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Kist

July 18, 2022

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What is your intention for this week?

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks. I have been out of order, and I have alter my sleep patterns too. Starting tomorrow I am going to get out of bed earlier. My tasks have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control over me.
Since I am unemployed I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and thoughts. I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too far. Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks. I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings hold me back anymore.
My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me. But, I will overcome all these, and step by step. Let’s start from tomorrow.

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This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

Alt: Try to figure out what to do (more general and colloquial)

IMy routine have been out of order, and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

Alt: My routine has been off (sounds a little more natural!)

My tasks have to be in ordered for me to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control overf me.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take overgo too far.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

I understand you perfectly with remain, but I would omit it.

My anxiety has come, because I do not feelcomes from a lack of confidentce speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and beingand exposured to the real world have been a real challenge for me.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.

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You did great with the composition! Good luck on the job search -- it's hard.

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Kist

July 22, 2022

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This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

Love this kind of suggestion, thank you!

What is your intentiongoal for this week?

Intention is odd. Use goal instead for common use

This week I am going to continue mykeep job searching and trying to organize my taskgoals.

I have been out of order, and I have altered my sleeping patterns too.

Starting tomorrow, I am going towill get out of bed earlier.

My tasks have tomust be in order to get them done, anded or I will not do them. I am not going to let my frustrations take control over mf me anymore.

Continuing habit you must use anymore to distinguish.

Since I am unBecause of the status of my employedment, I have letallowed my anxiety and my fears to dominate my mind and thoughts.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too far.

Despite the negative thoughts I couldan have, I will remainkeep following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings to hold me back anymore.

My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident when it comes to speaking English, and now that I am searching for a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.

Let’sI will start from tomorrow.

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Grammar

What is your intentioplan for this week?

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

"tasks" is fine, but I might suggest "to-do list" if that's how your tasks are organized.

I have been out of order(/disorganized), and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

Starting tomorrow I am going to get out of bed earlier.

My tasks have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control over me.

Since I am unemployed I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and thoughts.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

I have said before that I felt like something hasd come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings to hold me back anymore.

My anxiety has *come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching for a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.

*I'm not quite sure what you mean here. Maybe "sprung up" "hit me" or "gotten worse"?

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.

Let’s start from tomorrow.

Feedback

Good luck getting your anxiety tucked away! You seem pretty good at English already. I hope you land a job.

I have been out ofdoing my tasks in the wrong order, and I have had to alter my sleep patterns, too.

Starting tomorrow, I am going to get out of bed earlier.

MIn order to complete my tasks, they have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going to let my frustrations take control overf me.

Since I am unemployed, I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and my thoughts.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch.

Negativity can either go too far or take over too much (not take over too far or go too much)

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remaincontinue following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

"remain following" is never correct
Keep following or continue following is fine, but remain following means stay, and stay following is wrong, because stay usually means not moving or not changing.

My anxiety has cometaken over, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the worldexposure have been a real challenge for me.

Complex and vulnerable sentence! Great command of language and emotion!

But, I will, however, overcome all of these, and challenges, step by step.

Try to avoid starting sentences with these words: and, but, then, so, or, also, because
They aren't always wrong, but they usually are not complete sentences, and they are often not accepted in professional writing.

Let’s start frombegin tomorrow.

Start from scratch, or start from there, or start from here, but not start from tomorrow. You can say, let's start tomorrow.

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Kist

July 18, 2022

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My anxiety has cometaken over, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the worldexposure have been a real challenge for me.

Thanks a lot for your feedback! :)

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Kist

July 18, 2022

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But, I will, however, overcome all of these, and challenges, step by step.

I didn’t know, thank you!!

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Kist

July 18, 2022

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Let’s start frombegin tomorrow.

I appreciate all your suggestions 😊

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kumar

July 18, 2022

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I appreciate all your suggestions 😊

No problem! You're doing great!

What is your intention for this week?

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

IMy routine haves been out of order, and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

Starting tomorrow I am going to get out of bed earlier.

My tasks have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control over me.

Since I am unemployed I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and thoughts.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings hold me back anymore.

My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.

"And" is not needed and it sounds more natural to omit it.

Let’s start from tomorrow.

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You did a really great job on this! I think your English is really good. :)
It sounds like you're trying hard to overcome your anxieties and fears. Good luck on your search for a job!

What is your intention for this week?


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What is your intentioplan for this week?

What is your intentiongoal for this week?

Intention is odd. Use goal instead for common use

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

"tasks" is fine, but I might suggest "to-do list" if that's how your tasks are organized.

This week I am going to continue mykeep job searching and trying to organize my taskgoals.

This week I am going to continue my job search and try to organize my tasks.

Alt: Try to figure out what to do (more general and colloquial)

I have been out of order, and I have alter my sleep patterns too.


IMy routine haves been out of order, and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

I have been out ofdoing my tasks in the wrong order, and I have had to alter my sleep patterns, too.

I have been out of order(/disorganized), and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

I have been out of order, and I have altered my sleeping patterns too.

IMy routine have been out of order, and I have altered my sleep patterns too.

Alt: My routine has been off (sounds a little more natural!)

Starting tomorrow I am going to get out of bed earlier.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Starting tomorrow, I am going to get out of bed earlier.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Starting tomorrow, I am going towill get out of bed earlier.

My tasks have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control over me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

MIn order to complete my tasks, they have to be in order to get them done, and I am not going to let my frustrations take control overf me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My tasks have tomust be in order to get them done, anded or I will not do them. I am not going to let my frustrations take control over mf me anymore.

Continuing habit you must use anymore to distinguish.

My tasks have to be in ordered for me to get them done, and I am not going let my frustrations take control overf me.

Since I am unemployed I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and thoughts.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Since I am unemployed, I have let my anxiety and my fears dominate my mind and my thoughts.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Since I am unBecause of the status of my employedment, I have letallowed my anxiety and my fears to dominate my mind and thoughts.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too far.


I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch.

Negativity can either go too far or take over too much (not take over too far or go too much)

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too farmuch.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take over too far.

I know that it is completely normal to feel a little bit down, but I also feel that I let this negativity take overgo too far.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remaincontinue following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

"remain following" is never correct Keep following or continue following is fine, but remain following means stay, and stay following is wrong, because stay usually means not moving or not changing.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

Despite the negative thoughts I couldan have, I will remainkeep following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

Despite the negative thoughts I could have, I will remain following my schedule and fulfilling my tasks.

I understand you perfectly with remain, but I would omit it.

I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings hold me back anymore.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have said before that I felt like something hasd come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings to hold me back anymore.

I have said before that I felt like something has come over me, but I just cannot allow these feelings to hold me back anymore.

My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My anxiety has cometaken over, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and being exposed to the worldexposure have been a real challenge for me.

Complex and vulnerable sentence! Great command of language and emotion!

My anxiety has *come, because I do not feel confident speaking English, and now that I am searching for a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.

*I'm not quite sure what you mean here. Maybe "sprung up" "hit me" or "gotten worse"?

My anxiety has come, because I do not feel confident when it comes to speaking English, and now that I am searching for a job, the interviews and being exposed to the world have been a real challenge for me.

My anxiety has come, because I do not feelcomes from a lack of confidentce speaking English, and now that I am searching a job, the interviews and beingand exposured to the real world have been a real challenge for me.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.


But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.

"And" is not needed and it sounds more natural to omit it.

But, I will, however, overcome all of these, and challenges, step by step.

Try to avoid starting sentences with these words: and, but, then, so, or, also, because They aren't always wrong, but they usually are not complete sentences, and they are often not accepted in professional writing.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.

But, I will overcome all these, and step by step.

Let’s start from tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let’s start frombegin tomorrow.

Start from scratch, or start from there, or start from here, but not start from tomorrow. You can say, let's start tomorrow.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let’sI will start from tomorrow.

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