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What is the Most Expensive Item That You Have on Today?

The most expensive item I have on today is my watch. This is a watch that I gave myself when I graduated university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

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What is the Most Expensive Item Tthat You Have on Today?

The most expensive item I have on today is my watch.

This is a watch that I gave myself when I graduated from university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

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すごいですね。よく書けています!

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TOMO_o

Feb. 18, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

This is a watch that I gavebought myself when I graduated university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

gave -> bought: "buying" yourself something is interpreted as the equivalent of "giving yourself a gift", which is teh case here.

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Feb. 15, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

The most expensive item I have on me today is my watch.

This is a watch that I gavebought myself when I graduated university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

What is the Most Expensive Item That You Have on Today?

The most expensive item I have on today is my watch.

This is a watch that I gave myself when I graduated from (my) university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

• The university graduated many students.
• I graduated FROM university.

(In American English, we would say “from college” or “from my university” instead of “from university.”)

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For more about “graduate from,” see here:
https://forum.wordreference.com/threads/graduate-high-school-graduate-from-high-school-college.564251/

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

What is the Most Expensive Item That You Have on Today?

The most expensive item I have on today is my watch.

This is a watch that I gave myself when I graduated university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

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Perfect!

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

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What is the Most Expensive Item Tthat You Have on Today?

The most expensive item I have on today is my watch.


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The most expensive item I have on me today is my watch.

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This is a watch that I gave myself when I graduated university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.


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This is a watch that I gavebought myself when I graduated university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

This is a watch that I gavebought myself when I graduated university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

gave -> bought: "buying" yourself something is interpreted as the equivalent of "giving yourself a gift", which is teh case here.

This is a watch that I gave myself when I graduated from (my) university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

• The university graduated many students. • I graduated FROM university. (In American English, we would say “from college” or “from my university” instead of “from university.”)

This is a watch that I gave myself when I graduated from university, and I have taken good care of it for decades.

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