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kyoko

Nov. 6, 2019

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What I think about this website

I’ve posted some journals and some people gave me corrections.
Thank you very much🙏🏻
Now I feel like I go to a school and teachers help me with my study!
I’ll keep on enjoying studying and making progress in my English.
Also I’ll keep on make an effort to help people learning Japanese :)

Corrections

Now I feel like I go to a'm in school and teachers are helping me with my study! ies!

Sounds a bit more natural. You can also say going to school instead of in school.

Also I’ll keep on make an effort to help people learning Japanese :)

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kyoko

Nov. 9, 2019

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Thank you so much for correction!

What I think about this website

I’ve posted some journals and someeveral people gave me corrections.

It's better if you do not repeat some (ex: some.... some... )

Thank you very much🙏🏻

Now I feel like I goa student going to a school andwhere teachers help me with my study!

This is more natural

I’ll keep oncontinue to enjoying studying and making progress in my English.

You don't have to say my English here because we know it's your English.

Also I’ll keep on makeing an effort to help people learning Japanese :)

Feedback

Thank you so much for the positive feedback Kyoko! :)

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kyoko

Nov. 7, 2019

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Thank you so much for correction and your clear explanation!
It helps me a lot🙏🏻
Indeed this website reminds me when I was a university student and did my English journal homework! That is one of my wonderful memories 😊

What I think about this website

I’ve posted some journals and some people gave me corrections.

Thank you very much🙏🏻

Now I feel like I go to a school andwhere teachers help me with my study!

I’ll keep on enjoying studying and making progress in my English.

Also I’ll keep on makeing an effort to help people learning Japanese :)

kyoko's avatar
kyoko

Nov. 6, 2019

0

Thank you so much!

What I think about this website


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’ve posted some journals and some people gave me corrections.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’ve posted some journals and someeveral people gave me corrections.

It's better if you do not repeat some (ex: some.... some... )

Thank you very much🙏🏻


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I feel like I go to a school and teachers help me with my study!


Now I feel like I go to a school andwhere teachers help me with my study!

Now I feel like I goa student going to a school andwhere teachers help me with my study!

This is more natural

Now I feel like I go to a'm in school and teachers are helping me with my study! ies!

Sounds a bit more natural. You can also say going to school instead of in school.

I’ll keep on enjoying studying and making progress in my English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’ll keep oncontinue to enjoying studying and making progress in my English.

You don't have to say my English here because we know it's your English.

Also I’ll keep on make an effort to help people learning Japanese :)


Also I’ll keep on makeing an effort to help people learning Japanese :)

Also I’ll keep on makeing an effort to help people learning Japanese :)

Also I’ll keep on make an effort to help people learning Japanese :)

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