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What kind of activity calm you down?

It depends on what kind of anxiety I have, Oil painting is my favorite way to calm down on weekends. On weekdays, I often watch comedy shows my favorite comedian appears at. The benefits of laughing is great. Either way. I can slowly relax my mind by myself.

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What kinds of activityies calm you down?

It depends on what kind of anxiety I have,am feeling.

Oil painting is my favorite way to calm down on weekends.

On weekdays, I often watch comedy shows with my favorite comedian appears at.

The benefits of laughing is great.

Either way.(combine with second sentence)

Either way, I can slowly relax my mind by myself.

It depends on what kind of anxiety I have,.

Since "it" and "anxiety" are a whole sentence already. So, use a period

Oil painting is my favorite way to calm down on weekends.

On weekdays, I often watch comedy shows where my favorite comedian appears at.

The 'at" is redundant, meaning useless. The "at" can be substituted for "where" before "my" but it is your choice.

The benefits of laughing isare great.

Since "benefits" is plural, the auxiliary word should agree with the plural word.

Either way.

I can slowly relax my mind by myself.

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What kind of activity calm you down?


What kinds of activityies calm you down?

It depends on what kind of anxiety I have,


It depends on what kind of anxiety I have,.

Since "it" and "anxiety" are a whole sentence already. So, use a period

It depends on what kind of anxiety I have,am feeling.

Oil painting is my favorite way to calm down on weekends.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On weekdays, I often watch comedy shows my favorite comedian appears at.


On weekdays, I often watch comedy shows where my favorite comedian appears at.

The 'at" is redundant, meaning useless. The "at" can be substituted for "where" before "my" but it is your choice.

On weekdays, I often watch comedy shows with my favorite comedian appears at.

The benefits of laughing is great.


The benefits of laughing isare great.

Since "benefits" is plural, the auxiliary word should agree with the plural word.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Either way.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Either way.(combine with second sentence)

I can slowly relax my mind by myself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Either way, I can slowly relax my mind by myself.

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