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What kind of hunter are you?

Well, today I put a tittle exotic for my text. And I can bet that you only have read it and said: " Now what?".

So, I don´t make a long preamble and I´ll continue with this title: HunterXHunter, put in contraction HXH from now on. Did you ever see it? If your answer are not, and I am one hundred percent secure that it is, I have to introduce you that anime´s serie with the fact that after One piece this serie is not concluded, by the way is more by autor´s health, that man the life is telling him that part, but he is stubborn, and his wife is mangaka too, maybe she wil win all profits of this... I just realized a thought that I have not made before, but well I am leaving for the trees, the series is so interesting in the manner that from the beginning the protagonist meet´s the Dad´s student who tell him that his father is a great professional hunter, that is traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all that things, but in this sense Kaito (Dad´s student) told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is a awful person, literally is the kind of Dad that has gone for the cigarrettes yet, and here is where I introduce de plus, Gon starts a journey to look for his father and meet a psycho named Hisoka (Yandere present, look in google if you don´t know what meaning) who can use a power known in the serie by the term "NEN" and He is obssesed with " inducto to it " to Gon... iugh I just feel naugthy to talk about Hisoka... Well no more, I introduce you this series, It has a anime and a manga versión, both are so great, so today I leave you where to choose... bye bye see you soon...

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What kind of hunter are you?

Well, today I put a tittle exotic for my text.

And I can bet that you only have read it and said: " Now what?".

So, I don´t make a long preamble and I´ll continue with this title: HunterXHunter, put in contraction HXH from now on.

Did you ever see it?

If your answer are not, and I am one hundred percent secure that it is, I have to introduce you that anime´s serie with the fact that after

One piece this serie is not concluded, by the way is more by autor´s health, that man the life is telling him that part, but he is stubborn, and his wife is mangaka too, maybe she wil win all profits of this...

I just realized a thought that I have not made before, but well I am leaving for the trees, the series is so interesting in the manner that from the beginning the protagonist meet´s the Dad´s student who tell him that his father is a great professional hunter, that is traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all that things, but in this sense Kaito (Dad´s student) told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is a awful person, literally is the kind of Dad that has gone for the cigarrettes yet, and here is where I introduce de plus, Gon starts a journey to look for his father and meet a psycho named Hisoka (Yandere present, look in google if you don´t know what meaning) who can use a power known in the serie by the term "NEN" and He is obssesed with " inducto to it " to Gon...

iugh

I just feel naugthy to talk about Hisoka...

Well no more, I introduce you this series,

It has a anime and a manga versión, both are so great, so today I leave you where to choose...

bye bye see you soon...

What kind of hunter are you?

Well, today I put made something a tlittle exotic for my text.

frankly simple mispelling and flow here. you can make something for your text

you can "put" something "for" something but its generally in attendance

" I put that book there for emily she asked for me to suprise her with new books every month"

"I put that pizza there for tommy! not for you"

"I put the butter out for it to melt"

i think you meant to say make

And I can bet that you only have read it and said: " Now what?".

no need for the colon i beleive you can just keep it as is

So, I dwon´t make a long preamble and I´ll continue with thise title: HunterXHunter, put in contraction HXH from now on or HxH.

frankly in normal english writting ( this is a writing thing not a grammar thing) you can forgo explaining any acronyms for the text you just need to have it be fully named before making it an acronym. but if you want to make sure its know you can do as i did.

Didhave you ever seen it?

Past Simple is wrong the show still exist

"have you seen the circus" means that its still available or will be available which for this is correct you can watch hunter hunter whenever you want it never dissapeared

this is the Present Perfect

"did you ever see the circuis" means that the circuis is gone now and they are asking if you caught it when it was available

basically

Present perfect has reference to the present but is still a past experience

Past simple is an event that can only be referenced in the past

If yourthe answer areis not, and I am one hundred percent secure that it is, I have to introduce you thatis anime´s series with the fact that after

grammar and demonstratives

Othe one piece this series is not concluded, by the way it's more byabout autor´s health, that man the life is telling him that part, but he is stubborn, and his wife is mangaka too, maybe she wil win all profits of this...

this was confusing. and grammatically wrong in many ways but ill explain fixes later

I just realized a thought that I have not mhade before, but wellhile I am lreavching for the treestars, the series is so interesting in the manner that it, from the beginning, the protagonist meet´s the's Dad´s student whis the one to tell him that his father is a great professional hunter, that he is traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all that things, but in this sense Kaito (Dad´s student) told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is a awful person, literally is the kind of Dad that has gone for the cigarrettes and not come back yet, and here is where I introduce de pluseven more, Gon starts a journey to look for his father and meets a psycho named Hisoka (Yandere present, look in google if you don´t know what meaning) who can use a power known in the series by the term "NEN" and Hhe is obssesed with " inducto totroduce it " to Gon...

I just feel naugthy to talking about Hisoka...

present progressive

Well no more, Im introduceing you this series,

present progressive.

It has an anime and a manga versión, both are so great, so today I'll leave you where to choose...

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ok so theres some work to do but absolutely fantastic job coming to langcorrect and learning it will be so good for you

im assuming french based on accent and the mistakes between simple and progressive tenses as i study french and know that the distinction is quite different.

i truly suggest going over the english grammar and tense system very comprehensively it is SUPER confusing but also SUPER important

furthermore i suggest taking the time to listen to people tell stories in english and take very diligent notes so that you can make sure you understand exactly what they were saying as english uses tenses rather than extra language when making distinctions in progressive/ continuous actions and you HAVE to choose every time context will not fill the gaps in english

you can also listen to comedians do the same it will be far more complicated but they play around jumping in and out of past progressive, present simple, present progressive etc.

your vocabulary is simple but thats nothing that watching videos and using flashcards or a textbook wont fix

as for some of the more niche aspects i really do suggest just watching A TON of english movies and shows and youtube. it will be super beneficial for learning HOW we say the ideas that you might have because english is very particular about the phrasing and it not consistent at all

very good luck and i hope this all helps

(also if you can't afford it look up "piracy" and you'll find out how to watch the things you want to watch fmhy.net)

What kind of hunter are you?

Well, today I put something a tlittle exotic for my textitle.

And I can bet that you only havehave just read it and said: " Now what?".

If punctuation is included in the quote, you don't have to put any punctuation outside the quote

So, I dwon´'t make a long preamble and I´'ll continue with this title: HunterXHunter, put in contraction (I'll shorten it to HXH from now on).

DidHave you ever seen it?

If your answer areis not, and I am one hundred percent securecertain that it is, I have to introduce you thato this anime´s series with the fact that afterlike

One piece this series is not concluded, by the way is more by. It's more because of the author´'s health,; that man the's life is tellaring him that apart, but he is stubborn, and since his wife is a mangaka too, maybe she wil win all profits ofl inherit all this...

not sure what you meant by "that man the life is telling him that part," and most of the sentence honestly, but I took a guess?

I just realized a thought that I have not made'd never thought about that before, but well I am leavingmissing the forest for the trees, t. The series is so interesting in the mannerway that, from the beginning the protagonist meet´s the Dhis dad´s student who tells him that his father is a great professional hunter, that is traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all thatof those kinds of things, b. But in thisa sense Kaito (Dthe dad´'s student) also told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is an awful person,; he literally is the kind of Ddad that has gone out for the cigarrettes yet, aand never returned. And here is where I introduce dthe plus,ot. Gon starts a journey to look for his father and meets a psycho named Hisoka (Yandere present, look inalert, google it if you don´t know what it meanings) who can use a power known in the series by the term "NEN" and Hhe is obssessed with " inducto totroducing it " to Gon...

You need to break this sentence up lol, it's HUGE

iuUgh

I just feel naugthy tohty just talking about Hisoka...

Well, no more, I - I've introduced you to this series,.

It has an anime and a manga versión, bon. Both are so great, so today I leave it to you whereich to choose...

bye bye see you soon...

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I watched HxH a long time ago (not all the way through) and I don't remember much, but I will never forget Hisoka being a freak...

What kind of hunter are you?

Well, today I put a tittle exotican exotic title for my texpost.

And I can bet that you only have read it and said: " Now wWhat?".

So, I don´t make a long preamble and, I´ll continue with this title: HunterX x Hunter, put in contractionits acronym form HXxH from now on.

DidHave you ever seen it?

If your answer areis not, and I am one hundred percent secure that it is, I will have to introduce you that anime´s serie witho the fact that this anime, after

Connecting this sentence with the next one.

One pPiece this serie, is not concluded, by the way is more byut in this case it is due more to the author´'s health, t. That man the's using a lot of his life isto telling him that this part, but he is stubborn, and his wife is mangaka too, so maybe she will win all profits ofrom this...

I just realized a thought that I have not made before, but well I am leavingwas missing the forest for the trees, t. The series is so interesting in theis manner that from the beginning the protagonist meet´s the Dad´s student who tells him that his father is a great professional hunter, that iwhich means traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all that things, butose kinds of things. Interestingly, in this sense, Kaito (Dad´s student) told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is an awful person, literally isn the kind of "Dad that has gone for the cigarrettes yet, and h" way. Here is where I introduce de plus, Gon startssomething else, Gon goes on a journey to look for his father and meets a psycho named Hisoka (a Yandere present, look it up on gGoogle if you don´t know what that meanings) who can use a power known in the series by the term "NEN", and Hhe is obssesed with " inducto tointroducing it " to Gon...

iuUgh!

I just feel so naugthy to talking about Hisoka...

Well no morethat's all for now, I introduced you to this series,.

It has an anime and a manga versióon, both are so great, so today I leave you where to chooseith the choice of which to go with...

bBye bye, see you soon...

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I have seen Hunter x Hunter, but I have not finished it. I'm only on episode 40. I plan to watch all of it then pick up where it left off in the manga version.

For your writing, I recommend breaking your longer sentences into smaller ones, as it helps to avoid run-on sentences and makes it easier to read for people.

Good job!

What kind of hunter are you?


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Well, today I put a tittle exotic for my text.


Well, today I put a tittle exotican exotic title for my texpost.

Well, today I put made something a tlittle exotic for my text.

frankly simple mispelling and flow here. you can make something for your text you can "put" something "for" something but its generally in attendance " I put that book there for emily she asked for me to suprise her with new books every month" "I put that pizza there for tommy! not for you" "I put the butter out for it to melt" i think you meant to say make

Well, today I put something a tlittle exotic for my textitle.

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And I can bet that you only have read it and said: " Now what?".


And I can bet that you only have read it and said: " Now wWhat?".

And I can bet that you only have read it and said: " Now what?".

no need for the colon i beleive you can just keep it as is

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And I can bet that you only havehave just read it and said: " Now what?".

If punctuation is included in the quote, you don't have to put any punctuation outside the quote

Did you ever see it?


DidHave you ever seen it?

Didhave you ever seen it?

Past Simple is wrong the show still exist "have you seen the circus" means that its still available or will be available which for this is correct you can watch hunter hunter whenever you want it never dissapeared this is the Present Perfect "did you ever see the circuis" means that the circuis is gone now and they are asking if you caught it when it was available basically Present perfect has reference to the present but is still a past experience Past simple is an event that can only be referenced in the past

DidHave you ever seen it?

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So, I don´t make a long preamble and I´ll continue with this title: HunterXHunter, put in contraction HXH from now on.


So, I don´t make a long preamble and, I´ll continue with this title: HunterX x Hunter, put in contractionits acronym form HXxH from now on.

So, I dwon´t make a long preamble and I´ll continue with thise title: HunterXHunter, put in contraction HXH from now on or HxH.

frankly in normal english writting ( this is a writing thing not a grammar thing) you can forgo explaining any acronyms for the text you just need to have it be fully named before making it an acronym. but if you want to make sure its know you can do as i did.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, I dwon´'t make a long preamble and I´'ll continue with this title: HunterXHunter, put in contraction (I'll shorten it to HXH from now on).

If your answer are not, and I am one hundred percent secure that it is, I have to introduce you that anime´s serie with the fact that after


If your answer areis not, and I am one hundred percent secure that it is, I will have to introduce you that anime´s serie witho the fact that this anime, after

Connecting this sentence with the next one.

If yourthe answer areis not, and I am one hundred percent secure that it is, I have to introduce you thatis anime´s series with the fact that after

grammar and demonstratives

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If your answer areis not, and I am one hundred percent securecertain that it is, I have to introduce you thato this anime´s series with the fact that afterlike

One piece this serie is not concluded, by the way is more by autor´s health, that man the life is telling him that part, but he is stubborn, and his wife is mangaka too, maybe she wil win all profits of this...


One pPiece this serie, is not concluded, by the way is more byut in this case it is due more to the author´'s health, t. That man the's using a lot of his life isto telling him that this part, but he is stubborn, and his wife is mangaka too, so maybe she will win all profits ofrom this...

Othe one piece this series is not concluded, by the way it's more byabout autor´s health, that man the life is telling him that part, but he is stubborn, and his wife is mangaka too, maybe she wil win all profits of this...

this was confusing. and grammatically wrong in many ways but ill explain fixes later

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One piece this series is not concluded, by the way is more by. It's more because of the author´'s health,; that man the's life is tellaring him that apart, but he is stubborn, and since his wife is a mangaka too, maybe she wil win all profits ofl inherit all this...

not sure what you meant by "that man the life is telling him that part," and most of the sentence honestly, but I took a guess?

I just realized a thought that I have not made before, but well I am leaving for the trees, the series is so interesting in the manner that from the beginning the protagonist meet´s the Dad´s student who tell him that his father is a great professional hunter, that is traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all that things, but in this sense Kaito (Dad´s student) told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is a awful person, literally is the kind of Dad that has gone for the cigarrettes yet, and here is where I introduce de plus, Gon starts a journey to look for his father and meet a psycho named Hisoka (Yandere present, look in google if you don´t know what meaning) who can use a power known in the serie by the term "NEN" and He is obssesed with " inducto to it " to Gon...


I just realized a thought that I have not made before, but well I am leavingwas missing the forest for the trees, t. The series is so interesting in theis manner that from the beginning the protagonist meet´s the Dad´s student who tells him that his father is a great professional hunter, that iwhich means traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all that things, butose kinds of things. Interestingly, in this sense, Kaito (Dad´s student) told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is an awful person, literally isn the kind of "Dad that has gone for the cigarrettes yet, and h" way. Here is where I introduce de plus, Gon startssomething else, Gon goes on a journey to look for his father and meets a psycho named Hisoka (a Yandere present, look it up on gGoogle if you don´t know what that meanings) who can use a power known in the series by the term "NEN", and Hhe is obssesed with " inducto tointroducing it " to Gon...

I just realized a thought that I have not mhade before, but wellhile I am lreavching for the treestars, the series is so interesting in the manner that it, from the beginning, the protagonist meet´s the's Dad´s student whis the one to tell him that his father is a great professional hunter, that he is traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all that things, but in this sense Kaito (Dad´s student) told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is a awful person, literally is the kind of Dad that has gone for the cigarrettes and not come back yet, and here is where I introduce de pluseven more, Gon starts a journey to look for his father and meets a psycho named Hisoka (Yandere present, look in google if you don´t know what meaning) who can use a power known in the series by the term "NEN" and Hhe is obssesed with " inducto totroduce it " to Gon...

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I just realized a thought that I have not made'd never thought about that before, but well I am leavingmissing the forest for the trees, t. The series is so interesting in the mannerway that, from the beginning the protagonist meet´s the Dhis dad´s student who tells him that his father is a great professional hunter, that is traveling for the world saving relics and ruins and all thatof those kinds of things, b. But in thisa sense Kaito (Dthe dad´'s student) also told to Gon (protagonist) that his father is an awful person,; he literally is the kind of Ddad that has gone out for the cigarrettes yet, aand never returned. And here is where I introduce dthe plus,ot. Gon starts a journey to look for his father and meets a psycho named Hisoka (Yandere present, look inalert, google it if you don´t know what it meanings) who can use a power known in the series by the term "NEN" and Hhe is obssessed with " inducto totroducing it " to Gon...

You need to break this sentence up lol, it's HUGE

iugh


iuUgh!

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iuUgh

I just feel naugthy to talk about Hisoka...


I just feel so naugthy to talking about Hisoka...

I just feel naugthy to talking about Hisoka...

present progressive

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I just feel naugthy tohty just talking about Hisoka...

Well no more, I introduce you this series,


Well no morethat's all for now, I introduced you to this series,.

Well no more, Im introduceing you this series,

present progressive.

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Well, no more, I - I've introduced you to this series,.

It has a anime and a manga versión, both are so great, so today I leave you where to choose...


It has an anime and a manga versióon, both are so great, so today I leave you where to chooseith the choice of which to go with...

It has an anime and a manga versión, both are so great, so today I'll leave you where to choose...

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It has an anime and a manga versión, bon. Both are so great, so today I leave it to you whereich to choose...

bye bye see you soon...


bBye bye, see you soon...

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