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666coolboy

May 9, 2022

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What ideas are given too much unnecessary attention in your

For now, I am more peaceful than before and I don’t have a lot of unnecessary attention in my mind, but I would like to share something for reference.

The most unnecessary attention is the grand narrative like I want to change the world or change the society and so on. Our strong mindset may destroy us even if a lot of great people has been benefit from it because we will feel lost and powerless if we don’t know and act in unison. I do know a lot of people encourage we have a strong mindset and it can inspire us working hard continously but they don’t consider those people who cannot bear the strong mindset.

For example, I have a friend who is called Jingsong is suffering this pain. He think there are too many people who are in first-class don’t care others and are the heartless rich. They have power but they just do things for themselves. He wants to change the world and make those poor people have better life. However, he is sad and frustrated. He said:” I would like to change the world but I will go to work for living day by day. How can I achieve my dream and make the country better? The gap between dream and reality hurt him and it is crucial.

We all have to experience this feeling because we often have a big dream when we are child. And I can tell someone cannot skip the logical pool and feel pain because they pay a lot of attention in stuff which have distance with his lfie. A teacher’s saying matched my thinking and made my impressive:” When I am very young, I want to change the world. When I am adult, I want to change the country. When I am middle-aged, I want to change my family. When I am old, I realize I can’t change everything except myself. What if I want to change myself as my starting point when I am a kid. Maybe I will change the world.”

He points out we should set a sample mindset and it maybe better for most people.Overall, I just want to share this experience from my personal one-sided. I hope it can give you some inspiration and you are doing well.

Thank you for reading. Have a nice day!

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What ideas are given too much unnecessary attention in your

For now, I am more peaceful than before and I don’t have a lot of unnecessary attention ion my mind, but I would like to share something for reference.

The most unnecessary attentiongoal is the grand narrative likethat I want to change the world or change the society and so on.

Our strong mindset may destroy us even if a lot of great people has beenve benefited from it because we will feel lost and powerless if we don’t know and act in unison.

I do know a lot of people encourage weus to have a strong mindset and it can inspire us working hard continuously but they don’t consider those people who cannot bear thea strong mindset.

For example, I have a friend who is called Jingsong who is suffering this pain.

He thinks there are too many people who are in first-class and don’t care others andabout others. They are the heartless richupper class(first class).

They have power, but they just do things for themselves.

He wants to change the world and makgive those poor people havea better life.

However, he is sad and frustrated.

He said: "I would like to change the world, but I will go to work for a living day by day.

How can I achieve my dream and make the country better?

The gap between his dream and reality hurt him and it is crucial.

We all have to experience this feeling because we often have a big dream when we are children.

And I can tell you that someone cannot skip the logical poolmindset and feel pain because they pay a lot of attention in stuff which have distance with his lfie.are preoccupied with things that are distant from their lives

Meaning is a little unclear.

A teacher’s saying matched my thinking and made myleft a lasting impressive:” on: ”When I am very young, I want to change the world.

When I am an adult, I want to change the country.

When I am middle-aged, I want to change my family.

When I am old, I realize I can’t change everything except myself.

What if I want to change myself asfrom my starting point when I am a kid.?

Maybe then I will change the world.”

He points out we should setestablish a saimple mindset and it maybe better for most people. Overall, I just want to share this experience from my personal one-sidedexperience.

I hope it can give you some inspiration and you are doing well.

Thank you for reading.

Have a nice day!

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666coolboy

May 10, 2022

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Thank you for editing!

What ideas are given too much unnecessary attention in your opinion?

I think you left out the last part of your sentence, not sure if opinion is what you wanted to say though.

For now, I am more at peaceful than before and I don’t have a lot of unnecessary attentionthoughts in my mind, but I would like to share something for reference.

The most unnecessary attention is the grand narrativeseless kind of goals to focus on are grand ideas like I wanting to change the world or change the society and so on, society, or things like that.

I'm not really sure what you mean by "unnecessary attention", took a guess.

OurA strong mindset may destroy us even if a lot of great people has beecan benefit from it, because we will feel lost and powerless if we don’t know and act in unison.

The grammar is fine, but I am really lost on the meaning, sorry.

I do know that a lot of people encourage we havehaving a strong mindset, and it can inspire us working hardto continuously work hard, but theyat don’tesn't take into consideration those people who cannot bear the stronghaving such a mindset.

For example, I have a friend who is called, Jingsong, who is suffering from this pain.

He thinks there are too many people who are in first-class citizens that don’t care for others and are the heartlessly rich.

They have power, but they justonly do things for themselves.

He wants to change the world and makelet those poor people have a better life.

He said:” , ”I would like to change the world, but I will goneed to work for a living day bevery day.

The gap between his dream and reality hurts him and ithis is crucial.

We all have to experience this feeling because we often have a big dreams when we are children.

And I can tell someonthat people cannot skip the logical pool and feel pain because they pay a lot of attention in stuff which have distance with his lfito things distanced from their life.

Not sure what "skip the logical pool and feel pain" is suppose to mean, so I left it alone. Overall pretty confused on what you're trying to say here.

AOne teacher’s saying matched my thinking and made my impressive:” words corresponded with my thoughts and impressed me. They said, ”When I am very young, I want to change the world.

When I am old, I realize I can’t change everanything except myself.

What if I had wanted to change myself as my starting point when I amwas a kid.?

Maybe I willould have changed the world.”

He points out that we should set a saimple mindset and itgoal, which may be better for most people. Overall, I just wanted to share this experience from my personal one-sidedexperience.

Not really sure what "sample mindset" is suppose to mean, took a guess.

I hope ithis can give you some inspiration and that you are doing well.

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I think I got the gist of what you were trying to say at the end, but I don't think "strong mindset", or even "mindset", is the best word choice. It sounded like you were talking about people setting unrealistic goals, and then being disappointed when those goals couldn't come true, which doesn't really have much to do with "mindset" in my opinion. Perhaps that's due to a different understanding of what "mindset" means...?

The teacher's quote was a nice touch, and certainly something to think about. Overall a quite interesting read.

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666coolboy

May 10, 2022

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Thank you for editing and encouraging, knight!

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666coolboy

May 10, 2022

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The meaning of "mindset" here is that maybe you have lofty ideals, and a lot of great people achieve great things with lofty ideals. I didn't distinguish the meaning. Overall, thank you!

What ideas are given too much unnecessary attention in your


What ideas are given too much unnecessary attention in your opinion?

I think you left out the last part of your sentence, not sure if opinion is what you wanted to say though.

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For now, I am more peaceful than before and I don’t have a lot of unnecessary attention in my mind, but I would like to share something for reference.


For now, I am more at peaceful than before and I don’t have a lot of unnecessary attentionthoughts in my mind, but I would like to share something for reference.

For now, I am more peaceful than before and I don’t have a lot of unnecessary attention ion my mind, but I would like to share something for reference.

The most unnecessary attention is the grand narrative like I want to change the world or change the society and so on.


The most unnecessary attention is the grand narrativeseless kind of goals to focus on are grand ideas like I wanting to change the world or change the society and so on, society, or things like that.

I'm not really sure what you mean by "unnecessary attention", took a guess.

The most unnecessary attentiongoal is the grand narrative likethat I want to change the world or change the society and so on.

Our strong mindset may destroy us even if a lot of great people has been benefit from it because we will feel lost and powerless if we don’t know and act in unison.


OurA strong mindset may destroy us even if a lot of great people has beecan benefit from it, because we will feel lost and powerless if we don’t know and act in unison.

The grammar is fine, but I am really lost on the meaning, sorry.

Our strong mindset may destroy us even if a lot of great people has beenve benefited from it because we will feel lost and powerless if we don’t know and act in unison.

I do know a lot of people encourage we have a strong mindset and it can inspire us working hard continously but they don’t consider those people who cannot bear the strong mindset.


I do know that a lot of people encourage we havehaving a strong mindset, and it can inspire us working hardto continuously work hard, but theyat don’tesn't take into consideration those people who cannot bear the stronghaving such a mindset.

I do know a lot of people encourage weus to have a strong mindset and it can inspire us working hard continuously but they don’t consider those people who cannot bear thea strong mindset.

For example, I have a friend who is called Jingsong is suffering this pain.


For example, I have a friend who is called, Jingsong, who is suffering from this pain.

For example, I have a friend who is called Jingsong who is suffering this pain.

He think there are too many people who are in first-class don’t care others and are the heartless rich.


He thinks there are too many people who are in first-class citizens that don’t care for others and are the heartlessly rich.

He thinks there are too many people who are in first-class and don’t care others andabout others. They are the heartless richupper class(first class).

They have power but they just do things for themselves.


They have power, but they justonly do things for themselves.

They have power, but they just do things for themselves.

He wants to change the world and make those poor people have better life.


He wants to change the world and makelet those poor people have a better life.

He wants to change the world and makgive those poor people havea better life.

However, he is sad and frustrated.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He said:” I would like to change the world but I will go to work for living day by day.


He said:” , ”I would like to change the world, but I will goneed to work for a living day bevery day.

He said: "I would like to change the world, but I will go to work for a living day by day.

How can I achieve my dream and make the country better?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The gap between dream and reality hurt him and it is crucial.


The gap between his dream and reality hurts him and ithis is crucial.

The gap between his dream and reality hurt him and it is crucial.

We all have to experience this feeling because we often have a big dream when we are child.


We all have to experience this feeling because we often have a big dreams when we are children.

We all have to experience this feeling because we often have a big dream when we are children.

And I can tell someone cannot skip the logical pool and feel pain because they pay a lot of attention in stuff which have distance with his lfie.


And I can tell someonthat people cannot skip the logical pool and feel pain because they pay a lot of attention in stuff which have distance with his lfito things distanced from their life.

Not sure what "skip the logical pool and feel pain" is suppose to mean, so I left it alone. Overall pretty confused on what you're trying to say here.

And I can tell you that someone cannot skip the logical poolmindset and feel pain because they pay a lot of attention in stuff which have distance with his lfie.are preoccupied with things that are distant from their lives

Meaning is a little unclear.

A teacher’s saying matched my thinking and made my impressive:” When I am very young, I want to change the world.


AOne teacher’s saying matched my thinking and made my impressive:” words corresponded with my thoughts and impressed me. They said, ”When I am very young, I want to change the world.

A teacher’s saying matched my thinking and made myleft a lasting impressive:” on: ”When I am very young, I want to change the world.

When I am adult, I want to change the country.


When I am an adult, I want to change the country.

When I am middle-aged, I want to change my family.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I am old, I realize I can’t change everything except myself.


When I am old, I realize I can’t change everanything except myself.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What if I want to change myself as my starting point when I am a kid.


What if I had wanted to change myself as my starting point when I amwas a kid.?

What if I want to change myself asfrom my starting point when I am a kid.?

Maybe I will change the world.”


Maybe I willould have changed the world.”

Maybe then I will change the world.”

He points out we should set a sample mindset and it maybe better for most people.Overall, I just want to share this experience from my personal one-sided.


He points out that we should set a saimple mindset and itgoal, which may be better for most people. Overall, I just wanted to share this experience from my personal one-sidedexperience.

Not really sure what "sample mindset" is suppose to mean, took a guess.

He points out we should setestablish a saimple mindset and it maybe better for most people. Overall, I just want to share this experience from my personal one-sidedexperience.

I hope it can give you some inspiration and you are doing well.


I hope ithis can give you some inspiration and that you are doing well.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you for reading.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Have a nice day!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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