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I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes. I guess I imagine someone's personality unconsciously from their eyes. They often say "The eyes are the window to the soul" in Japan. I also notice their attitude to other people like shop assistants or restaurant servers.
I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes first.
Yours is fine. I would say it this way.
I guess, unconsciously, I imagine someone's personality unconsciouslfrom their eyes.¶
Unconsciously, I guess I imagine someone's personality from their eyes.
Yours is fine. I would move the adverb closer to the person it modifies.
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What is the first thing you notice about a person? |
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I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes. I Yours is fine. I would say it this way. |
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I guess I imagine someone's personality unconsciously from their eyes. I guess, unconsciously, I imagine someone's personality Yours is fine. I would move the adverb closer to the person it modifies. |
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They often say "The eyes are the window to the soul" in Japan. |
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I also notice their attitude to other people like shop assistants or restaurant servers. |
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