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What makes me the most proud in my life
I always try to do the right thing and treat everyone, my family, my friends, and my boyfriend with kindness.
I also care deeply about leaving a positive and good impression on people. Which is the case most of the times. So I’m really proud to impact people positively.
I also tend to improve myself constantly, whether at school or in a professional environment, I always tend to learn, grow, and give my best.
I’m proud that I never give up on my studies and that I’m always full of ambition, even during challenging or hard time.
Additionally, I’m proud of my cooking skills, which allow me to express my creativity and bring joy to others.
Finally, Im sooo grateful and proud to have a loving boyfriend who inspires me every day !!
Which is the case most of the times.
S is not required.
SoTherefore, I’m really proud to impact people positively.
English rules state that it is not good to begin a sentence with "So".
I’m proud that I never give up on my studies and that I’m always full of ambition, even during challenging or hard times.
"Times" should be plural.
What mMakes mMe tThe mMost pProud in mMy lLife
I always try to do the right thing and treat everyone, my family, my friends, and my boyfriend with kindness.
I also care deeply about leaving a positive and good impression on people.
Which is the case most of the times.
So I’m really proud to impact people positively.
I also tend to improve myself constantly, whether atin school or in a professional environment,. I always tend to learn, grow, and give my best.
I’m proud that I never give up on my studies and that I’m always full of ambition, even during challenging or hard times.
Additionally, I’m proud of my cooking skills, which allow me to express my creativity and bring joy to others.
Finally, I'm sooo grateful and proud to have a loving boyfriend who inspires me every day !!
What mMakes mMe the mMost pProud in mMy lLife
I always try to do the right thing and treat everyone, my family, my friends, and my boyfriend with kindness.
I also care deeply about leaving a positive and good impression on people.
W, which is the case most of the times.
You should connect this sentence with your last one with a comma.
S, so I’m really proud to impact people positively.
You should connect this sentence with your last one with a comma.
I also tend to improve myself constantly, whether at school or in a professional environment, I always tend to learn, grow, and give my best.
I’m proud that I never give up on my studies and that I’m always full of ambition, even during challenging or hard times.
Additionally, I’m proud of my cooking skills, which allow me to express my creativity and bring joy to others.
Finally, Im sooo grateful and proud to have a loving boyfriend who inspires me every day !!
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Just a few minor things with spacing, capitalization, and punctuation to get used to, but otherwise, you've done well.
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I also care deeply about leaving a positive and good impression on people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Which is the case most of the times.
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So I’m really proud to impact people positively.
You should connect this sentence with your last one with a comma. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
English rules state that it is not good to begin a sentence with "So". |
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I also tend to improve myself constantly, whether at school or in a professional environment, I always tend to learn, grow, and give my best. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I also tend to improve myself constantly, whether |
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I’m proud that I never give up on my studies and that I’m always full of ambition, even during challenging or hard time. I’m proud that I never give up on my studies and that I’m always full of ambition, even during challenging or hard times. I’m proud that I never give up on my studies and that I’m always full of ambition, even during challenging or hard times. I’m proud that I never give up on my studies and that I’m always full of ambition, even during challenging or hard times. "Times" should be plural. |
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Additionally, I’m proud of my cooking skills, which allow me to express my creativity and bring joy to others. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, Im sooo grateful and proud to have a loving boyfriend who inspires me every day !! Finally, Im sooo grateful and proud to have a loving boyfriend who inspires me every day Finally, I'm sooo grateful and proud to have a loving boyfriend who inspires me every day !! |
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