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What makes you think of summer?

Chorus of cicadas strongly evoke my emotions and memories of summer. Can anyone in other countries understand this feeling? I can't decide seasons with a temperature anymore. By the way, I prefer winter since there are less bugs.

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Chorus of cicadas strongly evoke my emotions and memories of summer.

Can anyone in other countries understand this feeling?

Though this sentence is technically correct, it sounds a little unnatural. A few ways to rephrase it could be.

"Do people in other countries understand this feeling?"
"Do you think people in other countries might understand this feeling?"
"Do other people around the world understand this feeling?"

I can't decide seasons with aby the temperature anymore.

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Great Job! I personally love the sound of cicadas in the summer (though I guess I've never associated the 2 together). I think I prefer the winter too since it's easier for me to get warmer than it is to get cooler.

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I included one difficult sentence this time, but other than that I wrote it simply, so I think it turned out well.

What makes you think of summer?

Chorus of cicadas strongly evoke my emotions and memories of summer.

Can anyone in other countries understand this feeling?

I can't decide which seasons with a temperaturI like anymore.

By the way, I prefer winter since there are less bugs.

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TOMO_o

yesterday

58

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I included one difficult sentence this time, but other than that I wrote it simply, so I think it turned out well.

CThe chorus of cicadas strongly evoke my emotions and memories of summer.

Can anyone in other countries understand this feeling?

I can't decide seasons with atermine what season it is based on the temperature anymore.

By the way, I prefer winter since there are less bugs.

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Rather than different countries, I would say it's more the difference between the city and the countryside; the city does not have that many places for cicadas, crickets, and other "noisy" insects to live in.

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TOMO_o

yesterday

58

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I included one difficult sentence this time, but other than that I wrote it simply, so I think it turned out well.

What makes you think of summer?


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Chorus of cicadas strongly evoke my emotions and memories of summer.


CThe chorus of cicadas strongly evoke my emotions and memories of summer.

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Can anyone in other countries understand this feeling?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Can anyone in other countries understand this feeling?

Though this sentence is technically correct, it sounds a little unnatural. A few ways to rephrase it could be. "Do people in other countries understand this feeling?" "Do you think people in other countries might understand this feeling?" "Do other people around the world understand this feeling?"

I can't decide seasons with a temperature anymore.


I can't decide seasons with atermine what season it is based on the temperature anymore.

I can't decide which seasons with a temperaturI like anymore.

I can't decide seasons with aby the temperature anymore.

By the way, I prefer winter since there are less bugs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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