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What is your most valuable possession?
My PC would be the most valuable possession. It's quite expensive due to gaming PC, but it could be over-spec as a normal use like YouTube or Amazon. PS5 is enough for me though. I'm an indoor person, so I've been investing in my room's stuff.
My PC would be themy most valuable possession.
Since the ownership is important for the topic, it's better to use the possessive "my" than a passive "the"
It's quite expensive due to being a gaming PC, but it cwould be over-spec as aced for normal use like YouTube or Amazon.
(A/My) PS5 is enough for me though.
I'm an indoor person, so I've been investing in my room's stuffthe stuff in my room.
The stuff isn't "owned" by the room, it's owned by you, so it sounds weird to call it the room's stuff.
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Thank you very much for your careful correction.
"Stuff" comes up a lot in games so I tried using it, but it's difficult.
Still, I think I wrote it a little better this time.
What is your most valuable possession?
My PC would be themy most valuable possession.
It's quite expensive due to gaming PC, butit being a gaming PC. However, it could be over-spec as afor normal usage like browsing YouTube or Amazon.
PS5 is enough for me though.
I'm an indoor person, so I've been investing in my room's stuff.
today
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
"Stuff" comes up a lot in games so I tried using it, but it's difficult.
Still, I think I wrote it a little better this time.
What is your most valuable possession?
My PC would be theis my most valuable possession.
If you say "would be" it gives the impression that it isn't actually your most valuable possession and that there's something else valuable to you.
It's quite expensive due to it being a gaming PC, but it could be over-spec as aced for normal use like-cases like watching YouTube or browsing Amazon.
"over-specced" is a bit of a slangy term, but it's used in discussions of computers so it fits here. You might also see it as "over-spec'd"
PS5 is enough for me though.
I'm an indoors person, so I've been investing in my room's stuffstuff for my room.
Slight rephrasing to make it sound more natural
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Gaming PCs are expensive for sure, mine is also my most valuable possession.
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Thank you very much for your careful correction.
"Stuff" comes up a lot in games so I tried using it, but it's difficult.
Still, I think I wrote it a little better this time.
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