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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

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what is my favorite animal, and why?

Since I was a kid, I've always wanted to have a dog, because I had a nintendo game that was based on taking care of a golden retriever. He was so loyal and loving. Moreover, I know lot of people who have dogs and they are really happy with them.
However, I began to love cats 4 years ago, because my girlfriend has to of them and they are adorable. I feel like their cats are mine too, and their independence make easier to take care of them, so I don't know what I will do in the future.

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Since I was a kid, I've always wanted to have a dog, because I had a nintendo game that was based on taking care of a golden retriever.

A comma isn't usually needed before "because."

However, I began to love cats 4 years ago, because my girlfriend has two of them, and they are adorable.

what is my favorite animal, and why?


Since I was a kid, I've always wanted to have a dog, because I had a nintendo game that was based on taking care of a golden retriever.


Since I was a kid, I've always wanted to have a dog, because I had a nintendo game that was based on taking care of a golden retriever.

A comma isn't usually needed before "because."

He was so loyal and loving.


Moreover, I know lot of people who have dogs and they are really happy with them.


However, I began to love cats 4 years ago, because my girlfriend has to of them and they are adorable.


However, I began to love cats 4 years ago, because my girlfriend has two of them, and they are adorable.

I feel like their cats are mine too, and their independence make easier to take care of them, so I don't know what I will do in the future.


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