Oct. 27, 2021
What if I am pregnant?
If I’m pregnant, my whole family would be so excited, especially my mom.
My period wasn’t regular since it came at the first time. The situation had been disturbed me for many years until I got married last August.
I think most women may feel uncomfortable and desperate to the period, but not for me. If my period comes, I would be so cheerful about it.
My period has came regularly for a year, it means the opportunity of pregnant is high.
Even though I’m anxious to be a mother, I understand I won’t regret having a baby because
he/she would be loved by many people. They would help me raise him/her up.
如果我懷孕了，我所有的家人都會很興奮，尤其是我媽。自從我的生理期第一次來，就一直不規律。這個情況一直困擾我很多年，直到去年八月結婚。我想大多數女生生理期來會覺得不舒服和感到挫折，但我可不。如果我的生理期來了，我會很雀躍。我的生理期規律了一年多了，這表示我受孕的機會就高了。儘管我對於成為媽媽感到焦慮，我知道我將不會後悔有了孩子，因為他/她會被很多人疼愛著。他們會協助我將他/她扶養長大。
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Good job!
Having a child is not an easy decision. It's expensive and time consuming to raise a child. It's great that you have a good family to help you once it happens!
Oct. 29, 2021
Thanks, I understand it. That’s why I’m still hesitate to have one.XD
What if I am pregnant?
If I’m became pregnant, my whole family would be so excited, especially my mom.
My period whasn’t't been regular since it came at the first time.
The situation had been disturbed me for many years until I got married last August.
You do not need "had been" here
I think most women may feel uncomfortable and desperate to get their period, but not for me.
If my period coames, I would be so cheerful about it.
My period has caome regularly for a year, itwhich means the opportunity ofto become pregnant is highpresent.
Even though I’m anxious to benervous about being a mother, I understand I won’t regret having a baby because
"Anxious to be a mother" usually means you are excited to be a mother.
he/she would be loved by many people.
They would help me raise him/her up.
No need for "up" when talking about raising a child.
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Your English is good, especially your spelling. You just need to work on some of the tenses and prepositions. Good work!
Oct. 28, 2021
Thanks for your correction and compliment!
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