Oct. 7, 2025
What is your favorite holiday?
I love Christmas. Because Christmas is December 25th and my birthday is 26th, also New Year's Day is very close, so there a lot of events near by Christmas. City's atmosphere, TV show and gorgeous dishes, the whole world is fulfilled with peace and happiness. The world needs them now.
Because Christmas is on December 25th and my birthday is on the 26th, a. Also, New Year's Day is very close, so there a lots of events near by Christmaduring the holidays.
CI love the city's atmosphere, the Christmas TV shows and gorgethe delicious dishes, t. The whole world is fulfilled withl of peace and happiness.
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Good job, Christmas is also my favorite holiday too.
Oct. 8, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
When I try to structure sentences in a different way than usual, the sentences still end up being awkward.
But I want to try different things, so I'll do my best with this style.
Oct. 8, 2025
You are doing a great job so far, keep up the good work!
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My birthday is on Christmas so I like it too :)
Oct. 8, 2025
If your birthday falls on Christmas, why not give your presents together?
It's just a little over two months away.
I love Christmas because Christmas is December 25th and my birthday is the 26th.
It flows more naturally to combine these two sentences here. You usually wouldn't start a sentence with "because."
Because Christmas is December 25th and my birthday is 26th, aAlso, New Year's Day is very close, so there are a lot of events near by Christmas.
Generally, it's good to use commas to set off adverbs at the beginning of a sentence. You don't need both "near" and "by" because they perform the same function.
CThe city's atmosphere, TV shows, and gorgeous dishes, the whole world is fulfilled with peace and happiness.
Adding "the" at the beginning helps the reader understand what you mean.
You also might consider what TV show you're referring to — holiday shows, maybe?
"Filled" makes more sense in this context than "fulfilled." "Fulfilled" is often used in the context of a person. For example, if somebody enjoys her work and it gives her a sense of accomplishment, you could say "She is fulfilled by her job."
The world needs them now.
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Good job! I can tell what you're trying to communicate here.
Oct. 8, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
When I try to structure sentences in a different way than usual, the sentences still end up being awkward.
But I want to try different things, so I'll do my best with this style.
Because Christmas is December 25th and my birthday is 26th, also New Year's Day is very close, so there are a lot of events near by Christmas.
Use identifiers that identify whether there is one or more, like "are" which you missed, nearby is one word.
City's atmosphere, TV show, and gorgeous dishes, the whole world is fulfilled with peace and happiness.
"Fulfilled" is also correct, which means to accomplish a wish or something else, but filled is better since the world is abundant with it. And add a comma before and
The world needs them now.
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Your mistakes are in punctuation and some sophisticated rules on grammar and meaning, but overall, you did well.
Oct. 8, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
When I try to structure sentences in a different way than usual, the sentences still end up being awkward.
But I want to try different things, so I'll do my best with this style.
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I love Christmas. I love Christmas because Christmas is December 25th and my birthday is the 26th. It flows more naturally to combine these two sentences here. You usually wouldn't start a sentence with "because." |
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Because Christmas is December 25th and my birthday is 26th, also New Year's Day is very close, so there a lot of events near by Christmas. Because Christmas is December 25th and my birthday is 26th, also New Year's Day is very close, so there are a lot of events near Use identifiers that identify whether there is one or more, like "are" which you missed, nearby is one word.
Generally, it's good to use commas to set off adverbs at the beginning of a sentence. You don't need both "near" and "by" because they perform the same function.
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City's atmosphere, TV show and gorgeous dishes, the whole world is fulfilled with peace and happiness. City's atmosphere, TV show, and gorgeous dishes, the whole world is "Fulfilled" is also correct, which means to accomplish a wish or something else, but filled is better since the world is abundant with it. And add a comma before and
Adding "the" at the beginning helps the reader understand what you mean. You also might consider what TV show you're referring to — holiday shows, maybe? "Filled" makes more sense in this context than "fulfilled." "Fulfilled" is often used in the context of a person. For example, if somebody enjoys her work and it gives her a sense of accomplishment, you could say "She is fulfilled by her job."
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