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TOMO_o

Aug. 20, 2025

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What is your favorite subject?

My favorite subject is definitely science. I especially liked physics when I was student, but I like biology as well lately. I've started to find out the beauty of the nature since I painted oil paintings. I would like to see the various animals around the world.

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What is your favorite subject?

My favorite subject is definitely science.

I especially liked physics when I was student, but I like biology as well latelymore recently I am liking biology too.

Since I started painting oil paintings, I've started to find out the beauty of the nature since I painted oil paintings.

I would like to see the various types of animals all around the world.

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TOMO_o

Aug. 21, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

What is your favorite subject?

My favorite subject is definitely science.

I especially liked physics when I was a student, but lately, I like biology as well lately.

I've started to find out the beauty of the nature since I started painteding oil paintings.

I would like to see the various animals around the world.

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Nice job!

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TOMO_o

Aug. 20, 2025

26

Thank you very much for the careful correction.

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marblemenow

Aug. 20, 2025

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You're welcome.

What is your favorite subject?

My favorite subject is definitely science.

I especially liked physics when I was student, but I likelately I've been enjoying biology as well lately.

I rephrased the second half of the sentence so that it sounds more natural. I feel "lately" is most often used with actions, so the original sentence sounded a little odd to me.

I've started to find outdiscovering the beauty of the nature since I paintedbegun making oil paintings.

(1) I think the use of "discovering" here would sound more fluent and perhaps a little more appropriate.
(2) Unless you're referring to the nature in a particular place, we will not use "the" before "nature".
(3) I also rephrased the second half of this sentence to sound more natural.
(4) I replaced "paint" with "make" because "painting oil paintings" might sound a little silly.

I would like to see the various animals around the world.

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TOMO_o

Aug. 20, 2025

26

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I guess the only way to learn natural-sounding expressions is to study little by little.
I'll be more careful not to make any mistakes next time.

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pshedron

Aug. 21, 2025

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Please don't be pressured to write perfectly! Making mistakes is inevitable and in fact beneficial.

What is your favorite subject?


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My favorite subject is definitely science.


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My favorite subject is definitely science.

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I especially liked physics when I was student, but I like biology as well lately.


I especially liked physics when I was student, but I likelately I've been enjoying biology as well lately.

I rephrased the second half of the sentence so that it sounds more natural. I feel "lately" is most often used with actions, so the original sentence sounded a little odd to me.

I especially liked physics when I was a student, but lately, I like biology as well lately.

I especially liked physics when I was student, but I like biology as well latelymore recently I am liking biology too.

I've started to find out the beauty of the nature since I painted oil paintings.


I've started to find outdiscovering the beauty of the nature since I paintedbegun making oil paintings.

(1) I think the use of "discovering" here would sound more fluent and perhaps a little more appropriate. (2) Unless you're referring to the nature in a particular place, we will not use "the" before "nature". (3) I also rephrased the second half of this sentence to sound more natural. (4) I replaced "paint" with "make" because "painting oil paintings" might sound a little silly.

I've started to find out the beauty of the nature since I started painteding oil paintings.

Since I started painting oil paintings, I've started to find out the beauty of the nature since I painted oil paintings.

I would like to see the various animals around the world.


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I would like to see the various types of animals all around the world.

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