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What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud

Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from the book I am reading. Which it is called 5 am Club, and I share my summary on a website. For my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections. That made feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anything so well.
I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue of take criticism and turned it into their favor, meaning they can learn a lot from theirselves and errors.
I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth. Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step up. They stay right there, in their comfort zone doing things they know exactly how to do.
The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it is, even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things. Specially, speaking of trying something and learn from your error, a two way road.
I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions. I do everything to improve in the language. I have a language thirty day plan, I practice in many ways, I put hours every week in.
Despite these, I still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without pay attention to other's people. Yet, I will learn, this will not last forever.
The whole point it is, I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.


Hey guys, any suggestion would be great.

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What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud?

Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from the book I am reading.

(Let me know if you don’t want me to correct commas)

I am ~ slightly more formal
I’m ~ more colloquial, fits the diary-like style you are doing!

WhichThat it is called 5 am Club, and I shared my summary on a website.

Which is correct, that is more natural and common

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

I did not -> already implies past, use the present adjective

The phrase is always ‘to my surprise’

ThaIt madkes me feel so good, that sometimesproud/good when I can write about anything so topic well.

About anything -> too brief in this context, ‘any topic’ better

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue of takeing criticism and turneding it into their favor, meanings that they can learn a lot from theirselves and errors.

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.

Thinking about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step upimprove.

Always “thinking about it”

Step up -> to a responsibility. Improve is better for your thesis

They stay right there, in their comfort zone doing things they know exactly how to do.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing ithis is, even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge into so many things.

SI’m specifically, speaking of trying something and learning from your errors, a two way roadstreet.

I fouind my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I do everything to improve in the language.

I have a language thirty day language plan, I practice in many ways, I put in hours every week in.

Despite theseis, I’m still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

What needs practicing: remembering soy -> I am

The gerund also needs practice

Yet, I willhave learn,t, that this will not last forever.

The whole point it is, I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.

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Sept. 13, 2022

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Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from the book I am reading.

I am okay with any suggestion, as long as it sounds ok that way I learn different styles.Thanks for asking!

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Kist

Sept. 13, 2022

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WhichThat it is called 5 am Club, and I shared my summary on a website.

Good to know! The explanation of the differences helps me a lot! thank you.

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Kist

Sept. 13, 2022

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Despite theseis, I’m still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

I cut the subject a lot, because in Spanish we can, Error!

What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud?

Today I felt proud, because I madwrote a summary fromabout the book I am reading.

Which iIt is called 5 am Club, and I shared my summary on a website.

I guess you already wrote and shared your summary, so the verb should be in the past since the action was done, complete

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

Be careful when using the auxiliary (did + verb), the verb keeps its original form

That made feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anysomething so well.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue tof take criticism and turned it into their favor, meanings they can learn a lot from theirmselves and errors.

I have learndiscovered, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter ofpersonal growth.

The verb "to learn" is redundant, hence I offered an alternative

Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step up.

They stay right there, in their comfort zone, doing things they know exactly how to do.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it is,s that even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.

SEspecially, speaking of trying something and learning from your errormistakes, a two -way road.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I do everything to improve in the language.

I have a language thirty day plan, I practice in many ways, I put in hours every week in.

Despite theseat, I still am not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

Yet, I will learn, this will not last forever.

The whole point it is,s I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.

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I'm proud of you and I wish you the best in your further endeavours!

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Sept. 8, 2022

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Thank you so much and for encouraging me!

Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from thea book I amhave read / I have finished reading.

I'm not sure if this is what you mean.

Which i It is called 5 am Club, and I share my summary on a website.

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

That made me feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anything so well.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue of takeing criticism and turned it into their favor, meaningwould also mean that they can learn a lot from theirmselves and (their) errors.

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter ofpersonal growth.

Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step upimprove.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it isis that, even though I know all of thatese things, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.

Specially, speaking of trying somethtrying to say something in the language you are learning and learning from your error, is a two -way road.

I think this is what you're trying to say.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I do everything to improve in the language I am trying to learn.

I have a language thirty -day language plan,. I practice in many ways, and I put in hours every week in.

Despite these, I still do not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to gowhich is going out there and just trying my best without paying attention to other's / other people.

Yet, I will learn, and this will not last forever.

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Good luck and don't give up!

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Sept. 1, 2022

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Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from thea book I amhave read / I have finished reading.

I didn’t finish the book, just a chapter. So I am assuming it could be "I made a summary from a book's chapter?" I would like to know.

What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud?

Needs a question mark "?" here.

Today I felt proud, because I madwrote a summary ofrom the book I am reading.

Which iIt is called 5 am Club, and I shared my summary on a website.

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

That made me feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anything so well.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtuecapability of takeing criticism and turneding it into their favor, meaning they can learn a lot fromabout theirmselves and their errors.

"Virtue" may not necessarily be wrong here, but "capability" is used a lot more in situations like this one.

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.

You didn't need the comma here, but otherwise, this sentence is correct :)

Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step up.

You can also say:
"are unable to move forward" or "are unable to advance"

This sentence is also correct. I thought that some alternatives would be nice to know about :)

They stay right there, in their comfort zone doing things they know exactly how to do.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it is,s, that even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.

SEspecially, speaking of trying something and learning from your errors, which is a two -way roadstreet.

"Two-way street" is a set phrase.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

You didn't need a comma here.

I have a 30-day language thirty day plan, I practice in many ways, and I put in hours every week in.

Numbers over ten can be written in their number form.

Despite these things, I'm still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most,; to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

Yet, I will learn, t. This will not last forever.

This sentence looks better when it's separated in two. "This will not last forever" now has more impact when it's on its own.

The whole point it is,of this is that I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.

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Congratulations on taking that big step forward! Every little bit of practice helps :)

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Sept. 1, 2022

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I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtuecapability of takeing criticism and turneding it into their favor, meaning they can learn a lot fromabout theirmselves and their errors.

Thank for the suggestion, I learned something new (:

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Sept. 1, 2022

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I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.

Good! to be honest I am not sure how to use them. (:

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Sept. 1, 2022

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Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step up.

Alternatives are always welcome, they help a lot!

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Sept. 1, 2022

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Hey Jasmine, thanks so much for the corrections and suggestions. Really helpful.

What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud

Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from the book I am reading.

Which iIt is called 5 am Club, and I share my summary on a website.

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

That made me feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anything so well.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue tof take criticism and turned it into their favor, meaning they can learn a lot from theirmselves and their errors.

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.

Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged,made mistakes are unable to step up.

have been wronged sounds like they are incorrectly accused.

They stay right there, in their comfort zone doing things they know exactly howwhat to do.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it is, even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.

SEspecially, speaking of trying something and learning from your errors, a two way road.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I do everything to improve in the language.

I have a language thirty day plan, I practice in many ways, I put hours every week in.

Despite these, I am still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

Yet, I will learn, that this will not last forever.

The whole point it is, I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.

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too many commas I feel, but well done

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Sept. 1, 2022

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I am learning how to use commas in English 😂 Thanks!

Which iIt is called 5 am Club, and I share my summary on a website.

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

ThaIt made me feel so good, that sometimes I canI could write about anysomething so well.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue tof take criticism and turneduse it into their favor,. This meanings they can learn a lot from theirmselves and from their errors.

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.

Specially, speaking of trying to do something and learning from your error, is a two -way road.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I do everything to improve in themy language. skills.

I have a language thirty -day plan, I practice in many ways, I put to practice language skills. I practice in different many ways and put in many hours every week in.

Despite these, Iis, I am still not doing what I know it is going towill help me the most, to go: going out there and just trying my best without paying attention to other's people's opinions.

Yet, I will learn, thismy lack of knowledge will not last forever.

The whole point it is,s I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.

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Great understanding of detailed and complex concepts. Despite grammar errors, I was able to understand everything you were saying very well! Keep up the good work!

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Sept. 1, 2022

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Great! grammar is hard, but being able to deliver the message it's what matter to me at the end. Thank you so much!

What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud


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What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud?

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What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud?

What is the one thing you did today that made you feel proud?

Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from the book I am reading.


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Today I felt proud, because I madwrote a summary ofrom the book I am reading.

Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from thea book I amhave read / I have finished reading.

I'm not sure if this is what you mean.

Today I felt proud, because I madwrote a summary fromabout the book I am reading.

Today I felt proud, because I made a summary from the book I am reading.

(Let me know if you don’t want me to correct commas) I am ~ slightly more formal I’m ~ more colloquial, fits the diary-like style you are doing!

Which it is called 5 am Club, and I share my summary on a website.


Which iIt is called 5 am Club, and I share my summary on a website.

Which iIt is called 5 am Club, and I share my summary on a website.

Which iIt is called 5 am Club, and I shared my summary on a website.

Which i It is called 5 am Club, and I share my summary on a website.

Which iIt is called 5 am Club, and I shared my summary on a website.

I guess you already wrote and shared your summary, so the verb should be in the past since the action was done, complete

WhichThat it is called 5 am Club, and I shared my summary on a website.

Which is correct, that is more natural and common

For my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.


ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

Be careful when using the auxiliary (did + verb), the verb keeps its original form

ForTo my surprise, I did not received a lot of corrections.

I did not -> already implies past, use the present adjective The phrase is always ‘to my surprise’

That made feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anything so well.


ThaIt made me feel so good, that sometimes I canI could write about anysomething so well.

That made me feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anything so well.

That made me feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anything so well.

That made me feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anything so well.

That made feel so good, that sometimes I can write about anysomething so well.

ThaIt madkes me feel so good, that sometimesproud/good when I can write about anything so topic well.

About anything -> too brief in this context, ‘any topic’ better

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue of take criticism and turned it into their favor, meaning they can learn a lot from theirselves and errors.


I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue tof take criticism and turneduse it into their favor,. This meanings they can learn a lot from theirmselves and from their errors.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue tof take criticism and turned it into their favor, meaning they can learn a lot from theirmselves and their errors.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtuecapability of takeing criticism and turneding it into their favor, meaning they can learn a lot fromabout theirmselves and their errors.

"Virtue" may not necessarily be wrong here, but "capability" is used a lot more in situations like this one.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue of takeing criticism and turned it into their favor, meaningwould also mean that they can learn a lot from theirmselves and (their) errors.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue tof take criticism and turned it into their favor, meanings they can learn a lot from theirmselves and errors.

I always take the corrections as constructive criticism, because I know that people who have the virtue of takeing criticism and turneding it into their favor, meanings that they can learn a lot from theirselves and errors.

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.


I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter of growth.

You didn't need the comma here, but otherwise, this sentence is correct :)

I have learned, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter ofpersonal growth.

I have learndiscovered, that learning from your errors has a lot to do with the matter ofpersonal growth.

The verb "to learn" is redundant, hence I offered an alternative

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Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step up.


Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged,made mistakes are unable to step up.

have been wronged sounds like they are incorrectly accused.

Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step up.

You can also say: "are unable to move forward" or "are unable to advance" This sentence is also correct. I thought that some alternatives would be nice to know about :)

Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step upimprove.

Think about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step up.

Thinking about it, those who are not willing to realize where they have been wronged, are unable to step upimprove.

Always “thinking about it” Step up -> to a responsibility. Improve is better for your thesis

They stay right there, in their comfort zone doing things they know exactly how to do.


They stay right there, in their comfort zone doing things they know exactly howwhat to do.

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They stay right there, in their comfort zone, doing things they know exactly how to do.

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The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it is, even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.


The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it is, even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it is,s, that even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it isis that, even though I know all of thatese things, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing it is,s that even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge in so many things.

The funny thing about this thought I am sharing ithis is, even though I know all of that, I am still so afraid of taking the plunge into so many things.

Specially, speaking of trying something and learn from your error, a two way road.


Specially, speaking of trying to do something and learning from your error, is a two -way road.

SEspecially, speaking of trying something and learning from your errors, a two way road.

SEspecially, speaking of trying something and learning from your errors, which is a two -way roadstreet.

"Two-way street" is a set phrase.

Specially, speaking of trying somethtrying to say something in the language you are learning and learning from your error, is a two -way road.

I think this is what you're trying to say.

SEspecially, speaking of trying something and learning from your errormistakes, a two -way road.

SI’m specifically, speaking of trying something and learning from your errors, a two way roadstreet.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.


I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

You didn't need a comma here.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I found my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I fouind my self so worried, about other people's opinions.

I do everything to improve in the language.


I do everything to improve in themy language. skills.

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I do everything to improve in the language I am trying to learn.

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I have a language thirty day plan, I practice in many ways, I put hours every week in.


I have a language thirty -day plan, I practice in many ways, I put to practice language skills. I practice in different many ways and put in many hours every week in.

I have a language thirty day plan, I practice in many ways, I put hours every week in.

I have a 30-day language thirty day plan, I practice in many ways, and I put in hours every week in.

Numbers over ten can be written in their number form.

I have a language thirty -day language plan,. I practice in many ways, and I put in hours every week in.

I have a language thirty day plan, I practice in many ways, I put in hours every week in.

I have a language thirty day language plan, I practice in many ways, I put in hours every week in.

Despite these, I still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without pay attention to other's people.


Despite these, Iis, I am still not doing what I know it is going towill help me the most, to go: going out there and just trying my best without paying attention to other's people's opinions.

Despite these, I am still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

Despite these things, I'm still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most,; to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

Despite these, I still do not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to gowhich is going out there and just trying my best without paying attention to other's / other people.

Despite theseat, I still am not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

Despite theseis, I’m still not doing what I know it is going to help me the most, to go out there and just try my best without paying attention to other's people.

What needs practicing: remembering soy -> I am The gerund also needs practice

Yet, I will learn, this will not last forever.


Yet, I will learn, thismy lack of knowledge will not last forever.

Yet, I will learn, that this will not last forever.

Yet, I will learn, t. This will not last forever.

This sentence looks better when it's separated in two. "This will not last forever" now has more impact when it's on its own.

Yet, I will learn, and this will not last forever.

Yet, I will learn, this will not last forever.

Yet, I willhave learn,t, that this will not last forever.

The whole point it is, I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.


The whole point it is,s I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.

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The whole point it is,of this is that I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.

The whole point it is,s I know I am improving, and today that little step felt great.

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