Nov. 29, 2025
What is the first thing you notice about a person?
I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes. I guess I imagine someone's personality unconsciously from their eyes. They often say "The eyes are the window to the soul" in Japan. I also notice their attitude to other people like shop assistants or restaurant servers.
What is the first thing you notice about a person?
IThe first noticething I notice about someone is the uniqueness of someone'stheir eyes.
Maybe just how I would say it but I think yours is fine too.
I guess I imagine someone's personality unconsciously from their eyes.
They often say "The eyes are the window to the soul" in Japan.
I also notice their attitude towards other people, like to shop assistants or restaurant servers.
I think yours is fine, maybe this is how I would say it.
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Good job!
Dec. 2, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm very happy that I was able to write it very well this time.
That's great.
I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes first.
Yours is fine. I would say it this way.
I guess, unconsciously, I imagine someone's personality unconsciouslfrom their eyes.¶
Unconsciously, I guess I imagine someone's personality from their eyes.
Yours is fine. I would move the adverb closer to the person it modifies.
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No errors. Good job!
Nov. 30, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm very happy that I was able to write it very well this time.
That's great.
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What is the first thing you notice about a person? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes. I Yours is fine. I would say it this way.
Maybe just how I would say it but I think yours is fine too. |
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I guess I imagine someone's personality unconsciously from their eyes. I guess, unconsciously, I imagine someone's personality Yours is fine. I would move the adverb closer to the person it modifies. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They often say "The eyes are the window to the soul" in Japan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also notice their attitude to other people like shop assistants or restaurant servers. I also notice their attitude towards other people, like to shop assistants or restaurant servers. I think yours is fine, maybe this is how I would say it. |
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