Jan. 24, 2025
Art is everywhere. It helps people express themselves and makes the world more beautiful. people use art everywhere.
Firstly, people use the art for job. for example singers say song for money, fun or pleasure. This makes them money.
secondly, it helps people about question solutions. for example students get better and easier understand with photos telling.
Thirdly, it helps our culture and this make easier to introduce our country the other country. for example with traditional dances, traditional musics etc.
In conclusion, art is very important for our lives. art is not just for fun. it is important for culture for job for education. So life is more livable and colorful with art.
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pPeople use art everywhere.
Firstly, people use the art for job.work in artistic careers
We wouldn't really say people "use art" for jobs. "Use art" brings to mind using the products of art, e.g. using a painting as decoration, or using a song for entertainment. Producing art would use other expressions depending on context
fFor example ( singers say/ vocalists ) sing songs for money, fun or pleasure.
sSecondly, it helps people about question solutionsunderstand things better.
fFor example students get better and easier understandunderstand things easier when shown with photos telling.
"telling" is rarely used to do with images. Someone might use it in e.g. a review of a piece of art, but it's a very niche usage.
Thirdly, it helps our culture and this makes it easier to introduce our country theo other (countries / people of other countryies).
fFor example with traditional dances, traditional musics etc.
aArt is not just for fun.
iIt is important for culture, for jobs, and for education.
what is the importance of art?
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sSecondly, it helps people aboutnswer questions and find solutions.
fFor example students get better and easier understand with photos tell, photos can help students understand things.
Thirdly, it helps our culture, and this makes it easier to introduce our country theo other countryies.
fFor example with, traditional dances, traditional musics, etc.
aArt is not just for fun.
iIt is important for culture, for jobs, and for education.
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Great job!
It helps people ot express themselves and makes the world more beautiful.
people use art everywhere.
Firstly, people use the art for job.
wWhat is the importance of art?
Art is everywhere.
It helps people express themselves and makes the world more beautiful.
pPeople use art everywhere.
Firstly, people use the art for jobat work.
fFor example, singers saymight soing for money, fun, or pleasure.
This makes them moneyis how they earn a living.
I would remove this sentence. I think it’s redundant.
sSecondly, it helps people about question solutions.
“Firstly” and “secondly” are valid words but they sound awkward so often that I would use “first” and “second.” This is one of those strange English things where what is proper sounds strange in practical use!
fFor example students get better and easier understand with photos telling, photos help students come to an understanding more quickly and easily.
Thirdly, it helps our culture and t. This makes it easier to introduce our country connect withe other countryies.
fFor example with, this could include traditional dances, traditional musics, etc.
In conclusion, art is very important for our lives.
aArt is not just for fun.
iIt is important for culture, for jobwork, and for education.
So life is more livable and colorful with art.
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art is not just for fun.
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it is important for culture for job for education.
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So life is more livable and colorful with art. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
what is the importance of art?
what is the importance of art? Alternatively, you could say "Why is art important?"
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It helps people express themselves and makes the world more beautiful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It helps people ot express themselves and makes the world more beautiful. |
people use art everywhere.
people use art everywhere.
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Firstly, people use the art for job. First Firstly, people use the art for job. First Firstly, people We wouldn't really say people "use art" for jobs. "Use art" brings to mind using the products of art, e.g. using a painting as decoration, or using a song for entertainment. Producing art would use other expressions depending on context |
for example singers say song for money, fun or pleasure.
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This makes them money. This I would remove this sentence. I think it’s redundant. |
secondly, it helps people about question solutions.
“Firstly” and “secondly” are valid words but they sound awkward so often that I would use “first” and “second.” This is one of those strange English things where what is proper sounds strange in practical use!
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for example students get better and easier understand with photos telling.
"telling" is rarely used to do with images. Someone might use it in e.g. a review of a piece of art, but it's a very niche usage. |
Thirdly, it helps our culture and this make easier to introduce our country the other country. Third Third Thirdly, it helps our culture and this makes it easier to introduce our country t |
for example with traditional dances, traditional musics etc.
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