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What is your favorite sound?

My favorite sound is the sound of snow. As a matter of fact, there are no sound while it's snowing, but I prefer that silence like time goes slowly. The sound of sea is also my favorite. Maybe I like nature and quite peaceful time.

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As a matter of fact, there is no sound / are no sounds while it's snowing, but I prefer that silence , [like] time goes slowly.

"like" by itself does't sound quite right to me. Here are a few alternatives:
but I prefer that silence; it's as if time slows down.
but I prefer that silence, when time seems to slow down.
but I prefer that silence with the slow passing of time.

Maybe I like nature and quitet peaceful times.

I think it's more natural to say "times" since you are referring to different experiences / times, including by the sea and when it snows.

What is your favorite sound?


My favorite sound is the sound of snow.


As a matter of fact, there are no sound while it's snowing, but I prefer that silence like time goes slowly.


As a matter of fact, there is no sound / are no sounds while it's snowing, but I prefer that silence , [like] time goes slowly.

"like" by itself does't sound quite right to me. Here are a few alternatives: but I prefer that silence; it's as if time slows down. but I prefer that silence, when time seems to slow down. but I prefer that silence with the slow passing of time.

The sound of sea is also my favorite.


Maybe I like nature and quite peaceful time.


Maybe I like nature and quitet peaceful times.

I think it's more natural to say "times" since you are referring to different experiences / times, including by the sea and when it snows.

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