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alexwong2164

Oct. 23, 2020

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What is a Beer?

Beer fans?

I don’t like it but I drink a lot!

Especially in the case of having dinner with colleagues.

We usually drink 4~5 bottles per person.

Today l has learned Japan government’s definition of beer.

If the content contains more 50% of wheat that is a beer.

What if less than 50%?

Still can it as a beer.

What the heck?

You can understand that above 50% (wheat) will call “real” beer.

Below 50% will call third kind of beer?

Don’t ask me why the 3rd.

As government standard the difference between these two drinks will be the tax rate.

So, may I ask now will you like drink a real beer or 3rd beer?

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Especially in the case ofwhen I'm having dinner with colleagues.

We usually drink 4~-5 bottles per person.

In English, the ~ symbol usually means around, or roughly. EG: I had around 3 beers = I had ~3 beers. When you want to say, 4 to 5 drinks, we use - instead.

Today l has learned Japan government’s definition of beer.

If the content contains more 50% of wheatis 50% or more wheat, then that is a beer.

What if it is less than 50%?

SThey still can it as a beer.

You can understand that above 50% (wheat) will call is a “real” beer.

But below 50% willis called the "third kind" of beer?.

Don’t ask me why it is called the 3third.

AsDue to the government standards, the difference between these two drinks will beis the tax rate.

So, may I ask you now, willould you like to drink a real beer or 3rd beer?

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Your point came across very clearly, it was just a matter of sounding more natural. I personally don't drink beer very often (prefer wine), but I imagine the real beer would be better.

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alexwong2164

Oct. 23, 2020

0

thanks

What is a Beer?


Beer fans?


I don’t like it but I drink a lot!


Especially in the case of having dinner with colleagues.


Especially in the case ofwhen I'm having dinner with colleagues.

We usually drink 4~5 bottles per person.


We usually drink 4~-5 bottles per person.

In English, the ~ symbol usually means around, or roughly. EG: I had around 3 beers = I had ~3 beers. When you want to say, 4 to 5 drinks, we use - instead.

Today l has learned Japan government’s definition of beer.


Today l has learned Japan government’s definition of beer.

If the content contains more 50% of wheat that is a beer.


If the content contains more 50% of wheatis 50% or more wheat, then that is a beer.

What if less than 50%?


What if it is less than 50%?

Still can it as a beer.


SThey still can it as a beer.

What the heck?


You can understand that above 50% (wheat) will call “real” beer.


You can understand that above 50% (wheat) will call is a “real” beer.

Below 50% will call third kind of beer?


But below 50% willis called the "third kind" of beer?.

Don’t ask me why the 3rd.


Don’t ask me why it is called the 3third.

As government standard the difference between these two drinks will be the tax rate.


AsDue to the government standards, the difference between these two drinks will beis the tax rate.

So, may I ask now will you like drink a real beer or 3rd beer?


So, may I ask you now, willould you like to drink a real beer or 3rd beer?

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