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What is your favorite building in the world?
My favorite building in the world is the Kiyomizu dera temple in Kyoto, Japan. It’s a beautiful scenery with autumn leaves. However, I’m not cultured enough to know about various buildings around the world. What is your recommendation?
What is your favorite building in the world?
My favorite building in the world is the Kiyomizu dera temple in Kyoto, Japan.
It’s a beautiful scenery with autumn leaves.
However, I’m not cultured enough to know about various buildings around the world.
What is your recommendation?
What is your favorite building in the world?
My favorite building in the world is the Kiyomizu dera temple in Kyoto, Japan.
It’s a has beautiful scenery with the autumn leaves.
However, I’m not cultured enough to know about various buildings around the world.
What is your recommendation?
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えー、清水寺に行ったことがあってすごく綺麗ですね。私の好きなビルは奈良の東大寺です。でも日本で綺麗なビルがいっぱいありますね。
What is your favorite building in the world?
My favorite building in the world is the Kiyomizu dDera tTemple in Kyoto, Japan.
It’s a beautiful sceneryight with autumn leaves.
Everyone else's corrections work too, I just wanted to add another possibility
However, I’m not cultured enough to know about various buildings around the world.
What iare some buildings your'd recommendation seeing?
I changed this to specify what you want recommended... I think you are trying to ask about buildings we think are cool, but due to the previous sentence it sounded like you were asking us how to culture yourself.
yesterday
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
There were a few parts that sounded unnatural, but I think it was still written well.
yesterday
Np! Overall it was good.
And I have to correct myself, apparently 清水寺 is written in English as "Kiyomizu-dera" (why the random dash? Who knows...)
My favorite building in the world is the Kiyomizu dDera tTemple in Kyoto, Japan.
It’ has a beautiful scenery with autumn leaves.
yesterday
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
There were a few parts that sounded unnatural, but I think it was still written well.
What is your favorite building in the world?
My favorite building in the world is the Kiyomizu -dera temple in Kyoto, Japan.
It’s a beautiful sceneryview with autumn leaves.
"Scenery" is typically an uncountable noun. "View" would be more appropriate here.
However, I’m not cultured enough to know about various buildings around the world.
What is your recommendasuggestion?
"Suggestion" just feels more natural to me here, though I'm not sure why. I think it's because it feels less authoritative.
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I'm not very cultured when it comes to buildings myself... but some buildings I find cool-looking are the Flower Dome and Cloud Forest in Singapore!
yesterday
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
There were a few parts that sounded unnatural, but I think it was still written well.
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