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What is your favorite color?

I love blue that it’s called “Vermeer blue”.
Vermeer blue is made from Lapis Lazuli, the pigment.
At that time, that pigment was as expensive as gold and very valuable.

When I search about Vermeer blue, it says, an art exhibition featuring Girl with a Pearl Earring of Johannes Vermeer art exhibition will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.
I wonder if that is an original?


私は「フェルメールブルー」と呼ばれる青が大好きです。
フェルメールブルーはラピスラズリという顔料から作られています。
当時、その顔料は金と同じくらい高価で、非常に貴重なものでした。

フェルメールブルーについて調べると、ヨハネス・フェルメールの「真珠の耳飾りの少女」をテーマにした美術展が2026年8月末から9月末まで大阪で開催されると書いてあります。
それはオリジナルなのかなぁ?

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What is your favorite color?

I love the blue that it’'s called “Vermeer blue”.

Since you're referring to a specific type of blue, you can use "the" here (this points out that you're talking about one type of blue, rather than blue in general)

Vermeer blue is made from Lapis Lazuli, thea pigment.

"the" is technically ok to say here, but only if you can assume your audience knows about lapis lazuli and you're just reminding them of what it is. In any other case it would feel more natural to say "a pigment" to introduce it.

AtIn that timee past, thate pigment was as expensive as gold and very valuable.

At what time? It feels unnatural to go from the previous sentence that make no mention of time to this sentence that suddenly expects a reader to know about a specific time. Instead consider a phrase like "in the past".

When I searchgoogle about Vermeer blue, it says, an art exhibition featuring the painting "Girl with a Pearl

"When I search for "Vermeer blue"" would also work here, but the generally accepted verb for searching the internet is "to google" these days. Even when people don't use Google, they still say they're "googling" something.
"the painting" is technically not needed but adds some extra clarity for people who might not already know it's a painting.

Earring of" by Johannes Vermeer art exhibition will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.

When someone creates something we usually say it's "by" them. Eg: Great Expectations, by Charles Dickens

I wonder if that is an original?

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My favourite colour is probably red. But I don't really have very strong opinions about it.

What iIs yYour fFavorite cColor?

Proper capitalization in your title.

I love blue that it’which is called “Vermeer blue”.

"which" is the correct relative pronoun here.

Vermeer blue is made from Lapis Lazuli, the pigment.

More natural phrasing without the extra article.

When I searched about Vermeer blue, it says,id that an art exhibition featuring Girl with a Pearl

"searched" Past tense matches the action.
"It said that" Past tense consistency.

Earring ofby Johannes Vermeer art exhibition will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.

"by Johannes Vermeer." Correct preposition for authorship.

I wonder if that is an original?

"I wonder" already makes it indirect, so no question mark is needed.

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Corrections are mostly about relative pronouns, verb tense, and prepositions. Good job, keep writing!

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Thank you for correcting me.☺️
I’ll try my best.💪

What is your favorite color?

I love the shade of blue that it’s called “Vermeer blue”.

Vermeer blue is made from Lapis Lazuli, the pigmenta pigment called Lapis Lazuli.

Just slightly more natural phrasing.

At that time, that pigment was as expensive as gold and very valuable.

When I search about Vermeer blue, it says, an art exhibition featuring "Girl with a Pearl

Connecting with the next line

Earring of" by Johannes Vermeer art exhibition will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.

Connecting to the previous line.

I wonder if that is an original?

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知らなかったんですけど私も。そのフェルメールブルーを見れば何かリラックスできるように感じますね。

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“I love the shade of blue”.
In this case, it sounds more natural using “the shade of ".

Tiffany Blue is a beautiful color as well.
Thank you for correcting me and letting me know the phrase.😊

What is your favorite color?

I love a blue that it’'s called “Vermeer bBlue”.

While colors are usually not capitalized, since this is a color with a proper name, "Vermeer Blue" is capitalized.

Vermeer bBlue is made from Lapis Lazuli, the pigment.

At that time, that pigment was as expensive as gold and very valuable.

When I search aboutlooked up Vermeer bBlue, it says, anwhat came up was a Johannes Vermeer art exhibition featuring "Girl with a Pearl

This correction connects with the next one as one sentence.

Earring of Johannes Vermeer art exhibition" that will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.

I wonder if that is an original?

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I had never heard of this color before, but after looking it up, it is a very nice blue :)

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Thank you for correcting me.😊
Natural Ultramarine is still very expensive.
I looked up it.
Professional, high-quality powder(15g) is priced at 30000 yen and the commercial size (500g) costs more than 400000 yen.

What is your favorite color?


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What iIs yYour fFavorite cColor?

Proper capitalization in your title.

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I love blue that it’s called “Vermeer blue”.


I love a blue that it’'s called “Vermeer bBlue”.

While colors are usually not capitalized, since this is a color with a proper name, "Vermeer Blue" is capitalized.

I love the shade of blue that it’s called “Vermeer blue”.

I love blue that it’which is called “Vermeer blue”.

"which" is the correct relative pronoun here.

I love the blue that it’'s called “Vermeer blue”.

Since you're referring to a specific type of blue, you can use "the" here (this points out that you're talking about one type of blue, rather than blue in general)

Vermeer blue is made from Lapis Lazuli, the pigment.


Vermeer bBlue is made from Lapis Lazuli, the pigment.

Vermeer blue is made from Lapis Lazuli, the pigmenta pigment called Lapis Lazuli.

Just slightly more natural phrasing.

Vermeer blue is made from Lapis Lazuli, the pigment.

More natural phrasing without the extra article.

Vermeer blue is made from Lapis Lazuli, thea pigment.

"the" is technically ok to say here, but only if you can assume your audience knows about lapis lazuli and you're just reminding them of what it is. In any other case it would feel more natural to say "a pigment" to introduce it.

At that time, that pigment was as expensive as gold and very valuable.


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AtIn that timee past, thate pigment was as expensive as gold and very valuable.

At what time? It feels unnatural to go from the previous sentence that make no mention of time to this sentence that suddenly expects a reader to know about a specific time. Instead consider a phrase like "in the past".

When I search about Vermeer blue, it says, an art exhibition featuring Girl with a Pearl


When I search aboutlooked up Vermeer bBlue, it says, anwhat came up was a Johannes Vermeer art exhibition featuring "Girl with a Pearl

This correction connects with the next one as one sentence.

When I search about Vermeer blue, it says, an art exhibition featuring "Girl with a Pearl

Connecting with the next line

When I searched about Vermeer blue, it says,id that an art exhibition featuring Girl with a Pearl

"searched" Past tense matches the action. "It said that" Past tense consistency.

When I searchgoogle about Vermeer blue, it says, an art exhibition featuring the painting "Girl with a Pearl

"When I search for "Vermeer blue"" would also work here, but the generally accepted verb for searching the internet is "to google" these days. Even when people don't use Google, they still say they're "googling" something. "the painting" is technically not needed but adds some extra clarity for people who might not already know it's a painting.

Earring of Johannes Vermeer art exhibition will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.


Earring of Johannes Vermeer art exhibition" that will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.

Earring of" by Johannes Vermeer art exhibition will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.

Connecting to the previous line.

Earring ofby Johannes Vermeer art exhibition will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.

"by Johannes Vermeer." Correct preposition for authorship.

Earring of" by Johannes Vermeer art exhibition will be held in Osaka from the end of August to the end of September 2026.

When someone creates something we usually say it's "by" them. Eg: Great Expectations, by Charles Dickens

I wonder if that is an original?


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I wonder if that is an original?

"I wonder" already makes it indirect, so no question mark is needed.

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