** Social institutes in Russia fetter, that is a reason why after a school and university that I’ve passed, I don’t risk to open new areas for myself, to spend time hanging out with friends, cause I feel that It’s waste of my time and I would be better off focusing on study English or programming but I know I’m wrong.

**Cultural heritage:**


Social institutes in Russia fetter, t. That is a reason why after agraduating from school and university that I’ve passed, I don’t risk to opening myself to new areas for myself, to spend time hanging out with friends, because I feel that Iit’s a waste of my time and I would be better off focusing on studying English or programming but I know I’m wrong.

cause is a noun, because is the connector

**Family:** I listen to my family's advice, but I don't always follow it; I try to be self-sufficient, like my mother.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

**Physical appearance:** Being neat helps me feel more confident.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

**Work:** The work is pleasant, the one I dreamed about, it lifts my spirits **Hobbies/interests:** I work out on street, sometimes in a gym, watch YouTube, learn English, write own project.

**Work:**


The work is pleasant, the one I dreamed about, it lifts my spirits


**Hobbies/interests:**


I work out on street, sometimes in a gym, watch YouTube, learn English, write my own project.s

I feel that I need more social activities.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A lot of time being doing your stuff alone may have a negative impact on me.

A lot of time beingspent doing your stuff alone may have a negative impact on me.

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