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What is your favorite number?
My favorite number is 47, because Japan has 47 prefectures, the number which I watched Cartoon Network on TV is 47, and it's also prime number. Be the way, I wanted to be physicist when I was in junior high school. I am a company employee now, though.
My favorite number is 47, because Japan has 47 prefectures, the number which. I watched Cartoon Network on TV is 47, and it'on channel 47. It’s also a prime number.
Bey the way, I wanted to be a physicist when I was in junior high school.
I am a company employee now, though.
What is your favorite number?
My favorite number is 47, because Japan has 47 prefectures, the. It's also the channel number whichere I watched the Cartoon Network on TV is 47, and it'. Finally, 47 is also a prime number.
Trying making smaller sentences with a clear noun and action.
Bey the way, I wanted to be a physicist when I was in junior high school.
I am a company employee now, though.
Changing "I am" to "I'm" will sound more natural although both are correct
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Good job! Don't forget to use articles (the, a,an etc). They're important in English
What is your favorite number?
My favorite number is 47, because Japan has 47 prefectures, the numberchannel on which I watched Cartoon Network on TV is 47, and it's also prime number.
"on TV" here is redundant since most people will be able to fill in from context.
Instead of "number" we would say "channel" in the context of TV.
Bey the way, I wanted to be physicist when I was in junior high school.
I am a company employeerporate worker now, though.
Company employee seems a bit redundant, and is also somewhat vague. I think a suitable substitute would be "corporate worker".
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The first sentence and final two seem a bit disconnected to me. I'm not sure how wanting to be a physicist relates to your favourite number?
My favourite number is 11. I don't really have a strong reason, I just like it.
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I am a company employee now, though. I am a co Company employee seems a bit redundant, and is also somewhat vague. I think a suitable substitute would be "corporate worker". I am a company employee now, though. Changing "I am" to "I'm" will sound more natural although both are correct I am a company employee now, though. |
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