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What is my favorite TV show?

I love the drama named “ミステリーという勿れ”. The original is manga.

It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hair and love curry rice.

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he solved a lot of cases.

He is not good at reading between the lines.

A main character name is “Totonou Kunou”. and then, the main character was played by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.


私はミステリーという勿れというドラマが大好きです。原作はマンガです。

それは2022年の1月〜3月にテレビで放送され、2023年に映画化されました。

主人公は天然パーマのアフロヘアで、カレーライスが大好きな大学生です。

彼は多くの知識や独自の価値観を持っており、たくさんの事件を解決しました。
彼は空気を読むのが苦手です。

主人公の名前は「久能整」です。そして、その主人公を日本の俳優「菅田将暉」が演じました。

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What iIs mMy fFavorite TV show?

I love the drama named “ミステリーという勿れ”.

The original is manga.

It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hair and love s curry rice.

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he solved a lot of cases.

He is not good at reading between the lines.

Another main character's name is “Totonou Kunou”.

and theIn addition, the main character was played by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.

The original isIt's based on a manga.

You could say "the original work was a manga" but it's more natural to say "It's based on a manga"

It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hairhair (that they style in an afro) and love s curry rice.

An "afro" is a specific hairstyle that requires specific effort, so you wouldn't say someone has naturally afro hair.

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he has solved a lot of cases.

AThe main character's name is “Totonou Kunou”.

Since you're talking about a specific, previously mentioned character, you'd use "the" rather than "a".

and then, (the main character / he) was played by the Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.

It would be more natural to just use a pronoun like "he" rather than repeat "the main character" so soon after mentioning it for the first time.

What is my favorite TV show?

I love the drama named “ミステリーという勿れ”.

The original is a manga.

Or: It's originally a manga.
Or: It's based on a manga.

It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hair and love s curry rice.

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he solved s a lot of cases.

He is not good at reading between the lines.

AThe main character's name is “Totonou Kunou”.

and then, the main character was pl's played (or portrayed) by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.

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Well done!

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Thank you so much 😊

What is my favorite TV show?

I love the drama named “ミステリーという勿れ”.

The original isIt was adapted from a manga.

You could say "It was originally a manga" as well

It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

No comma needed between the month and the year

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hair and love s curry rice.

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he has solved a lot of cases.

Past perfect tense feels like it fits best here

He is not good at reading between the lines.

AThe main character's name is “Totonou Kunou”.

If you write "a" it seems like you're introducing a different main character instead of the one you've been talking about before this point. Instead you should use "the" to indicate that you are referring to something previously mentioned.

Since the name belongs to someone, you should use the possessive apostrophe

and then, the main character was played by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.

This feels most natural if you combine the two sentences and connect them with "and". The full sentence would then be 'The main character's name is “Totonou Kunou” and he was played by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.'

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I haven't heard of this show, I'll have to look it up.

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Thank you for correcting me.😊

If you have a chance, I’d like you to watch the drama.

The main character is very cute.

What is my favorite TV show?

I love the drama namcalled “ミステリーという勿れ”.

"named" works, but I think "called" sounds more natural.

The original is a manga.

Another way to write this sentence: "It is based on a manga."

It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

The main character is a university student who has a naturally curly afro hair and love s curry rice.

You don't need to specify "afro" with "hair", you can just say an "afro".

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he has solved a lot of cases.

He is not good at reading between the linesthe room.

「空気を読む」 is generally translated as "read the room".

AThe main character's name is Totonou Kunou.

You don't need to put the name in quotations.

and thenAlso, the main character was played by Japanese actor Masaki Suda.

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I've seen the manga cover before, but I've never read it or watched the show. It sounds interesting!

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Thank you for correcting and teaching me another phrase.

If you have a chance, I’d like you to watch the drama.

What is my favorite TV show?


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What iIs mMy fFavorite TV show?

I love the drama named “ミステリーという勿れ”.


I love the drama namcalled “ミステリーという勿れ”.

"named" works, but I think "called" sounds more natural.

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The original is manga.


The original is a manga.

Another way to write this sentence: "It is based on a manga."

The original isIt was adapted from a manga.

You could say "It was originally a manga" as well

The original is a manga.

Or: It's originally a manga. Or: It's based on a manga.

The original isIt's based on a manga.

You could say "the original work was a manga" but it's more natural to say "It's based on a manga"

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It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.


It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

No comma needed between the month and the year

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It was broadcast on TV from January to March, 2022, and after that, it was made into a movie in 2023.

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The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hair and love curry rice.


The main character is a university student who has a naturally curly afro hair and love s curry rice.

You don't need to specify "afro" with "hair", you can just say an "afro".

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hair and love s curry rice.

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hair and love s curry rice.

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hairhair (that they style in an afro) and love s curry rice.

An "afro" is a specific hairstyle that requires specific effort, so you wouldn't say someone has naturally afro hair.

The main character is a university student who has naturally curly afro hair and love s curry rice.

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he solved a lot of cases.


He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he has solved a lot of cases.

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he has solved a lot of cases.

Past perfect tense feels like it fits best here

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he solved s a lot of cases.

He has a lot of knowledge and unique values, and he has solved a lot of cases.

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He is not good at reading between the lines.


He is not good at reading between the linesthe room.

「空気を読む」 is generally translated as "read the room".

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A main character name is “Totonou Kunou”.


AThe main character's name is Totonou Kunou.

You don't need to put the name in quotations.

AThe main character's name is “Totonou Kunou”.

If you write "a" it seems like you're introducing a different main character instead of the one you've been talking about before this point. Instead you should use "the" to indicate that you are referring to something previously mentioned. Since the name belongs to someone, you should use the possessive apostrophe

AThe main character's name is “Totonou Kunou”.

AThe main character's name is “Totonou Kunou”.

Since you're talking about a specific, previously mentioned character, you'd use "the" rather than "a".

Another main character's name is “Totonou Kunou”.

and then, the main character was played by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.


and thenAlso, the main character was played by Japanese actor Masaki Suda.

and then, the main character was played by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.

This feels most natural if you combine the two sentences and connect them with "and". The full sentence would then be 'The main character's name is “Totonou Kunou” and he was played by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.'

and then, the main character was pl's played (or portrayed) by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.

and then, (the main character / he) was played by the Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.

It would be more natural to just use a pronoun like "he" rather than repeat "the main character" so soon after mentioning it for the first time.

and theIn addition, the main character was played by Japanese actor “Masaki Suda”.

love the drama named “ミステリーという勿れ”.


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