March 22, 2025
What is the ideal degree of the campus openness
On my way to canteen, I was shock by the scene before my eyes:there were so many people in my campus and most of them were not students and professors,including pupils,familys,elderly etc,as if my campus is likened to a park,not a place for studying.What's worse,the canteen was filled with external personnel and there was a long line in every each windows,and almost no seat.
I feel disturbed,but I should also take consideration of off-campus personnel.Maybe my campus is actually a beautiful park for them(actually it is so beautiful).But what is the ideal degree of campus openness?I count the ratio of internal person and external person roughly.This number in workday maybe two,but on weekend will be 0.5 or even lower to 0.2.It's unbelievable.By the way,my school is not bad,maybe the top 10 in china.
In my opinion,the school should restrict the access of off-campus personnel to create an environment beneficial for studying and researching.But the off-campus personnel should have once to five opportunities to enter the campus.Unfortunately,the present situation seems like all the people can enter freely.
What's your opinion?And what is your country's campus openness extent?
What is the ideal degree of the campus openness?
On my way to canteen, I was shocked by the scene before my eyes: there were so many people ion my campus and most of them were not students andor professors, including pupils, familyies, elderly etc, as if my campus is likened towas a park, not a place for studying. What's worse, the canteen was filled with external personnelople and there was a long line in every each windows, and almost no seats.
You could say "each and every window" if you wanted.
I feel disturbed, but I should also take consideration of off-campus personnel.ople. Maybe my campus is actually a beautiful park for them (actually it is so beautiful). But what is the ideal degree of campus openness? I count the ratio of internal person and external personople roughly. This number in workday may be two,2, but on weekends will be 0.5 or even lower to 0.2. It's unbelievable. By the way, my school is not bad, maybe the top 10 in china.
In my opinion, the school should restrict the access of off-campus personnelople to create an environment beneficial for studying and researching. But the off-campus personnelople should have once to five opportunities to enter the campus. Unfortunately, the present situation seems like all the people can enter freely.
What's your opinion? And what is your country's campus openness extent?
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Very nice, mostly just needs work on punctuation :)
At the school I went to in the US, our campus was also very beautiful, so it was a great place to walk through for people not affiliated with the university. However, it was never too crowded, and I always felt like the majority of people on-campus were either students or staff.
What is the ideal degree of the campus openness?
On my way to the canteen, I was shocked by the scene before my eyes: there were so many people ion my campus and most of them were not students andor professors,including. There were pupils,(?), familyies, elderly etc,people, etc., as if my campus is likened towere a park, not a place for studying. What's worse, the canteen was filled with external personneloutsiders and there was a long line inat every each windows, and almost no seats.
“Pupils” doesn’t make sense because pupils are also students. Maybe you mean “young students”?
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Be careful of the spacing around punctuation. This is much more important in English than in Chinese.
Add a blank space after each period, comma, etc.
Wrong: I like cats.They are warm,soft,cuddly and entertaining.
Right: I like cats. They are warm, soft, cuddly and entertaining.
What is the ideal degree of the campus openness
On my way to the canteen, I was shocked by the scene before my eyes: there were so many people ion my campus and most of them were not students andor professors,including. Instead they were pupils, familyies, elderly etc, as if my campus is likened towere a park, not a place for studying. What's worse,the canteen was filled with external personnel and there was a long line in every each windows, and almost no seats.
It would be better to write shorter sentences.
I feel disturbed, but I should also take into consideration ofthe off-campus personnel. Maybe my campus is actually a beautiful park for them (actually it is sovery beautiful). But what is the ideal degree of campus openness? I roughly counted the ratio of internal personople and external person roughly.visitors. This number ion a workday may be two, but on weekend will be 0.5 or even lower to 0.2. It's unbelievable.! By the way, my school is not bad, maybe in the top 10 in cChina.
In my opinion, the school should restrict the access of off-campus personnel to create an environment beneficial forto studying and researching. But the off-campus personnel should have once to five opportunities to enter the campus. Unfortunately, the present situation seems like all the peoplnyone can enter freely.
I'm not quite sure what you mean by "one to five opportunities to enter the campus"
What's your opinion? And what is your country'sthe extent of campus openness extentin your country?
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Your text is perfectly understandable but there are sometimes minor errors in adjectives, verb tenses and prepositions. Be careful with spaces and punctuation as without them, it's hard to read your text.
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In my opinion, the school should restrict the access of off-campus personnel to create an environment beneficial for studying and researching. But the off-campus personnel should have once to five opportunities to enter the campus. Unfortunately, the present situation seems like all the people can enter freely.
What's your opinion? And what is your country's campus openness extent?
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Don’t forget spacing! That makes the writing very difficult to read.
Also unfortunately it’s totally normal for famous campuses to have a constant flow of visitors. Visitors aren’t allowed in the classroom or in libraries. I used to live across the street from the Princeton University campus and during the summer the crowds were especially intense. But the public is restricted just to the outside portion, they cannot go inside buildings.
March 22, 2025
Thank for your useful advice.I always ignore this problem.
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