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What is your favourite novel?

My favourite novel is Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë. I like this story very much because I’m fascinated with Jane, the heroine. She is really strong and brave and therefore I admire her very much. Another thing I like is the romance story of her and Mr. Rochester.
Jane Eyre is about a girl who lives in an orphanage and when she grows up, she starts to work as a governess in Rochester’s house. She starts to teach and take care of Rochester’s little daughter. Meanwhile, Mr. Rochester is traveling.
I love the way Jane and Mr. Rochester meet each other. Jane is in the woods and suddenly appears Mr. Rochester in a horse, but the horse is afraid of something and Mr. Rochester falls on the ground and gets injured. Jane who doesn’t know who is that man, helps him to ride the horse and they say goodbye.
Then, when Jane comes back to the house, she discovers that the man is Mr. Rochester and they start to talk and know little by little. I love their conversations and the progressive approximation between the two characters. And my favourite part is when Mr. Rochester says to Jane that he feels a strong connection between their hearts.
But Mr. Rochester has a big problem and he doesn’t tell anything about it to Jane. When she discovers the truth, she escapes. But finally, she can’t forget Mr. Rochester and returns with him.
I think this novel is unique, not only because the story is brilliant, but also the style and the sensitivity of Charlotte Brontë, the writer. I think this is an extraordinary novel and I recommend all people to read it.

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My favourite novel is Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë.

Good pick - I love that book!

She is really strong and brave, and therefore I admire her very mucha lot.

Another thing I like is the romance story of herbetween Jane and Mr. Rochester.

Jane Eyre is about a girl who lives in an orphanage, and when she grows up, she starts to work as a governess in Rochester’s house.

Jane is in the woods and suddenly appears Mr. Rochester iappears on a horse, but the horse is afraid of something and Mr. Rochester falls ton the ground and gets injured.

Jane, who doesn't know who is that manhe is, helps him to ride theget back on his horse and they say goodbye.

Then, when Jane comes back to the house, she discovers that the man is Mr. Rochester and they start to talk and knowget to know each other little by little.

I love their conversations and the progressive approximrelationship between the two characters.

But Mr. Rochester has a big problem, and he doesn’t tell Jane anything about it to Jane.

But finally, she can’t forget Mr. Rochester and returns withto him.

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Great writing!

What iIs yYour fFavourite nNovel/(Book)?

My favourite novelbook is Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë.

I’d put the title in quotation marks to make sure it is perceived as a title

I like this story very mucha lot because I’m fascinated withby Jane, the heroine who is the main character .



To be fascinated takes “by” as a preposition.

Heroine is a word that exists but is not used that often. I would prefer to just say main character here

She is really strong and brave and therefore I admire her very much.

Another thing I like is the romance story ofbetween her and Mr. Rochester.

Jane Eyre is about a girl who lives in an orphanage and when she grows up, she startswho later goes on she to work as a governess in Rochester’s house.

And when she grows up does not sound right to me in this context. I would generally avoid putting a subordinate clauses(Clauses that start with words like when) after “and”.

She starts to teach and takes care of Rochester’s little daughter and acts as her teacher.

The construction “to start to do something” is not as common as “empezar a hacer algo” is in Spanish. In English we usually just use the simple present or to start + progressive participle(start taking care of her)

I love the way that Jane and Mr. Rochester meet each other.

Jane is in the woods andwhen suddenly appears Mr. Rochester iappears on a horse, but then the horse is afraid ofgets scared by something and Mr. Rochester falls on the ground and gets injured.s himself

In Spanish you can put the subject after the verb i.e. (Un día apareció Mr. Rochester) but in English the subject always has to come first, except for questions(One day Mr. Rochester appeared)

In a horse = dentro de un caballo
On a horse = a caballo

Be afraid of = Tener miedo de algo
Get scared by = Estar asustado por algo

Jane who doesn’t know who is that man, helps him to ridethe man is but she helps him get back on the horse and they say goodbye.

Montar el caballo can be translated in two ways in English,
To ride the horse describes the process of being on the horse and going somewhere with it.
To get up on the horse means to physically climb up on the animal

Then, when Jane comes backreturns to the house, she discovers that the man is was¶
Mr. Rochester and they start to talking and know little by littlegetting to know each other a bit.

Little by little means poco a poco in the sense(Poco a poco empezaba a entender de lo que hablaba el profesor). In this case I would translate it to “a bit” which would more directly be “un poco” in Spanish

I love theire conversations and the progressive approximation between how the characters became closer to each other two charactershroughout the progression of the book.

The second part of the sentence didn’t make too much sense, I tried to rewrite it

And my favourite part is was¶
when Mr. Rochester saysid to Jane that he feelslt a strong connection between their heartsm.

I don’t know why but the present tense does not feel good here. I would use the past tense.

But Mr. Rochester hasd a big problem and he doesidn’t tellsay anything about it to Jane.

When she discovers the truth, she escapes.

But finally, she can’t forget the end, she misses Mr. Rochester and returns withto him.

I think this novel is unique, not only because the story is brilliant, but also the style and the sensitivity ofbecause of the style that Charlotte Brontë, the writer has.

I think that this is an extraordinary novel and I recommend all people to read itit to everyone.

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Good job! Your English is very easy to understand and although there were a few minor hiccups, it’s nothing to worry about. Continue in the same fashion!

My favourite novel is Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë.


My favourite novelbook is Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë.

I’d put the title in quotation marks to make sure it is perceived as a title

My favourite novel is Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë.

Good pick - I love that book!

What is your favourite novel?


What iIs yYour fFavourite nNovel/(Book)?

I like this story very much because I’m fascinated with Jane, the heroine.


I like this story very mucha lot because I’m fascinated withby Jane, the heroine who is the main character .

To be fascinated takes “by” as a preposition. Heroine is a word that exists but is not used that often. I would prefer to just say main character here

She is really strong and brave and therefore I admire her very much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She is really strong and brave, and therefore I admire her very mucha lot.

Another thing I like is the romance story of her and Mr. Rochester.


Another thing I like is the romance story ofbetween her and Mr. Rochester.

Another thing I like is the romance story of herbetween Jane and Mr. Rochester.

Jane Eyre is about a girl who lives in an orphanage and when she grows up, she starts to work as a governess in Rochester’s house.


Jane Eyre is about a girl who lives in an orphanage and when she grows up, she startswho later goes on she to work as a governess in Rochester’s house.

And when she grows up does not sound right to me in this context. I would generally avoid putting a subordinate clauses(Clauses that start with words like when) after “and”.

Jane Eyre is about a girl who lives in an orphanage, and when she grows up, she starts to work as a governess in Rochester’s house.

She starts to teach and take care of Rochester’s little daughter.


She starts to teach and takes care of Rochester’s little daughter and acts as her teacher.

The construction “to start to do something” is not as common as “empezar a hacer algo” is in Spanish. In English we usually just use the simple present or to start + progressive participle(start taking care of her)

Meanwhile, Mr. Rochester is traveling.


I love the way Jane and Mr. Rochester meet each other.


I love the way that Jane and Mr. Rochester meet each other.

Jane is in the woods and suddenly appears Mr. Rochester in a horse, but the horse is afraid of something and Mr. Rochester falls on the ground and gets injured.


Jane is in the woods andwhen suddenly appears Mr. Rochester iappears on a horse, but then the horse is afraid ofgets scared by something and Mr. Rochester falls on the ground and gets injured.s himself

In Spanish you can put the subject after the verb i.e. (Un día apareció Mr. Rochester) but in English the subject always has to come first, except for questions(One day Mr. Rochester appeared) In a horse = dentro de un caballo On a horse = a caballo Be afraid of = Tener miedo de algo Get scared by = Estar asustado por algo

Jane is in the woods and suddenly appears Mr. Rochester iappears on a horse, but the horse is afraid of something and Mr. Rochester falls ton the ground and gets injured.

Jane who doesn’t know who is that man, helps him to ride the horse and they say goodbye.


Jane who doesn’t know who is that man, helps him to ridethe man is but she helps him get back on the horse and they say goodbye.

Montar el caballo can be translated in two ways in English, To ride the horse describes the process of being on the horse and going somewhere with it. To get up on the horse means to physically climb up on the animal

Jane, who doesn't know who is that manhe is, helps him to ride theget back on his horse and they say goodbye.

Then, when Jane comes back to the house, she discovers that the man is Mr. Rochester and they start to talk and know little by little.


Then, when Jane comes backreturns to the house, she discovers that the man is was¶
Mr. Rochester and they start to talking and know little by littlegetting to know each other a bit.

Little by little means poco a poco in the sense(Poco a poco empezaba a entender de lo que hablaba el profesor). In this case I would translate it to “a bit” which would more directly be “un poco” in Spanish

Then, when Jane comes back to the house, she discovers that the man is Mr. Rochester and they start to talk and knowget to know each other little by little.

I love their conversations and the progressive approximation between the two characters.


I love theire conversations and the progressive approximation between how the characters became closer to each other two charactershroughout the progression of the book.

The second part of the sentence didn’t make too much sense, I tried to rewrite it

I love their conversations and the progressive approximrelationship between the two characters.

And my favourite part is when Mr. Rochester says to Jane that he feels a strong connection between their hearts.


And my favourite part is was¶
when Mr. Rochester saysid to Jane that he feelslt a strong connection between their heartsm.

I don’t know why but the present tense does not feel good here. I would use the past tense.

But Mr. Rochester has a big problem and he doesn’t tell anything about it to Jane.


But Mr. Rochester hasd a big problem and he doesidn’t tellsay anything about it to Jane.

But Mr. Rochester has a big problem, and he doesn’t tell Jane anything about it to Jane.

When she discovers the truth, she escapes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But finally, she can’t forget Mr. Rochester and returns with him.


But finally, she can’t forget the end, she misses Mr. Rochester and returns withto him.

But finally, she can’t forget Mr. Rochester and returns withto him.

I think this novel is unique, not only because the story is brilliant, but also the style and the sensitivity of Charlotte Brontë, the writer.


I think this novel is unique, not only because the story is brilliant, but also the style and the sensitivity ofbecause of the style that Charlotte Brontë, the writer has.

I think this is an extraordinary novel and I recommend all people to read it.


I think that this is an extraordinary novel and I recommend all people to read itit to everyone.

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