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What is the first thing you notice about a person?

I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes. I guess I imagine someone's personality unconsciously from their eyes. They often say "The eyes are the window to the soul" in Japan. I also notice their attitude to other people like shop assistants or restaurant servers.

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I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes first.

Yours is fine. I would say it this way.

I guess, unconsciously, I imagine someone's personality unconsciouslfrom their eyes.¶
Unconsciously, I guess I imagine someone's personalit
y from their eyes.

Yours is fine. I would move the adverb closer to the person it modifies.

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What is the first thing you notice about a person?


I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes.


I first notice the uniqueness of someone's eyes first.

Yours is fine. I would say it this way.

I guess I imagine someone's personality unconsciously from their eyes.


I guess, unconsciously, I imagine someone's personality unconsciouslfrom their eyes.¶
Unconsciously, I guess I imagine someone's personalit
y from their eyes.

Yours is fine. I would move the adverb closer to the person it modifies.

They often say "The eyes are the window to the soul" in Japan.


I also notice their attitude to other people like shop assistants or restaurant servers.


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