May 9, 2023
What is one way you can measure growth and progress?
This is something I have tried to do for a while now. It is really tough to measure anything with no numbers. However, some ways I have tried are being aware of how I feel in certain situations that gave me anxiety in the past. To forgive myself for the mistakes I make, and to accept that seeking perfection is not fair.
I have been seeking out books and habits that can help me and lead me towards the things and goals I have. One thing I can say I have made progress and moved a little forward is speaking to people specially native speakers. Trying to not avoid awkward and cringy moments where I am probably be nervous in. I am a very introvert person and speaking another language just give me more insecurities, but I embrace it. Where I have been failing is in consistency and planning. The fact that I have made myself being so focused on progress and put myself through it makes me feel overwhelmed. Then, to cope all my emotions I take longer break that I should. Although, recognizing it is another step further. Acknowledging my emotions and letting them exist is another improvement. Also, accepting that I am human and there is room for failing is ok and I can always try and come back stronger is progress. For now my next step should be applying for a corporate job and expose myself to new challenging scenarios, and keep working in my daily basis routine.
Hi guys, I am trying to write pretty neutral, not to formal not to casual. Also, I have some trouble linking thoughts so any help will be appreciated.
This is something I have triedbeen trying to do for a while now.
Been trying indicates a continuous process
It is really tough to measure anythingqualities with noout numbers.
Fun fact: data without numbers (ex. Colors) is “qualitative” while data with numbers (ex. Height) is “quantitative”
However, some ways I have tried are being aware of how I feel I've found that recognizing certain situations that gave me anxiety in the past is helpful.
TI've also learned to forgive myself for the mistakes I make, and to accept that seeking perfection is not fair.
I have been seeking out books and habits that can help me and lead me towards the things and goals I havemy goals.
One thing I can say I have made progress and moved a little forwardimproved at progress is speaking to people , especially native speakers.
Trying to notI'm learning not to avoid awkward and cringy moments where I am probabl, even though I may be nervous in.
I am a very introverted person and am insecure about speaking another language just give me more insecurities, but I embrace it.
Me too dude, speaking is so difficult and it feels embarrassing for no reason 🥲
The fact that I have made myself being so focused on progress and put myself through it makes meI focus so much on progress that I feel overwhelmed.
Then, to cope with all my emotions, I take longer breaks thatn I should.
AlthoughHowever, recognizing it is another step further step in the right direction.
“A step in the right direction” is an automatic phrase we use often
Acknowledging my emotions and letting them exist is another improvement.I have also been working on acknowledging my emotions and becoming comfortable with them,
Also, accepting that I am human, and there is room forremembering that failingure is ok and I can always try and come back stronger is progressay as long as I don't give up.
Works well if you shorten and combine with previous sentence
For now my next step should beNext, I will applying for a corporate job and, expose myself to new challenging scenarios, and keep working ion my daily basis routine.
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Good job overall! My main correction would be to work on being as concise as possible and saying things more directly :)
Remember that longer/less direct does not mean a better, more polite, or more comprehensible sentence.
May 13, 2023
AlthoughHowever, recognizing it is another step further step in the right direction.
love to know this kind of stuff. thanks
May 13, 2023
Replying to your overall feedback, it is funny how English language can be exactly the opposite to Spanish. Less direct means being more polite. It is somewhat hard to be so direct, because Spanish avoids it. Thank you! (:
May 14, 2023
Replying to your overall feedback, it is funny how English language can be exactly the opposite to Spanish. Less direct means being more polite. It is somewhat hard to be so direct, because Spanish avoids it. Thank you! (:
Yeah of course! Sometimes changing languages requires an entirely different way of thinking. In English, formality is mostly determined by vocabulary, not grammar or sentence length. It can be a bit tricky but thankfully casual language isn't problematic in most areas of life and work so if you slip up while trying to speak formally, it isn't the end of the world.
What is one way you can measure growth and progress?
This is something I have tried to do for a while now.
It is really tough to measure anysomething with no numbers.
sorry, not sure of the rule here but you definitely want to use something rather than anything
However, some ways I have tried are being aware of how I feel in certain situations that gave me anxiety in the past.
To forgive myself for the mistakes I make, and to accept that seeking perfection is not fair.
I have been seeking out books and habits that can help me and lead me towards the things and goals (that) I have.
optional. I think what you have is good. I would use a "that" there
One thing I can say I have made progress in, and moved a little forward in, is speaking to people especially native speakers.
Trying to not avoid awkward and cringy moments where I amwill probably be nervous in.
you are talking about an event in the future, so "I will probably be" fits this situation better
I am a very introverted person and speaking another language just givemakes me more insecuritiese, but I embrace it.
introverted = adjective
"makes me insecure" is the phrase that we would use
Where I have been failing is in consistency and planning.
The fact that I have made myself being so focused on progress and put myself through it makes me feel overwhelmed.
Then, to cope allwith all of my emotions I take longer breaks thatn I should.
Although, recognizing it is another step further.
Acknowledging my emotions and letting them exist is another improvement.
Also, accepting that I am human and there is room for failing is ok and I can always try and come back stronger is progress.
For now my next step should be applying for a corporate job and expose myself to new challenging scenarios, and keep working ion my daily basis routine.
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This is something I have tried to do for a while now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This is something I have Been trying indicates a continuous process |
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It is really tough to measure anything with no numbers. It is really tough to measure sorry, not sure of the rule here but you definitely want to use something rather than anything It is really tough to measure Fun fact: data without numbers (ex. Colors) is “qualitative” while data with numbers (ex. Height) is “quantitative” |
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However, some ways I have tried are being aware of how I feel in certain situations that gave me anxiety in the past. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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To forgive myself for the mistakes I make, and to accept that seeking perfection is not fair. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I have been seeking out books and habits that can help me and lead me towards the things and goals I have. I have been seeking out books and habits that can help me and lead me towards the things and goals (that) I have. optional. I think what you have is good. I would use a "that" there I have been seeking out books and habits that can |
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One thing I can say I have made progress and moved a little forward is speaking to people specially native speakers. One thing I can say I have made progress in, and moved a little forward in, is speaking to people especially native speakers. One thing I can say I have |
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Trying to not avoid awkward and cringy moments where I am probably be nervous in. Trying to not avoid awkward and cringy moments where I you are talking about an event in the future, so "I will probably be" fits this situation better
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I am a very introvert person and speaking another language just give me more insecurities, but I embrace it. I am a very introverted person and speaking another language just introverted = adjective "makes me insecure" is the phrase that we would use I am a very introverted person and am insecure about speaking Me too dude, speaking is so difficult and it feels embarrassing for no reason 🥲 |
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Where I have been failing is in consistency and planning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The fact that I have made myself being so focused on progress and put myself through it makes me feel overwhelmed. The fact that I have made myself be
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Then, to cope all my emotions I take longer break that I should. Then, to cope Then, to cope with all my emotions, I take longer breaks tha |
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Although, recognizing it is another step further. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
“A step in the right direction” is an automatic phrase we use often |
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Acknowledging my emotions and letting them exist is another improvement. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Also, accepting that I am human and there is room for failing is ok and I can always try and come back stronger is progress. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Works well if you shorten and combine with previous sentence |
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For now my next step should be applying for a corporate job and expose myself to new challenging scenarios, and keep working in my daily basis routine. For now my next step should be applying for a corporate job and expose myself to new challenging scenarios, and keep working
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