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July 4, 2025

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What is the best part of your outfit today?

The best part of my outfit is Y-shirt. I bought it to summer season few years ago, and it is made by special ingredients with which I can feel cooler. It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this Y-shirt saves my life.

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What is the best part of your outfit today?

The best part of my outfit is Ymy T-shirt.

I corrected “Y-shirt” to “T-shirt” because that is the correct term. Adding “my” before “T-shirt” makes the sentence sound more natural and shows ownership, which is typical when talking about your own clothes.

I bought it to summer season few years agoa few years ago for the summer season, and it is made bywith special ingredients with which I canmaterials that help me feel cooler.

The phrase “to summer season few years ago” is grammatically incorrect and unnatural in English. Saying “a few years ago for the summer season” puts the time phrase in the right order and uses “for” correctly to explain the purpose of the purchase. Also, clothes are made from “materials,” not “ingredients,” so “made with special materials” sounds natural. The phrase “that help me feel cooler” is simpler and easier to understand than “with which I can feel cooler,” making the sentence flow more smoothly and sound more conversational.

It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this YT-shirt really saves my life.

I kept “T-shirt” consistent in this sentence, and added “really” to make the sentence sound more natural and to emphasize how much the T-shirt helps you during hot days.

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Your writing is clear and polite. Using more natural expressions will make it flow better and sound more conversational. Keep it up—you’re doing well!

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TOMO_o

July 5, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
The explanations of when each vocabulary word is used will be very helpful for me in the future.

The best part of my outfit is Ymy T-shirt.

I bought it tofor the summer seasona few years ago, and it is made byout of special ingredients with which I canmaterials that make me feel cooler.

It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this YT-shirt saves my life.

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TOMO_o

July 5, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.

The best part of my outfit is Y-the shirt.

I bought it toduring summer seasona few years ago, and it is made byof special ingredients with whichso I can feel cooler.

"made by A" -> A is the person or company that made an item
"made of B" -> B is a material used to make an item

It has been unbelievably hot these dayslately, so this Y-shirt saves my life.

these days is a bit of a wider time period than lately. Assuming you're talking about the last few days/weeks, I think lately is better.

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I think there's a little regional variety in whether you need to say "dress shirt" or just "shirt". Here, a dress shirt is something formal, that you might wear to a interview, or a formal party. There are button up shirts that are not "dress shirts", and shirt covers all of them. If you just say "shirt", nobody here will think you're talking about a t-shirt (but they might in other English speaking countries).

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TOMO_o

July 5, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
The explanations of when each vocabulary word is used will be very helpful for me in the future.

What is the best part of your outfit today?

The best part of my outfit is Y-the dress shirt.

By "Y-shirt", are you referring to ワイシャツ? In English, they are known as dress shirts. Most English speakers will not understand what a Y-shirt is.

I bought it toduring (the) summer season a few years ago, and it is made bywith special ingredients with which I canmaterials which feel cooler.

(1) The phrase is "made with (something)". "Made by" is used when referring to the creator, such as in the phrase "this shirt was made by Uniqlo" or "this car was made by machines".
(2) "Materials" might be more suitable here. "Ingredients" is typically used in the context of food (though it can be used in other situations too).
(3) "With which" here strikes me as a little unnatural. "Which feel cooler" will suffice.

It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this Y-dress shirt saves my life.

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TOMO_o

July 5, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
The explanations of when each vocabulary word is used will be very helpful for me in the future.

What is the best part of your outfit today?

If you want this as a proper title: What Is the Best Part of Your Outfit Today?

The best part of my outfit is my Y-shirt.

I bought it toduring the summer season few years ago, and it is made byof special ingredients with which I canhich feel cooler.

I simplified the ending here for something more natural.

Things are made OF something: the bowl is made of wood
Things are made BY people (or companies): the bowl was made by Mary

It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this Y-shirt saves my life.

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Good job.

I have no idea what a Y-shirt is, you might need to explain it to your English audience :)

The best part of my outfit today are my stretchy shorts! They are comfortable and also help me keep cool in this heat.

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TOMO_o

July 5, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
The explanations of when each vocabulary word is used will be very helpful for me in the future.

What is the best part of your outfit today?


What is the best part of your outfit today?

If you want this as a proper title: What Is the Best Part of Your Outfit Today?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The best part of my outfit is Y-shirt.


The best part of my outfit is my Y-shirt.

The best part of my outfit is Y-the dress shirt.

By "Y-shirt", are you referring to ワイシャツ? In English, they are known as dress shirts. Most English speakers will not understand what a Y-shirt is.

The best part of my outfit is Y-the shirt.

The best part of my outfit is Ymy T-shirt.

The best part of my outfit is Ymy T-shirt.

I corrected “Y-shirt” to “T-shirt” because that is the correct term. Adding “my” before “T-shirt” makes the sentence sound more natural and shows ownership, which is typical when talking about your own clothes.

I bought it to summer season few years ago, and it is made by special ingredients with which I can feel cooler.


I bought it toduring the summer season few years ago, and it is made byof special ingredients with which I canhich feel cooler.

I simplified the ending here for something more natural. Things are made OF something: the bowl is made of wood Things are made BY people (or companies): the bowl was made by Mary

I bought it toduring (the) summer season a few years ago, and it is made bywith special ingredients with which I canmaterials which feel cooler.

(1) The phrase is "made with (something)". "Made by" is used when referring to the creator, such as in the phrase "this shirt was made by Uniqlo" or "this car was made by machines". (2) "Materials" might be more suitable here. "Ingredients" is typically used in the context of food (though it can be used in other situations too). (3) "With which" here strikes me as a little unnatural. "Which feel cooler" will suffice.

I bought it toduring summer seasona few years ago, and it is made byof special ingredients with whichso I can feel cooler.

"made by A" -> A is the person or company that made an item "made of B" -> B is a material used to make an item

I bought it tofor the summer seasona few years ago, and it is made byout of special ingredients with which I canmaterials that make me feel cooler.

I bought it to summer season few years agoa few years ago for the summer season, and it is made bywith special ingredients with which I canmaterials that help me feel cooler.

The phrase “to summer season few years ago” is grammatically incorrect and unnatural in English. Saying “a few years ago for the summer season” puts the time phrase in the right order and uses “for” correctly to explain the purpose of the purchase. Also, clothes are made from “materials,” not “ingredients,” so “made with special materials” sounds natural. The phrase “that help me feel cooler” is simpler and easier to understand than “with which I can feel cooler,” making the sentence flow more smoothly and sound more conversational.

It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this Y-shirt saves my life.


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It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this Y-dress shirt saves my life.

It has been unbelievably hot these dayslately, so this Y-shirt saves my life.

these days is a bit of a wider time period than lately. Assuming you're talking about the last few days/weeks, I think lately is better.

It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this YT-shirt saves my life.

It has been unbelievably hot these days, so this YT-shirt really saves my life.

I kept “T-shirt” consistent in this sentence, and added “really” to make the sentence sound more natural and to emphasize how much the T-shirt helps you during hot days.

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