May 6, 2020
When I have stress, I try to not think about the situation that makes me stressed. It is not as easy as I said. I try to distract myself with another things. Like: Listening to music or watching Tarantino's movies ( it works).
I know, that it means, I'm escaping from reality and I don't want to face with naked facts, that I know. but the goal is forgetting the whole things, that get me stress. I forget anything.
WHere's what I do when I'm stressed out.
When I have stress, I try to not think about the situationthings that makescause me stressed.
It is not as easy as I said.
The other commenter's suggestions are what I'd recommend too. "That's easier said than done."
I try to distract myself with another things like listening to music, or watching Tarantino's movies. These things work for me.
Like: Listening to music or watching Tarantino's movies ( it works).
I know, that it means, I'm's escaping from reality and I don't want to face with naked facts, that I know, that I'm avoiding facing reality by doing these things, but ...
but the goal is to forgetting the whole things, that get me stressstress me out.
I can forget anything.
I'm not sure what you were trying to say here. I'm not sure my suggestion conveys what you were thinking.
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Good work! Keep it up!
It i's not as easy as I saidit sounds // It's easier said than done.
These sound more natural.
When I haveam stressed, I try to not to think about the situation that's makesing me stressed.
It is not as easy as I saidit sounds.
I try to distract myself with another things.,
Llike: L listening to music, or watching Tarantino's movies ( it works).
I know, that it means, I'm escaping from reality and I don't want to face withe naked facts, that I know.
bBut the goal is to forgetting the whole everythings, that getmakes me stressed.
I forget aneverything.
I'm not exactly sure what is meant by this sentence. "I forget anything" doesn't really make sense. I don't think you need this sentence at all.
What I do when I'm stressed out.
When I haveam stressed, I try to not think about the situation that makes me stressed.
"When I have stress" is grammatically correct but it sounds awkward.
It is not as easy as I saidThis is easier said than done.
Once again, this sentence is grammatically correct but sounds strange to native speakers. "This is easier said than done" uses a common phrase that is easily understood.
I try to distract myself with another things.
"another things" is incorrect because another is a singular pronoun while things is a plural noun. This sentence should also be merged with the next sentence in order to make the journal flow more easily
Llike: L listening to music or watching Tarantino's movies ( it works).
The colon is not necessary in this sentence since you are only making a list with two items. Listening does not need to be capitalized as it is not the first word of a sentence or a proper noun.
I know, that it means, I'm escaping from reality and I don't want to face with naked facts, that I know.
The commas after know and means are not necessary because "that it means" is not an appositive. "that I know" is redundant as you have already stated previously in the sentence "I know that it means"
but the goal is to forgetting the whole things, that get me stressstress me out.
This sentence should be merged with the previous sentence using a comma in order to make the journal flow more easily. "is forgetting" is grammatically correct but may sound strange to someone native English. The word whole is not necessary in the sentence. The comma should not be included in the phrase because there is nothing that needs to be separated. The final portion of the sentence "that get me stress" should be reworded in order to be more clear.
I forget anything.
I'm not entirely sure what this sentence is trying to add and I would personally remove it. It is grammatically correct but doesn't make much sense contextualized.
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Not bad overall, most of the errors are semantic or wording issues. There were a few minor grammatical issues but I was still able to understand what you were trying to say for the most part.
When I haveam stressed, I try to not think about the situation that makes me stressed.¶
Being stressed is a better choice of word than having stress
It is not as easy as I saidit seems.
I try to distract myself with another things.
Like: Listening to music or watching Tarantino's movies ( it works).
I know, that it meanby doing this, I'm escaping from the reality and that I don't want to face with naked facts, that I know.facts.
“That I know” at the end is kind of awkward
but the goal is forgetting the whole things, that givet me stress.
Give is the correct word instead of get
I forget aneverything.
Anything in this case means I can forget a specific thing, which I don’t think was what you wanted to say
What I do when I'm stressed out.
When I haveam stressed, I try to not think about the situation that makesis making me stressed.
I try to distract myself with another things.
Llike: L listening to music or watching Tarantino's movies ( it works).
I know, that it means, I'm escaping from reality and I don't want to face with naked facts, that I know.
The "that I know" at the end was a bit of redundant because of the beginning of the sentence.
but the goal is forgetting the whole things, that getcause me stress.
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It is not as easy as I said. It is not as easy as
Once again, this sentence is grammatically correct but sounds strange to native speakers. "This is easier said than done" uses a common phrase that is easily understood. It is not as easy as It These sound more natural.
The other commenter's suggestions are what I'd recommend too. "That's easier said than done." |
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I try to distract myself with another things. I try to distract myself with I try to distract myself with I try to distract myself with "another things" is incorrect because another is a singular pronoun while things is a plural noun. This sentence should also be merged with the next sentence in order to make the journal flow more easily I try to distract myself with I try to distract myself with |
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Like: Listening to music or watching Tarantino's movies ( it works).
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The colon is not necessary in this sentence since you are only making a list with two items. Listening does not need to be capitalized as it is not the first word of a sentence or a proper noun.
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I know, that it means, I'm escaping from reality and I don't want to face with naked facts, that I know. I know The "that I know" at the end was a bit of redundant because of the beginning of the sentence. I know “That I know” at the end is kind of awkward I know The commas after know and means are not necessary because "that it means" is not an appositive. "that I know" is redundant as you have already stated previously in the sentence "I know that it means" I know I know, that it |
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but the goal is forgetting the whole things, that get me stress. but the goal is forgetting the but the goal is forgetting Give is the correct word instead of get but the goal is to forget This sentence should be merged with the previous sentence using a comma in order to make the journal flow more easily. "is forgetting" is grammatically correct but may sound strange to someone native English. The word whole is not necessary in the sentence. The comma should not be included in the phrase because there is nothing that needs to be separated. The final portion of the sentence "that get me stress" should be reworded in order to be more clear.
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I forget anything. I forget Anything in this case means I can forget a specific thing, which I don’t think was what you wanted to say
I'm not entirely sure what this sentence is trying to add and I would personally remove it. It is grammatically correct but doesn't make much sense contextualized. I forget I'm not exactly sure what is meant by this sentence. "I forget anything" doesn't really make sense. I don't think you need this sentence at all. I can forget anything. I'm not sure what you were trying to say here. I'm not sure my suggestion conveys what you were thinking. |
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