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zainab26109497

July 1, 2025

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What i wonder to be

When i was little i feel spacial like no one is like me or that i 'll something very good in futur .for this reason i have had big dreams and i was in the right way i am alwaus the first of my class because i 'm good at scientific subjects so then and suddenly i had the feeling that want to end everything and won't to keep moving on so for this reason i decided to do not study thos year i feel sorry for my self but that feeling was strong then me and now i want to cry to react for what i do but i 've lost my feelings i just keep loving normaly without feelimg guilty

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When i was little i feel spaecial like no one is like me or that i 'll do something very good in futur .fe. For this reason i have had big dreams and i was in the right way i am alwauys the first of my class because i 'm good at scientific subjects so then and suddenly i had the feeling that want to end everything and won't to keep moving on so for this reason i decided to do not study those year i feel sorry for my self but that feeling was strong then me and now i want to cry to react for what i do but i 've lost my feelings i just keep loving normally without feelimng guilty.

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When iI was little i, I feelt spaecial, like no one is like me or that i 'lllike I'll do something very good in the futur .fe. For this reason i, I have had big dreams and i wasI have gone in the right way i. I am alwauys the first ofin my class because i I'm good at scientific subjects so then and suddenly i had the. Suddenly, I feeling that I want to end everything and won't to keepinstead of moving on, so for this reason iI decided to do not study thois year i. I feel sorry for my self, but thatis feeling was stronger thean me and now i want to cry to react for what i do. Now my reaction is to cry, but i I've lost my feelings i, so I just keep loiving normally without feelimng guilty.

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You are including details in your writing and your message is easy to understand. I am sorry that you're going through this. I hope you have someone to talk to offline, and I hope to see you improving in your English skills here! I would try to make sure you put a period after each complete thought.

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When iI was little i, I feelt spaecial, like no one ielse was like me or that i 'll something very good in futur .for this reason i have. I felt like I had a very bright future ahead of me. Due to this, I had big dreams and iI was headed in the right way i amdirection. I was alwauys at the firsttop of my class because i I'm good at scientific subjects so then and suddenly i had the feeling that. Then, suddenly, I felt like I wanted to endstop doing everything and won't to keep moving on so for this reason i decided to do not. Because of that feeling, I decided not to study thois year i. I feel sorry for my self but that feelt bad about doing nothing, but the urge to do nothing was stronger thean me and now iy willpower. Afterwards, I wanted to cry to react for what i do but i 've lost my feelings ibecause of how much I fell behind, but now I feel better, and I will just keep loiving normally without feelimng guilty.

What i wonder to be

When i was little i feel spacial like no one is like me or that i 'll something very good in futur .for this reason i have had big dreams and i was in the right way i am alwaus the first of my class because i 'm good at scientific subjects so then and suddenly i had the feeling that want to end everything and won't to keep moving on so for this reason i decided to do not study thos year i feel sorry for my self but that feeling was strong then me and now i want to cry to react for what i do but i 've lost my feelings i just keep loving normaly without feelimg guilty

When iI was little i, I feelt spaecial, like no one ielse was like me or that i 'll something very good in futur .for this reason i have. I felt like I had a very bright future ahead of me. Due to this, I had big dreams and iI was headed in the right way i amdirection. I was alwauys at the firsttop of my class because i I'm good at scientific subjects so then and suddenly i had the feeling that. Then, suddenly, I felt like I wanted to endstop doing everything and won't to keep moving on so for this reason i decided to do not. Because of that feeling, I decided not to study thois year i. I feel sorry for my self but that feelt bad about doing nothing, but the urge to do nothing was stronger thean me and now iy willpower. Afterwards, I wanted to cry to react for what i do but i 've lost my feelings ibecause of how much I fell behind, but now I feel better, and I will just keep loiving normally without feelimng guilty.

When iI was little i, I feelt spaecial, like no one is like me or that i 'lllike I'll do something very good in the futur .fe. For this reason i, I have had big dreams and i wasI have gone in the right way i. I am alwauys the first ofin my class because i I'm good at scientific subjects so then and suddenly i had the. Suddenly, I feeling that I want to end everything and won't to keepinstead of moving on, so for this reason iI decided to do not study thois year i. I feel sorry for my self, but thatis feeling was stronger thean me and now i want to cry to react for what i do. Now my reaction is to cry, but i I've lost my feelings i, so I just keep loiving normally without feelimng guilty.

Various corrections, mostly due to grammar

When i was little i feel spaecial like no one is like me or that i 'll do something very good in futur .fe. For this reason i have had big dreams and i was in the right way i am alwauys the first of my class because i 'm good at scientific subjects so then and suddenly i had the feeling that want to end everything and won't to keep moving on so for this reason i decided to do not study those year i feel sorry for my self but that feeling was strong then me and now i want to cry to react for what i do but i 've lost my feelings i just keep loving normally without feelimng guilty.

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